[OOC] The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis

[knighthawk]

@Lord Wraith
Is there an appeal process to fix what is wrong?

[Dirge]

Fixed some things up, added a skills section and spruced up the motivation section. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be done.

[Nemaisare]

My first post is feeling exceptionally boring. Yay. But I think I'm halfway through. I'm not sure I've got a reason for him to react to David, but I'm hoping going after him immediately isn't necessary.

[Lord Wraith]

My first post is feeling exceptionally boring. Yay. But I think I'm halfway through. I'm not sure I've got a reason for him to react to David, but I'm hoping going after him immediately isn't necessary.

@Nemaisare

Nope it's not. Feel free to build to it over a couple posts.

Fixed some things up, added a skills section and spruced up the motivation section. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be done.

@Dirge

You're still missing one teeny tiny thing that would belong in your notes section. Not sure if you forgot it because it sounded like you realized what it was earlier.

@Lord Wraith
Is there an appeal process to fix what is wrong?

@knighthawk

Unfortunately as I stated before in order to stick within the original amount of slots that the RP is tailored for, not everyone was going to make it through the character reviews. As much as I liked the concept of your character, the spelling, punctuation and grammatical error were too numerous to over look in your CS. Furthermore they were consistent in your provided sample.

I do thank you both for applying and for your patience but I'm afraid we do have to stay firm on that declination.

[Dirge]

@Lord WraithWhaaaaaaaat? What are you talking about???? I remembered!!!! Are you kidding me? Of course I remembered.... Haha...

[Tojin]

O-kay! I've added a bit more meat onto my previously bare-bones sheet, and added the thing that Dirge totally didn't forget. ;) If this isn't enough to get me accepted, please let me know what needs to be fixed so I can fix it post-haste!

[Heathen]

I'm going to tweak my character tomorrow since I'm off. Just gonna throw in a few things to make him less passive.

[Lord Wraith]

O-kay! I've added a bit more meat onto my previously bare-bones sheet, and added the thing that Dirge totally didn't forget. ;) If this isn't enough to get me accepted, please let me know what needs to be fixed so I can fix it post-haste!

@Tojin

I really hate to do this, but as with Knighthawk I'm afraid the declination has to stick. With the other players taking their acceptances, all the predetermined slots have been filled. If any players drop out down the road I can give you a shout but for the time being I'm afraid we have no more room.

[Natty]

I'll get a post up by the end of the week! :)

Damn Wraith stole my speech colour! D:

[Lord Wraith]

I'll get a post up by the end of the week! :)

Damn Wraith stole my speech colour! D:

@Natty

I can change it haha

[Natty]

Nah it's cool! I just like to melodramatically complain about things!

[Dirge]

I'm gonna work on a post tomorrow. Kinda wanna get one out as soon as possible because Eric has to catch up a day. It was too dramatic of a point to stop the backstory on though haha

[Tojin]

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I really hate to do this, but as with Knighthawk I'm afraid the declination has to stick. With the other players taking their acceptances, all the predetermined slots have been filled. If any players drop out down the road I can give you a shout but for the time being I'm afraid we have no more room.

@Lord Wraith

Awww. That's fine, I'll just lurk for a bit until another player's needed, assuming that point comes around at all. Best of luck to you all! =)

[knighthawk]

Unfortunately as I stated before in order to stick within the original amount of slots that the RP is tailored for, not everyone was going to make it through the character reviews. As much as I liked the concept of your character, the spelling, punctuation and grammatical error were too numerous to over look in your CS. Furthermore they were consistent in your provided sample.

I do thank you both for applying and for your patience but I'm afraid we do have to stay firm on that declination.

@Lord Wraith

Hey, at least I am consistent in my disappointments. ^_~ Understood, had to hope. Let me know if there are a number of drop-outs.

[Stein]

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Hey, at least I am consistent in my disappointments. ^_~ Understood, had to hope. Let me know if there are a number of drop-outs.

@knighthawk

Well hun, I don't think that's a good sentiment to have. KH, I think you could produce some stellar work if you focused on grammar a bit and let that flourish. The number of drop outs won't really affect things much, I'm afraid. As I'm the one who did the mark-ups on the characters, I can safely say the basics had a lot to do with your decision.

I wish you the best and growth from there.

~Stein

[Stein]

Also @Lord Wraith That's soooo weird, I don't remember saying your pending character could post ICly.

[FantasyChic]

@Stein still waiting on my review of the updated sheet

[Lord Wraith]

Also @Lord Wraith That's soooo weird, I don't remember saying your pending character could post ICly.

@Stein

The power has gone to his head. Run for your lives!

[Heathen]

I went ahead and tweaked my sheet to give Skylar an actual reason to resort to crime fighting and all that jazz.

[Nemaisare]

Blargle, still working on a post, my brain is fried.