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@Dead Cruiser Hoo boy, where do I start? Yeah, your character is definitely way too overpowered at this point for the RP. You'd have to make a lot of changes to his spells. Thematically, his spells just include a bunch of niches. He has necromancy, support spells, alchemy, elemental attacks, and even future sight. It's too much. Here's what I would need to see changed:



And lastly for your mana characteristic, it lists "The humbling magnificence of a billion stars shining in the desert sky." I hope this is just playing it up, but if you're serious then this needs to be changed into something even more humbling (for the prince that is). In it's current state, I can't accept the character, sorry.
@Blu Oh Sorry, I had thought about doing that but I wasn't quite sure. In any case, fixed it in my sheet!


Great! Everything's in order now so accepted~
@Matsuri She looks wonderful, and there are no issues. Accepted~

@KoL I don't have any issues with her magic so no adjustments needed. So her family name 'Reinhardt', are you collaborating with @TheWendil on that, seeing how it's their character's adopted family? Or is it just a coincidence?

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I'm officially closing the RP to any other new players. Those who've already expressed interest before this announcement are not affected.

Also, would anyone like to help create the lore for some of the classes at the academy? Lore includes things like the class culture, the professor, etc. Let me know if you're interested.
@metanoia So with magic that uses a medium like a sword, all the spells would actually be considered techniques instead. Caelum's classification would also have to change to Might. Those are the things that need fixing.
@Chezka @Relin Loving both, and I see no stand-out issues, so both are accepted~
Alright, I think the second idea is more thematic anyway. I'll see what I can produce tomorrow.

Am I correct in assuming that our characters aren't permitted to take an attache of servants with them? Might take some adjustment from my character.

Also, are there exceptions allowed for "transfer students" to join the class at an age past 15?


No, no servants. But I like to believe they're there anyway, hiding in the bushes.

Students can join past 15, it's no issue.
Is this still open perchance? I'm interested.


It is indeed still open.

@Dead Cruiser Mental magic is tricky. By "dominate person" you mean mind control correct? As long as the drawbacks are appropriate and it doesn't work 100% on everyone then it should be fine. The second idea seems easier to implement. You can go either route as long as it's balanced.

Is this underdog class secretly the protagonist class all along.


Is this a spoiler?
Cool. I'll probably state this now, that this is Kress's first semester at Avalice, going into the IC.


That's why he's so happy. His spirit hasn't been broken by the soul-crushing curse of Class-C. We'll fix that
Gotcha. But the point I'm making here is that then it's unlikely that everyone spent the same amount of time in the Academy, due to the difference in age.


Do not question the almighty!

Oh, then I may have misspoke! The new students won't know anyone, but I wanted to make the point that returning students should already know each other somewhat.
Your age range goes from 15 to 17 though. In that case, isn't it more likely that you'll have some people in Class C who are completely new, and some people in Class C who have already been here for two years?


The age range for the CS was just a matter of wanting students to be in that range. I felt 14 was too young, and I wanted the characters to age so I didn't go for higher.
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