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Primal Rage! The Before

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Primal Rage! The Before

@Lunamaria Hawke@VizRiel@Guardj How you guys doing?

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Primal Rage! The Before

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Primal Rage! The Before

Character Sheet

Name: Lotaid
Species: Mosabufosaurus
Appearance: - A stout creature much like a bipedal toad, with the powerful tail and jaws of a mosasaurus. His arms and legs are short, but powerful, with each digit tipped with short, sturdy claws. Lotaid's skin is slick and has a dark blue-green hue. (WIP)
Height/Length: 16'6"/25"
Weight: 1.25 tons
Consumption Rate: 550 lbs. a day
Lair: The Bog- A series of flooded rivers and sunken cities formed into a massive wetland chain through which Lotaid can swim. Packs of released Baryonyx prowl the open grasslands and wet forests. Lotaid makes his home in and around a sunken clock tower from the old world- the old surrounding fortresses becoming deadly submerged traps.
Affiliation: Virtuous
Domain: Trickery
Followers: 3,000
Chieftain: Geoffus the First: A simple, but principled man. He has not forgotten the old ways, and clings to the pursuit of knowledge, seeking to reclaim the lost sciences of the old Earth.
Bio: Hardly even a minor player in the Mesozoic Wars, Lotaid was content in his sealed slumber to sit and observe. Possessing a swift wit and penchant for planning unlike most DinoBeasts, the [Cunning] Lotaid found humanity intriguing. As continents sank and tectonic plates smashed together, he was released through the sea into the world once more, his unique [Vitality] allowing his [Amphibious] body to cut through the crashing, churning waves. Seeking to return humanity to its former glory for the sheer amusement of watching them, Lotaid uses his acidic powers to battle the other DinoBeasts!
RAGE-
General Combat:

• High Quick (1)Lotaid quickly punches forward. (Slightly more range in the air)
• High Fierce (2)Lotaid bites with his massive jaws. (Provides forward movement in the air)
• Low Quick (3)Lotaid whips his tail forward at foot level. (Spike style attack when in the air)
• Low Fierce (4)Lotaid arcs his tail over his head with powerful force. (No air version)
• High Power/Heavy (1+2)Lotaid bites with his full mouth, head turned sideways.
• Low Power/Heavy (3+4)Lotaid spins to strike with his tail, hitting at middle-body range.(Tail sweep when crouching)(No air version)

Primal Powers(Specials):_{(D= Down, U= Up, T=Towards, A=Away)}

• Misdirection (1-2 D, D, U) Lotaid disorients the opponent by causing them to turn around. This may cause some moves to fail, delay, or be replaced with other moves.
• Jaw Crash (2-3 T, T) Lotaid lunges a medium distance (half a screen) with teeth bared, and bites enemies at medium range.
• Acid of Confusion (1-4 A, A, T) Lotaid spits a distracting acid which does little damage, but builds stun faster.
• Wave Toss (1-4 D, U, D) Lotaid grabs an enemy at close range and tosses them in an arc overhead.
• Bog Bash (3-4 A, D, T) Lotaid slams the ground with both fists from a low posture, sending a wave of acid up around himself. This attack builds stun faster. (Anti-air)
• Sky Wave (1-4 air) Lotaid grabs the opponent and throws them straight to the ground, building stun faster.
• Vortex (1-3-4 T, A, D) Lotaid sinks into the ground and reappears at a distance. (1 screen)

Dominations:

• Skin Stealer- Lotaid temporarily assumes the form of the defeated opponent by placing a slice of skin of their face on his own, and mocks them in their own form with laughter.
• Feeding Time- Lotaid floods the area in acidic water, swimming forth to consume the fallen opponent's tenderized flesh, until only bones remain. Several Baryonyx will join in on the feeding when at The Bog.

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Primal Rage! The Before

Hey! Thanks for the submission! It's looking alright so far, except for two things, and maybe I should have had a better example beforehand, so I apologize. First, I don't see your actionable terms. Second, your basic combat is a bit mismatched. The moves should be High Quick, High Fierce, Low Quick, Low Fierce, Power High, and Power Low, or, to put it another way, light, medium, and heavy attacks from both the upper and lower body.
EDIT: Also, we might need to see more of a personality, maybe clearer goals, for the character. Also, I may have been unclear, but the followers section is primarily meant to keep track of how many you have, and upon double checking, it seems Rakkaus is significantly larger than most other DinoBeasts. Perhaps I should have made an example first, but I felt pressed for time.
@Lunamaria Hawke
EDIT 2: Also, basically everything but his quick attack description sounds more like specials.