ACHTUNG

Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

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Can we make our mind up... Is it broad or specific? I swing one way you tell me to go the other... I swing the other way you tell me to go back...

As far as inspiring imaginations and legends... Stonewall Jackson certainly did, To the point that even losing the war didn't remove the title from the modern descendants of the brigade...

I started with the want to swarm people with hundreds, perhaps thousands of little devils armed with pikes, swords and arquebuses... The ability has evolved into a more organized and better armed force equipped with rifled percussion muskets and artillery because of the changes imposed upon it by your, let's say "unpredictable" requirements.

To demonstrate how odd what you just said looks right now...

Let's take Iceborne's character, Musashi Tomoe
She's armed like a gunslinger
She fights like a gunslinger
Her concept are gunslingers
Good enough

Meanwhile My character, Aizu Aki
Is armed like the Stonewall brigade
fights like the Stonewall brigade
commands this brigade like Stonewall Jackson
has a concept now be that of Stonewall
Not Good enough apparently

Also Merry Christmas!

Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

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A magical girl that can muster an brigade sized army of herself. Armed with percussion lock rifled muskets and fighting in ordered formations to amplify firepower.

With an Archetype of the Four apostles, four 6 pounder guns with red painted carriages called Matthew, Mark, Luke and John. In reference to Four similar guns of the same name of the 1st Rockbridge Artillery battery. Of which was assigned as the organic artillery of an infantry brigade mustered and commanded by Brigadier General Thomas J. Jackson.

On which in their first ever battle, their steadfastness under fire earned the man and his command the nickname of "Stonewall".

You asked me to for something less broad than the concept of battle, yet you suggested warfare, which in effect is a broader term as it encompasses more than just battle but everything associated with the conduct of war, Which my character does not do.

I changed it to be pitched battle, which is one where two parties decide in advance to give battle to one another. Which was what she is extremely good at. And then gave her the archetype of the four apostles, to further enhance her ability to fight on a pre-determined battlefield.

Finally I tailored the weapons she materializes and the tactics which in which she fights her enemies to directly emulate what was done 157-158 years ago And changed her concept to that of the moniker held by a specific commander and that of his command during the time.

Now pray tell me, how does a character who now fights in the same manner, fights with the same equipment, who's archetype is literally the very same artillery battery, of a man and his brigade called "Stonewall" have it be decided that the very concept of "Stonewall" does not fit her?

Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

I like how an online chatroom has been somehow incorporated into the story.

Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

Edits made again and I have decided to replace the concept of actual warfare and battle and the like to that of a nickname, a moniker of one Thomas Jonathan Jackson.

Her abilities are a wee stronger than initially planned as a result however.

@ACHTUNG

"Stonewall" was a nickname given to Thomas Jackson and his brigade by General Bernard E. Bee during the first battle of bull run. Given that Aizu Aki's method of operation is very similar to an earlier character (Katsuragi Risa, The Major) I've used in an RP of yours similar to this in the past. With Aki trading the advanced modern weaponry of Risa for a great increase in numbers. It'd be fitting to have her concept be that of a nickname given to a General and his brigade who faced better armed enemies and suffering high casualties as a result.

Given that magic Hammers, Cartridge firing revolvers, cataclysmic beams of destruction, A dragib and what not are generally more powerful than a musket. It's enough to draw some parallels.

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Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

Need a re-evaluation of the changes I made to the sheet. @VitaVitaAR

Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

@VitaVitaAREdits made again and I have decided to replace the concept of actual warfare and battle and the like to that of a nickname, a moniker of one Thomas Jonathan Jackson.

Her abilities are a wee stronger than initially planned as a result however.

Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

The only ability I could think of with that concept is basically Mami Tomoe but with cannons... On the other hand could it be a specific battle in history tho?

Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

I thought you wanted the concept to be less broad... The conduct of Warfare includes everything from the operational level down to the tactical level. On the other hand a pitched battle is simply one where both combatants decide on a time and place to fight one another, which is inherently what she's good at.

On the other hand I shall be writing up a move list.

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Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

Yo Just reminding you that you need to tell me if anything is wrong with the edited sheet.

Mahou Shoujo no Hex Night: A Magical Girl Battle RP

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Edited the sheet. Sorry it took slightly longer than planned.