@Sky Blue I can't accept this character. There's a number of issues, but most notable is that I get the impression that you either didn't really read through the setting or otherwise opted to use a character you had in your back pocket regardless of whatever you did read. But besides that, there's contradictions here, and even presumptuousness. What makes you think gods outside the Norse pantheon won't be as important? Where in the setting did it say that there exist different 'species' to play as, or for that matter, a shapeshifter specifically?
It's these sorts of things that gives me the impression that you took a character meant for elsewhere and dropped them in here, heedless of setting. How can he be both a prodigy but also showing merely 'signs' of skill and also lacking experience and control? These are polar opposites. But also, presuming a shapeshifter, that wouldn't even be a Craft, but a latent ability.
Ultimately I can't do much with this character for the plotline, never mind that they are not adapted well for the setting itself.
@ERode Looks good. There is a gap between the "itch" she developed as a mundane, and having entered the Dark Sphere. Should I presume that her Crest was a development of this itch (an infection/lingering of some arcane nature), or her eventually finding her way into the Dark Sphere purposefully? If the latter, was it the itch that guided her in, or more happenstance that exposed her? Alternatively, you can leave it to me, as I'd be happy to add in elements to this gap.
Accepted.
@Estylwen Checks out. Reina does read as a mage of a bit higher caliber than what I intend to allow at the start of the plotline, though there is some freedom here. Nevertheless I will note immediately that her strength will have some complications developing early on, but I will discuss this with you.
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Riding the Dimensional Drift craft, however I will need to note is beyond the abilities of a character I wish to allow for the moment, specifically for setting reasons: even as a weaker representation of the Labyrinth, the Dark City is highly resistant to navigation. Spells that move you between locations within the Dark City are exceptionally rare and difficult to perform. This, tied with the Dark City still being an "overlay" upon the city means that the kind of teleportation you describe in this spell is not something Reina can achieve [at her expected skill level].
@OwO Accepted. No notes, looks good.
@Kronshi Also good. No notes. I will be sure to make him suffer.
@Remram Trace... On. Looks good. I genuinely did not expect someone would go for this sort of idea; military "dark forces" that is.
@ERode@Estylwen@OwO@Kronshi@Remram Please place your sheets in the character tab. With that, we have filled 5 slots and I am closing applications.
Next steps are that I will begin to formulate the plotlines. During this period I will be checking in with players here and there to ask questions and discuss background things. If I don't contact you don't worry; it doesn't mean I've got nothing for your character. Additionally, during this time, you're welcome to forge pre-existing relationships with one another. This is not required, however, and don't feel obligated to do so. You'll all get roped in together one way or another with time regardless.
I will hopefully begin IC within a few days.