@BuddhaOk I started over, from scratch and took my time creating the character. I didn't give as much as a detailed personal history but I figured that is sort of where I went wrong last time. I might still lack punctuations, that's not my best area and I will admit it, but I think everything should be good now. I changed the image so it doesn't look like something from Paint MS. I originally used a deviantart and created a character and just took a screenshot.
I changed the names originally used a name generator, but I hope this works.
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Information collected by the census office of Konohagakure
| Birthname: | Uchiha Tenshi
| Nicknames: |Want to Earn one.
| Alias: |N/A
| Sex: | Male
| Age: 14
| Birthplace: Uchiha Compound, Hidden Leaf Village.
| Bloodline: Uchiha
| Rank: | Genin
| Personal biography: His name is Tenshi Uchiha. His history is being born to the Uchiha clan raised by his father as his mother died while giving birth to him. His father's name is Masaru Uchiha. Tenshi was brought up under somewhat strict upbringing under personal teachings of his father. He spent a lot of time in school learning what it means to be a Shinobi and to learn the most basic skills. While he may have spent most of his time in school he was still the lowest in all his classes, scoring really low in tests. Tenishi isn't the best when it comes to concentrating on anything. If Tenishi doesn't know something he fakes it or pretends he knows something.
Personality wise, Tenshi is very cocky and a bit of a joker. Tenshi uses humor to cover up his mistakes. He is very prideful when it comes to his family name. Tenshi wants to be a ninja as strong as his father was, and make his father proud of him. Tenshi will go to any lengths to make his father proud of him trying to live up to his clan name of Uchiha.
| Family biography: Tenshi's family consists of the Uchiha clan, but he was only raised around his father. His mother died giving birth to him. His father Masaru is an outstanding member of the ninja community, he is a village hero of sorts. Masaru's was severally injured protecting the Hokage from an assassination attempt.. Saving the life of the Hokage while sacrificing the sight in one of his eyes and the loss of his right leg.
| Family ties: |
Name| Uchiha Masaru
Relationship to character- Father
Age: 50
Living place: Uchiha Compound
Profession: Jounin council member, Ninja Academy Instructor. Former AMBU
additional info: Masaru is half blind, his right eye is completely white as the color has been drained out of it. Masaru is missing a right leg that is replaced by a wooden stump. He possess the Mangekyou Sharingan, which is why he is half blind.
Name: Uchiha Akane
Relationship to character- Mother
Age- 45
living place: N/A
profession: N/A
additional info: deceased
| Dreams and fears: Dreams- Tenshi dreams of becoming a power ninja like his father, some that his father can be proud of.
Fears- Tenshi doesn't have many other then he is terrified of snakes, and doesn't like puppets very much either.
| Fighting style: Close to mid combat Taijutsu/Ninjutsu skills. Has no skill when it comes to Genjutsu.
| Kekkei genkai - bloodline limit: Uchiha bloodline
Kekkei genkai name: Sharingan
Description: A visual ocular jutsu, that of the uchiha clan. The power in the eyes, eyes that can see through genjutsu, able to see and predict and mimic and ninja's abilities that aren't bloodline traits. The sharingan has a multiple forms and multiple other abilities depending how far it is awaken. The normal and more common Sharingan is easy to spot out they are red eyes with three dots around the pupil with a circle that connects the three other dots.
Strengths
Able to see through moderate genjutsu-(depending on the development of the sharingan.
Able to predict a ninja's jutsu and technique that aren't bloodline trait analyzes at great speeds.
Able to see chakra and chakra natures
Currently inactive with Tenshi who has yet awaken the most basic sharingan.
Weaknesses
High Charka consumption
Quite a few blind spots outside the field of vision.
Further Awakened Abilities of the Sharingan does damage to the eyes.
| Ninja techniques: |
Shadow Clone Jutsu
Shadow clone shuriken jutsu
Jutsu name Fake Fire ball Jutsu
Rank D or Lower
Range Mid-very short
DescriptionA little technique Tenshi uses to throw opponents off-guard. He takes a bottle of 'special' elixir into his mouth the spits it out onto a lighter.
Jutsu name Mind Transfer Jutsu Fakeout
Rank D or Lower
Range very short
DescriptionThis jutsu is based off of the mind transfer jutsu ability. Instead of actually using the jutsu he just acts like he uses it and acts as if he misses then falls down to his knees. Normally he will wait for his opponents to walk up to him or get closer then he attacks with a solid punch
| Weapons: Duel Chakrams
Weapon, tool, or object type: Throwing weapons
Description: Round bladed weapons that are thrown at enemies that can bounce of things, cut and can return like a boomerang.
I changed the names originally used a name generator, but I hope this works.
Tenshi Uchiha
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Personalia
Information collected by the census office of Konohagakure
| Birthname: | Uchiha Tenshi
| Nicknames: |Want to Earn one.
| Alias: |N/A
| Sex: | Male
| Age: 14
| Birthplace: Uchiha Compound, Hidden Leaf Village.
| Bloodline: Uchiha
| Rank: | Genin
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From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel
Psychology & History
From detailed inspection and investigation by ANBU and medical personnel
| Personal biography: His name is Tenshi Uchiha. His history is being born to the Uchiha clan raised by his father as his mother died while giving birth to him. His father's name is Masaru Uchiha. Tenshi was brought up under somewhat strict upbringing under personal teachings of his father. He spent a lot of time in school learning what it means to be a Shinobi and to learn the most basic skills. While he may have spent most of his time in school he was still the lowest in all his classes, scoring really low in tests. Tenishi isn't the best when it comes to concentrating on anything. If Tenishi doesn't know something he fakes it or pretends he knows something.
Personality wise, Tenshi is very cocky and a bit of a joker. Tenshi uses humor to cover up his mistakes. He is very prideful when it comes to his family name. Tenshi wants to be a ninja as strong as his father was, and make his father proud of him. Tenshi will go to any lengths to make his father proud of him trying to live up to his clan name of Uchiha.
| Family biography: Tenshi's family consists of the Uchiha clan, but he was only raised around his father. His mother died giving birth to him. His father Masaru is an outstanding member of the ninja community, he is a village hero of sorts. Masaru's was severally injured protecting the Hokage from an assassination attempt.. Saving the life of the Hokage while sacrificing the sight in one of his eyes and the loss of his right leg.
| Family ties: |
Name| Uchiha Masaru
Relationship to character- Father
Age: 50
Living place: Uchiha Compound
Profession: Jounin council member, Ninja Academy Instructor. Former AMBU
additional info: Masaru is half blind, his right eye is completely white as the color has been drained out of it. Masaru is missing a right leg that is replaced by a wooden stump. He possess the Mangekyou Sharingan, which is why he is half blind.
Name: Uchiha Akane
Relationship to character- Mother
Age- 45
living place: N/A
profession: N/A
additional info: deceased
| Dreams and fears: Dreams- Tenshi dreams of becoming a power ninja like his father, some that his father can be proud of.
Fears- Tenshi doesn't have many other then he is terrified of snakes, and doesn't like puppets very much either.
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From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches
Combat Reports
From detailed reports from previous missions and academy sparring matches
| Fighting style: Close to mid combat Taijutsu/Ninjutsu skills. Has no skill when it comes to Genjutsu.
| Kekkei genkai - bloodline limit: Uchiha bloodline
Kekkei genkai name: Sharingan
Description: A visual ocular jutsu, that of the uchiha clan. The power in the eyes, eyes that can see through genjutsu, able to see and predict and mimic and ninja's abilities that aren't bloodline traits. The sharingan has a multiple forms and multiple other abilities depending how far it is awaken. The normal and more common Sharingan is easy to spot out they are red eyes with three dots around the pupil with a circle that connects the three other dots.
Strengths
Able to see through moderate genjutsu-(depending on the development of the sharingan.
Able to predict a ninja's jutsu and technique that aren't bloodline trait analyzes at great speeds.
Able to see chakra and chakra natures
Currently inactive with Tenshi who has yet awaken the most basic sharingan.
Weaknesses
High Charka consumption
Quite a few blind spots outside the field of vision.
Further Awakened Abilities of the Sharingan does damage to the eyes.
| Ninja techniques: |
Shadow Clone Jutsu
Shadow clone shuriken jutsu
Jutsu name Fake Fire ball Jutsu
Rank D or Lower
Range Mid-very short
DescriptionA little technique Tenshi uses to throw opponents off-guard. He takes a bottle of 'special' elixir into his mouth the spits it out onto a lighter.
Jutsu name Mind Transfer Jutsu Fakeout
Rank D or Lower
Range very short
DescriptionThis jutsu is based off of the mind transfer jutsu ability. Instead of actually using the jutsu he just acts like he uses it and acts as if he misses then falls down to his knees. Normally he will wait for his opponents to walk up to him or get closer then he attacks with a solid punch
| Weapons: Duel Chakrams
Weapon, tool, or object type: Throwing weapons
Description: Round bladed weapons that are thrown at enemies that can bounce of things, cut and can return like a boomerang.