My first post is feeling exceptionally boring. Yay. But I think I'm halfway through. I'm not sure I've got a reason for him to react to David, but I'm hoping going after him immediately isn't necessary.

Fixed some things up, added a skills section and spruced up the motivation section. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be done.

@Lord Wraith
Is there an appeal process to fix what is wrong?

O-kay! I've added a bit more meat onto my previously bare-bones sheet, and added the thing that Dirge totally didn't forget. ;) If this isn't enough to get me accepted, please let me know what needs to be fixed so I can fix it post-haste!

I'll get a post up by the end of the week! :)

Damn Wraith stole my speech colour! D:

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I really hate to do this, but as with Knighthawk I'm afraid the declination has to stick. With the other players taking their acceptances, all the predetermined slots have been filled. If any players drop out down the road I can give you a shout but for the time being I'm afraid we have no more room.

Unfortunately as I stated before in order to stick within the original amount of slots that the RP is tailored for, not everyone was going to make it through the character reviews. As much as I liked the concept of your character, the spelling, punctuation and grammatical error were too numerous to over look in your CS. Furthermore they were consistent in your provided sample.

I do thank you both for applying and for your patience but I'm afraid we do have to stay firm on that declination.

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Hey, at least I am consistent in my disappointments. ^_~ Understood, had to hope. Let me know if there are a number of drop-outs.

Also @Lord Wraith That's soooo weird, I don't remember saying your pending character could post ICly.