Blitzyboi

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

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What's your time zone and how many hours of free time do you have? We can talk this over on Discord if you want?

That said, yes, the sheet needs improvement from beginning to end.

If you're going to use a written description for appearance, please make it a paragraph long; this isn't the Free RP section, and while we're still more lenient than Advanced, one sentence saying your character is a mature woman who wears fashionable clothing without elaborating just what makes her a mature woman and not specifying what fashionable clothing she wears even though there are all sorts of fashionable clothing and not all of them are appropriate for a battlefield does not work for a description.

This is the same for your Noble Arm's Abilities (that said, I like how they are not overpowered), your Personality, and your Biography, the latter which is the most flawed section. How is she a kindhearted woman? What made her that way? Why does she have an interest in technology and swordplay?

How is she complex and how does she act in a way that first impressions vary?

You can edit your character sheet to include your answers, by the way, and just tell us if they're edited.

@Letter Bee

thank you, I will revise this.

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

Let me know if this needs improvement. Time zone: New York, Available from 6:45-12:30.

Mira Logan

Appearance:

A mature woman with long, curly blonde hair, emerald eyes, and a fashionable taste in clothing, Usually wearing tight or frilly dresses usually made from a flexible yet durable fabric. If she isn't wearing that, she dons a tight battlesuit with metal segments covering most of her body, allowing for mobility and rpotection.. she leaves her hair long, and she never wears a hat. Her makeup is pristine and elegant. Height-5'2" weight-115lbs

Name: Mira Logan

Age: 24

Nationality: Australian

Noble Arm Name & Appearance: Durandal (The Enduring), Serrated Sickle. Durandal is as elegant, or even more so, than it's user.

Noble Arm Rank:

Insert NA rank here

Power: D.
Speed: B.
Range: D.
Persistence: B.
Precision: C.
Potential: B.

Noble Arm Type, Element, and Range: Melee, Lightning/electricity, Close range.
Noble Arm Abilities:
Smite: Imbues Durandal with electricity, which is released upon contact with any surface. Can be dodged.
Thundercrack: This creates a loud crack when a dangerous entity is within striking distance. Earmuffs will weaken the noise.

Misc Abilities: None

Personality:

Likes: Technology, Personal appearance.

Dislikes: Water, Repeating herself.

Fears: The Ocean, Spiders.

Bio: A kindhearted woman with a knack for technology and swordplay that was inspired by many television shows and fencing classes, Mira is a complex individual and first impressions vary depending on personal preference. Some may view her as an eccentric fashionista, others may view her as a kind, aspiring model, but most just view her as an everyday, upper-class citizen. She prefers to Kill with kindness, and if that fails, then she'll attack. She is highly diplomatic in that regard, but if she must, she can and will cut off a limb. She never goes for the kill shot.

Military or Civilian Rank: Civilian.

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

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Post in the OOC first. Characters are for already-approved characters.

@Letter Bee

Oh, whoops.

Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

Let me know if this needs improvement.

Mira Logan

Appearance:

A mature woman with long, curly blonde hair, emerald eyes, and a fashionable taste in clothing. Height-5'2" weight-115lbs

Name: Mira Logan

Age: 24

Nationality: Australian

Noble Arm Name & Appearance: Durandal (The Enduring), Serrated Sickle

Noble Arm Rank:

Insert NA rank here

Power: D.
Speed: B.
Range: D.
Persistence: B.
Precision: C.
Potential: B.

Noble Arm Type, Element, and Range: Melee, Lightning/electricity, Close range.
Noble Arm Abilities:
Smite: Imbues Durandal with electricity, which releases upon contact with any surface. Can be dodged.
Thundercrack: Creates a loud crack when a dangerous entity is within striking distance. Earmuffs will weaken the noise.

Misc Abilities: None

Personality:

Likes: Technology, Personal appearance.

Dislikes: Water, Repeating herself.

Fears: The Ocean, Spiders.

Bio: A kindhearted woman with a knack for technology and swordplay, Mira is a complex individual and first impressions vary depending on personal preference.

Military or Civilian Rank: Civilian.

Japan's Mighty Military!

The Year is 2074 and Japan's Military has prospered thanks to increased support from the United States. Mechanized battlesuits known as Steel Bones assist both militaries in the ongoing effort to quell the onslaught of Floaters, an alien race hell-bent on turning humanity into fleshy puppets.

So, yeah. Aliens, Mechs, Realistic-futuristic military, and anime-inspired characters. What's not to love?

Looking for people with similar interests, Possible chance of adult themes depending on what you want.

[F4A][NSFW] Fandoms and Fantasies ✿ Smut & Romance ✿ Advanced - Novella ✿ Dark Themes [18+]

Alright, I'm interested, I would prefer to do one of the Pokemon-themed ones.

The New Marvels: An Avengers Academy Roleplay!

Yes Please. I have the perfect character for this. Plus, how can I say no to Marvel?

Longtime RP guy looking to have fun.

Hi all, As the title may imply, I love to RP, but have never been to this site before.

I Prefer casual RPs, but am extremely adaptable to any situation. I can play a variety of roles, create extensive and in-depth lore, and help others. I'm genuinely excited to see what'll happen so if you want to RP, just send me a message.