BladeSS4

Dragon Ball: Galactic Survival

Let's try this again here is a more hopefully fixed CS that is more acceptable. Changed the history portion which was the only thing you listed. I hope this one is better.

Zero

Zero

_NAME

Alpha Zero

_AGE

Technically 1 year old, but has the appearance is that of 18

_GENDER

Male

_APPEARANCE

Zero is five feet tall and weighs only one hundred pounds, he is small but he is wel built, with a lean musclar body built. His aura is red, his energy blasts and general aura energy glow is a dark red. His tail is the the size of the entire length of his body.

_RACE/ORIGIN

Cultivated Frieza Clan
Cultivated Frieza clan. Genetically created test tube soldiers. Similar to Saibamen, but more advance, created from cells taken from Frieza. The cultivated clan members vary but were designed to have only a small fraction of the strength of Frieza if not even weaker
The origin of this was to create the to battle Frieza and his family on their own 'level'

_{Power Level}

80,000

_PSYCHOLOGY

Zero is a blank canvas of sorts, his personality is someone trying to find out who or what he is. He only knows his task for why he is alive but other than that he has no clue. He is constantly trying to better himself so he can complete his task. Zero is kind to those who are his allies and are not members of Frieza's army or allied with Frieza. Zero has a psychological need to attack and destroy any person within Frieza's army, or turn them against Frieza. Apart from that Zero is trying to find out what else is he is supose to do in life once he is done with his task if he even can complete it.

_HISTORY

Zero is a creation from Frieza's army or rather a rogue rebel faction that wanted to stop Frieza. Zero was created from the extracted DNA from Frieza, a process which was just a chance of luck.
Zero is meant to be a weapon to battle Frieza and his family on their own level. Zero's creation was nearly a disaster. There were many failures and near the end of his creation Frieza found this out and was enraged someone would dare use his noble DNA to create an abomination like creäture out of it. The planet Zero was on was attacked by Frieza's forces. The rebels manage to fight for a day before Frieza himself blew the planet up.

Zero wasnt destroyed he awakened within the stasis pod where he was created in and being able to breathe in space he awoken with no name other than the label on his stasis pod, Unit Zero Alpha. Taking the name Alpha Zero from the first thing he read and took it as his name.
He used his own energy to move himself throughout space, the only thing on his mind that he was born with a mission the stasis pod gave him, destroy Frieza and his army. Eventually finding his way to Balsora, a location of which the Zero was given at 'birth' to go to. He is seeking out their advance technology and powerful warriors.
His powers mostly untested his only combat experience is what the stasis pod recorded to him when he was still in stasis.

_ASPECTS

Ki Speed: Extreme Speed tied into his ki, Zero can move at high speeds close to calling himself the red blur. While he cant keep this up for long periods of time, he can do short bursts of very fast speed. A lot slower then instant transmission but fast enough to be rather noticeable.

Energy Sensory:Zero possesses a technique or ability is something he keeps to himself and that is energy sensory.

_{SPECIALIZATION}

High Speed Combat: Battling at high speeds, Zero actual specializes in high speed attacks.

Death Beam/Death Beam Barrage: Simlar to Frieza's abilty to shoot a tight small beam out his fingers. Zero's is weaker, but he can do it faster and more often. He can shoot out the beam out of any of his fingers or with the tip of his tail.
All his ablities are untested just natural instinct that he was born with to use.

_EQUIPMENT

Nothing
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_{RELATIONSHIPS}

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Star Wars - Lawless Galaxy

Im interested looks interesting. Will there be force sensitives and people who are able to use the force in some degree?

Dragon Ball: Galactic Survival

Well here is a filled out the character sheet let me know if i have to change anything if this isnt acceptable

Zero

Zero

"Zero is my name, but that is not what I am."

_NAME

Zero

_AGE

Technically 2 years old, but has the appearance is that of 18

_GENDER

Male

_APPEARANCE

Zero is five feet tall and weighs only one hundred pounds, he is small but he is wel built, with a lean musclar body built. His aura is red, his energy blasts and general aura energy glow is a dark red. His tail is the the size of the entire length of his body.

_RACE/ORIGIN

Cultivated Frieza Clan
Cultivated Frieza clan. Genetically created test tube soldiers. Similar to Saibamen, but more advance, created from cells taken from Frieza. The cultivated clan members vary but were designed to have only a small fraction of the strength of Frieza if not even weaker
The origin of this was to create the perfect solders to serve Frieza and his famly. Create many within their own image.

_{Power Level}

100,000

_PSYCHOLOGY

Zero stays to himself most of the time, unless his he trusts someone which is rare as he doesn't trust easily. He does as he is told without question for Frieza and his superiors but it seems he shows regret and mercy. Something that is blamed by a failure by product of the cultivation process. Also other things of his personality are also blamed on this, his lacks attitude and general kindness.
Zero does want to get stronger and is much more then his name. given the name zero for being just that within Frieza's eyes. Part of Zero even wants to surpase Frieza one day but currently is lacking in any where near the power that Frieza has.

_HISTORY

Zero had little choice to join Frieza's army. He was grown from cells extracted from Frieza. He started as a little small tube of liquid. Over two years he was grown, how to battle, destroy and conquer was drove into his mind by advance imagery. His power level clocked at one hundred after the first year of creation. It was going to slow, and the original creation team had a sudden case of angering Frieza followed by 'rapid replacement.'

The whole second year Zero got injected with growth hormones and hundreds of other chemicals, he grew fast but his power did not until the end. At the end his power appeared to be only as strong as a simple grunt and no stronger than a Saibamen. Frieza commanded for Zero to get ejected into space as he was a waste of time he was a 'Zero' his power level spiked the moment he went into space outside of the growing chamber. His power spiked too high then quickly died down after he pasted out. Zero taken back to the ship as Frieza saw a potential threat within zero should he not die within space. Instead adopting Zero into Frieza's army to be one of his special forces. To use Zero as just a pawn like most of the other soldiers within Frieza's army.

_ASPECTS

Ki Speed: Extreme Speed tied into his ki, Zero can move at high speeds close to calling himself the red blur. While he cant keep this up for long periods of time, he can do short bursts of very fast speed. A lot slower then instant transmission but fast enough to be rather noticeable.

Energy Sensory:Zero possesses a technique or ability is something he keeps to himself and that is energy sensory. Something he was born with and the reason he takes his scouter off as he doesn't need it. While the scouter is faster and makes it easier he can sense it. His sensory abilty is a bit weird with his race but it was something that came out of the cultivation process that created him.

_{SPECIALIZATION}

High Speed Combat: Battling at high speeds, Zero actual specializes in high speed attacks.

Death Beam/Death Beam Barrage: Simlar to Frieza's abilty to shoot a tight small beam out his fingers. Zero's is weaker, but he can do it faster and more often. He can shoot out the beam out of any of his fingers or with the tip of his tail.

_EQUIPMENT

Red Scouter: As the name says, it is a red scouter for reading power levels
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_{RELATIONSHIPS}

Zero hates his family. Being he hates the Frieza clan as a whole, he is created from Frieza's cells so some consider him almost the son of Frieza but he doesnt consider this as he is nothing like Frieza.
He keeps his distance from most other people as his appearance alone makes people believe his is just like Frieza. His relationship only are that of casual acknowledgement with others within the Frieza force. He knows people's names any their position within the force but that is all he knows.

Marvel AU - The Champions

Sliver the Klyntar

NTBITIHT

Actual Appearance

appearance

[/appearance]

In suit/symbiote Appearance

costume appearance

Name: Carver Edson
Original/Canon: Orginal sort of rework of Canon
Alias: Sliver
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Skills and Powers: Klyntar/symbiote powers

Ability to create webbing using Biomatter created webs. the webbing created by the Klyntar is a strong substance that degrades fast but starts off strong enough to holster up cars. the more webbing used the stronger it is. The bio matter does get weaker the more 'hungry' Carver gets. It builds off of food, breaking down the carbs and matter into the bio matter substance.

Monstrous strength, able to lift a normal four door car. With a bit of strain. Lifting a standard sedan or famly car is his limit. He can lift it over his head for a minute

The symbiotes suit can shape shift into multiple forms from the extremities, increasing or decreasing its durability. Creating shields and bladed weapons. Going as far as creating extra extremities like spikes along any part o which the suit covers. The ability can also shift the entire suit into an shape turning Carver into anyone or any clothing choice

Healing factor, He can heal almost any wound rather quickly as long as his organs remain fine. The healing factor does heal organs to a point just much slower. There are limits, if the bio matter is lacking in sustaince then the healing factor wont work, or if a mass amount of damage done at one time, say he is caught in a blast of a explosion the healing rate is slowed.

All the abilites are negated and stopped by massive loud sound vibrations. Normally on a supersonic frequency or if he gets to close to a giant bell

Bio:
Carver Edson was a ordinary pizza delivery man. Sort of a nerd before the day he fused with the Sliver symbiote. He was five seven and weighed around one hundred twenty pounds. He was a skinny weakling.The symbiote changed him, it was created by a faction of Aqua working to create the ultimate symbiote. Using just a sliver fragment from the Venom symbiote to create a brand new symbiote. The reason for its creation was to create a weapon that can battle people like the avengers.

The symbiote was created and bred from the Fragment of the Venom symbiote. Then was blasted with large amounts of gamma radiation and fused with large amounts of liquid adamantium. Shield got involved before its completion the lab was 'destroyed'. The symbiote unknowingly was labeled as toxic waste and was shipped out to be disposed of in a toxic waste dump. It never made it to the dump before it ran into a car collision.
The large containment truck crashed into a pizza delivery car. Carver Edson's car. The truck's container busted covering the fiery remains and Carver within a silver slime being the Sliver symbiote. The fire acting as an activation and Carver being the only living being for it to cling onto at the time it fused to a badly injured Carver.

It healed him an from that point Carver was fused with the alien symbiote. It changed him he was now six foot tall and the biomass of the symbiote changed Carver's body structure making him more lean and muscular. Granting him with astonishing abilities, along with the mind and personality of the symbiote turning him into Sliver.
Other: Carver and the Sliver symbiote have two different personalities. Carver is a bit of a fun person. While he understands when he has to be serious and personal understanding of right and wrong with that of a hero mentality. The Sliver symbiote is a bit more primal. A creature with a child like mind with that of a primal urge to tear things apart. While it isnt like the other symbiotes everything it does and learned has been from Carver or its basic instincts. From time to time if Carver is in battle and is knocked out the symbiote will take over and it is drastic to what it does compared to Carver.

Marvel AU - The Champions

Hm..I think this character of yours can work Blade. Thus, I'll accept him.

Nightwing, I'm interested to see what you come up with.

@DC The Dragon

Looking forward to beginning. Want me to move my CS over to the Character tab?

Marvel AU - The Champions

Alright @BladeSS4, I took a look at it. I've got a few notes.

First and foremost, did you read the rules?

Second, I have no problem with the Klyntar almost Spider-Like abilities, seeming to negate the wall-crawling aspects which is fine. What I'd like, is maybe a bit more specifics on his abilities. You've mentioned that he could lift a four-door car. That's cool, but how strong is he? Could he lift the car with ease? Is it his limit? What about his healing factor? How extensive is it..? Does it work like Quicksilver or Wolverine? Or the Libertist?

Thirdly, I saw 'liquid adamantium' and 'Gamma Radiation' in his bio. Is that meant to play some kind of role?

Finally, as a show of good faith, if you could change the 'Hydra' to 'Aqua' please? The name changes are kinda important to this universe's lore. :P

Everything else looks fine and dandy.

@DC The Dragon

I edited the character sheet to hopefully fix the issues you had with it, Sorry for missing the final rule, added that as well. As for your third question, it wasnt meant to play a role just meant to be part of the creation of this artifically created Klintar. Not adding anything special just a bit of extra back lore to the creation of the character.

Marvel AU - The Champions

Here is a character sheet. I hope it is alright let me know if I have to change anything.

Sliver the Klyntar

NTBITIHT

Actual Appearance

appearance

[/appearance]

In suit/symbiote Appearance

costume appearance

Name: Carver Edson
Original/Canon: Orginal sort of rework of Canon
Alias: Sliver
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Skills and Powers: Klyntar/symbiote powers

Ability to create webbing using Biomatter created webs. the webbing created by the Klyntar is a strong substance that degrades fast but starts off strong enough to holster up cars. the more webbing used the stronger it is. The bio matter does get weaker the more 'hungry' Carver gets. It builds off of food, breaking down the carbs and matter into the bio matter substance.

Monstrous strength, able to lift a normal four door car. With a bit of strain. Lifting a standard sedan or famly car is his limit. He can lift it over his head for a minute

The symbiotes suit can shape shift into multiple forms from the extremities, increasing or decreasing its durability. Creating shields and bladed weapons. Going as far as creating extra extremities like spikes along any part o which the suit covers. The ability can also shift the entire suit into an shape turning Carver into anyone or any clothing choice

Healing factor, He can heal almost any wound rather quickly as long as his organs remain fine. The healing factor does heal organs to a point just much slower. There are limits, if the bio matter is lacking in sustaince then the healing factor wont work, or if a mass amount of damage done at one time, say he is caught in a blast of a explosion the healing rate is slowed.

All the abilites are negated and stopped by massive loud sound vibrations. Normally on a supersonic frequency or if he gets to close to a giant bell

Bio:
Carver Edson was a ordinary pizza delivery man. Sort of a nerd before the day he fused with the Sliver symbiote. He was five seven and weighed around one hundred twenty pounds. He was a skinny weakling.The symbiote changed him, it was created by a faction of Aqua working to create the ultimate symbiote. Using just a sliver fragment from the Venom symbiote to create a brand new symbiote. The reason for its creation was to create a weapon that can battle people like the avengers.

The symbiote was created and bred from the Fragment of the Venom symbiote. Then was blasted with large amounts of gamma radiation and fused with large amounts of liquid adamantium. Shield got involved before its completion the lab was 'destroyed'. The symbiote unknowingly was labeled as toxic waste and was shipped out to be disposed of in a toxic waste dump. It never made it to the dump before it ran into a car collision.
The large containment truck crashed into a pizza delivery car. Carver Edson's car. The truck's container busted covering the fiery remains and Carver within a silver slime being the Sliver symbiote. The fire acting as an activation and Carver being the only living being for it to cling onto at the time it fused to a badly injured Carver.

It healed him an from that point Carver was fused with the alien symbiote. It changed him he was now six foot tall and the biomass of the symbiote changed Carver's body structure making him more lean and muscular. Granting him with astonishing abilities, along with the mind and personality of the symbiote turning him into Sliver.
Other: Carver and the Sliver symbiote have two different personalities. Carver is a bit of a fun person. While he understands when he has to be serious and personal understanding of right and wrong with that of a hero mentality. The Sliver symbiote is a bit more primal. A creature with a child like mind with that of a primal urge to tear things apart. While it isnt like the other symbiotes everything it does and learned has been from Carver or its basic instincts. From time to time if Carver is in battle and is knocked out the symbiote will take over and it is drastic to what it does compared to Carver.

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

Bakuto Hokori

Appearance

"Dull...this is really dull introductory meetings are a real bore..." these thoughts are that of Bakuto Hokori who is sitting at the meeting trying not to fall asleep in front of the captain. He only heard bits and pieces of what was truly said by the squad seven captain. Things Bakuto did pick up on were of this "Senkaimon Slasher" Bakuto tried not to laugh as he was amused by this title someone got. Was someone really slashing people up? Or was it someone slashing up the Senkaimon? The latter was what Bakuto was imagining even if it was impractical it was an amusing thought to him.

Bakuto, a young looking male soul reaper. He was somewhere looking around his early twenties, black spiky hair, with a tattoo on his left side of his face and appearing a bit under his shihakusho on the left side of his chest. His zanpakuto resting across his lower back within its sheath in its unreleased state.

Not that Bakuto cared much about this 'Slasher' unless it turned out to be a hollow then he just couldnt get himself to care. The moment he heard that their duties have been posted and they were dismissed Bakuto sprang out of his seat. "Last one there can eat my dust!" Bakuto yelled with a smile on his face before taking off at full speed. Bakuto used Shunpo or Flash step to turn and leap across the room at great speeds.

"Please let my job be killing some hollow, please let me kill some hollows. Oh I can only hope! Maybe I have been finally approved to go to Hucho Mundo to go on a mass slaughter. Oh that we be amazing!" Bakuto literally talking to himself as he runs back to his room.

Getting to the room as fast as he can not caring if he was the first or last one there he wanted to see what his job was and he was very much looking forward to see what the captain have given him to do. Bakuto was like a child before the holidays waiting to open his present. The glee on his face as he ready to find out what his mission or job is.

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

Bakuto Hokori

Name: Bakuto Hokori

Gender: Male

Age: 150

Appearance:


Bakuto is five eleven and weighs around one hundred ad ninty pounds. With a slightly pale but slightly suntanned skinned. He has a tattoo on one of his shoulders some sort of tribal art, he just got it because he thought it looked cool and made him look tough. He keeps himself lacks with his clothing both when he is in a human body in the world of the living

Personality: Bakuto has a rather eccentric personality, while during 'official business' he tries to seem stern, respectful and the kind of person who follows the rules and order of the soul society, when alone to do what he returns to his true personality. He is slightly unstable, and a bit quirky. Doing things the right way isnt his way, if he can get a job done better doing it another way then he will whether it be a harder way or easier.

Bakuto loves to fight hollows, and being surrounded by them just so he can kill more of them. The more hollows he has to fight the happier he is. While he does like fighting other soul reapers he prefers fighting hollows as he doesnt feel like he have to hold back and he can fight without worrying about killing an ally. Bakuto also likes a good competition whether it be gambling or some sort of physical sport to just plain fighting. Bakuto is very competitive and hates losing.

Bakuto always likes to keep 'updated' on what happens in the world of the living, always trying to find some reason to go there even if it is a very petty reason. Bakuto has a slight dislike to kido based zanpakutos. While he does find them impressive he believes the sword should be used like a sword and not like a magical wand or something along those lines.
Bakuto is a bit 'broken' from time to time he will go from being normal to very aggressive. He also is a bit unstable often doing things thought to be 'crazy' or abnormal.

Biography:
His time as as a Shinigami or Soul Reaper Bakuto spends most of his time hunting and killing Hollows. He has a been a soul reaper for one hundred years. Bakuto was found within the far outskirts of the Kusajishi district. The soul reapers who found him were chasing a hollow that managed to enter the soul society. The hollow attacked a young Bakuto, he was found killing the Hollow with a stick or at least that is the story that is told. The truth is Bakuto was found beating the Hollow with a stick until the soul reapers showed up to finish it off.

Bakuto had rather strong spiritual energy and was brought back with the soul reapers. Bakuto joined the academy and became a full soul Reaper. It was a few years after he became a soul reaper. He along with multiple members of his squad took on a menos grande. The Gillan class. Bakuto was stuck inside the belly of the Hollow for two weeks, his spirit pressure alone kept him from being digested.

It wasnt until the menos was killed was when he was freed but not before he lost himself. Mentally and physically being trapped within the monstrous hollow, surrounded constantly by the energy and spirit pressure of the hollow was enough to snap his mind and soul sort of speak.

Later he found his shikai to his Zanpakuto a gruesome weapon reminiscent that of a hollow and that of his chaotic soul. From here on he specialized in hunting hollows even requesting on multiple occasions to go to Hucho Mundo to fight hollows obviously denied. He keeps fighting for the soul society wanting to fight more hollows every day.

Former Life: N/A

Zanpakuto: Bakuto's Zanpakuto Chūkū no shi, The hollow reaper, a zanpakuto in a unreleased state is a normal soul reaper sword but when released it combines with the sheath to create a deadly scythe. A weapon that devours reishi, breaks any reishi and absorb it feeding the power that is Bakuto's Zanpakuto.absorb reishi that is below or equal to the spiritual pressure of the user and capibile of firing that energy back or store it for later.

Zanpakuto appearance

Zanpakuto Inner World and Spirit

Abilities:
Unorthdox fighting skills good at using strange moves to fight.

Expert at hand to hand fighting without a weapon. He fights and to hand better then most.

Adept Flash Step user he is able to use the Flash Step but isnt really better then anyone who uses it, just cant move at the speed of flash step with an average level of quality and speeds when using it that other Flash step users can do.

Mastered of only one Kido, bakudo 1 sai, cant use any other kido attacks that arent part of his zanpakuto or this one. In fact other then this spell Bakuto is terrible at Kido

Supieror skills at tracking Hollows. Ever since Bakuto was eaten alive by a menos Bakuto has been able to track Hollows on a level that is superior over a normal soul reaper and that of officers sometimes he can track hollows by their spirit energy can almost even track them when they go into the in between worlds between where they are and Hucho Mundo.

Weaknesses:
Lacks in using nearly every form of kido. As said before he is terrible at Kido.

Poor sense of direction gets lost very easily even in the most obvious area and places he has been.

Cannot sense spirit energy very well, unless it is a hollow Bakuto cannot sense it very well unless it is abundently powerful or strong.

Other: N/A

The New Shinigami: A Bleach RP

@Artymis Alright, I changed the zanpakuto's ablity to what you asked. To "absorb reishi that is below or equal to the spiritual pressure of the user." Also added more detail into the abilities list. Let me know if it is good to go or if I have to add more or not.