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@vietmyke So, he'd be with Ionathan and Regina?
@Scarifar I'm not being given enough to go on. My character's alone so my posts are gonna be short.
After Ionathan ran past her, Regina watched to see what the others would do for a couple seconds. She didn't stay, however, choosing to follow Ionathan, only to lose him when he entered his room. She slid to a stop, looking around. "What's taking him so long?" she asked, looking at the door. She was about ready to try to knock the door from its hinges, only to see the man open it and run to where Ajax's room was. It was then she saw his idea. She watched as he jumped through the hole in the wall, sticking his landing. She took a few steps back before running, landing with a roll, using her momentum to continue running. She joined Ionathan by the maids, taking the time to rest against the wall. She was soon asleep, snoring softly.
"Thanks." Regina nodded, looking at the man. She was half tempted to offer to help him but was too curious about the town, as well as a bit afraid of his warning. She began heading north at a brisk pace, hoping to get there soon.
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I noticed it was the last thing you added. I would like more details about the powers. It seems like he has a very broad spectrum of abilities, similar issue to the last character.


Have you seen Miraculous? The active power he listed is once per transformation and gives him 5 minutes before he transforms back. The passive powers are minor, like 10%-30%.
Regina sat up with a yawn and a stretch, looking around to view her surroundings. She saw the man chopping wood. "Hey." she said, approaching him. "Can you tell me about the area?"
I focus onto the forest and am now asleep on the forest's floor.
@Eyeris@jdh97 Now he wants to fuse a Super Saiyan and an Avatar. Nevermind, he's going with his Miraculous character. I'll help him get started on it in a bit.
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Hey hey! Thanks for finishing the cs!

I like the concept, but, this character is over powered for the current level of this game. They have fighting skills, energy skills, slight of hand, and all the powers that come with each "summon". He has a lot going on that isn't described in depth.

What do you think about picking a specialty for your character and then fleshing that out?


Each spirit gives him a different power set with new strengths and weaknesses. The actual character can only use swords, sleight of hand, and energy. The rest of what he does is with the help of a spirit and each strength a spirit gives, he also gains a weakness.
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