You don't have edit it if you don't want to Brain but that is totally up to you, I admit I didn't know that info myself lol I only know more of The Clone Wars Era and The Old Republic Era more then the other two. Whatever you wana do your characters are still accepted.
Thanks, but I'm a bit of a perfectionist and won't rest until everything fits how it should, haha.
Its 1am where I live, so I'm going to turn in. Like I say, i'll get it all in order tomorrow.
@Zarkun If there's anything else you wanna add, then now'd be the time to do it.
Would like to clarify some things on the ranking system for the Sith in the Old republic era so your CS reads better. Darth Zrintor's rank is a Darth. As declared by the Dark Council, a Lord is either just under the Council themselves or on the Council. The Jedi are unaware of this difference, hence their naming system. Aria wouldn't be Ranked a marauder, that is how she trained, following the path of Marka Ragnos. Her rank would more accurately still be either Apprentice or also Darth, under Zrintor. Imperial troopers already wear, mostly, black armor, just for clarification. Spelling thing on lightsaber is that the e and r is er, not re. Also, your secondary weapon with your Sith can be generalized as The Dark Side of the Force, as there's a number of things using the Dark Side entails. The commander would normally use a Blaster Rifle or Cannon with the secondary being a pistol and the grenades falling under additional equipment. Also, Athiss isn't an inhabited planet. Sorry if I picked it apart, not saying I disagree with the others, just trying to help improve your stuff. Still approved if you wanna keep things as is.
Christ almighty.
Alright, i'll deal with the lore issues tomorrow. Place my app in stasis until I get things sorted. Admittedly, i've used wookipedia/sithlords.wiki to do most of the work, so there's probably some things i've misread or not fully grasped.
I'll let you know once i've had a chance to go over what's been said, and make the necessary corrections.
I've added my ship to my character sheet. All I did was copy/paste the info, and format it, so there's not much need to review it. I called it the Oppressor, which I think fits :P
Well, I'll stick with its loadout for now, because at the moment it looks like I'll be out numbered :O
I'll tone it down if it looks like I'll have some backup.
Yeah, the M341 is a Sith owned machine... hmmm, I'll look into getting some Sith characters up. I'll probably have a few, maybe a little party of them, if that's okay? I'll reduce the number I make, if I get some back up.
Otherwise it'll be Darth Loner and Robomop against an army of OMFG cyborgs and light sabre ninjas, haha :)
Bear with me, I'll get them written up first, then you can make your decision and I'll be happy either way.
Don't worry, it's a salesman's turn of phrase. Kind of how when you get a new oven, and open up the manual. The first thing it tells you is that you've just bought the best oven in the world.
In reality, M341 is just a robot with a few weapons strapped to it.
If you'd like me to tone down its weapons, then that's not a problem. I was just trying to get the balance right, considering we have Master Chiefs and Jedis running around, and those guys kill things much more scary than my walking death robot of doom :P
EDIT: Oh um, I was hoping we would have a Sith character join? That was my plan. If not then I could see about throwing one up.
<//: The M341 Advanced Jedi Hunter Mk11 V0.7 is the cutting edge in assassination droid technology. Built by Amrac Industries on Skarpos, the M341 promises to overstep the progress made by other droid manufacturers in the field of containing the threat of Jedi warriors. Armed with an M17 blaster cannon, dual thermal grenade launchers and an inbuilt missile battery, the M341 carries the fire power of a small army. No longer will a Jedi's demise require the deployment of an entire battalion of soldiers, instead, a single M341 can do the job with maximum efficiency.
The M341 is also equipped with the latest artificial intelligence mainframe, which is able to learn quickly from its opponent and use this knowledge to predict their movement patterns. The A.I can be programmed to follow any set line of reasoning its owner wishes, or alternatively, can be sent to "roam". When roaming, the M341 will assume full control of itself, and will act with human mannerisms. When roaming, the M341's weapon systems are permanently disabled, to minimise the potential harm that could be caused, if it was to enter a logical paradox.
Name: Darth Zrintor
Age: 57
Gender: Male
Appearance Without Armor (If they do not wear any): Tall, slim wiry male with a shaven head and face. His skin is pale, and his eyes are of a dark brown. He shaves his eyebrows, and has a odd marking of a black circle tattooed to his forehead.
Appearance With Armor (If they do wear it.): Garbed in shades of black, with a large hood that obscures most of his face when in the up position.
Homeworld: Bastion
Race: Human
Rank: Sith Lord
Position: Sith
Primary Weapon: Lightsabre
Secondary Weapon: Force Push, Force Lightning, Force Jump, Mind Control.
Personality: Calm, cool, collected. Shows little emotion.
Bio: Darth Zrintor has travelled the known galaxy ever since he was adopted by an aspiring Sith Apprentice at the age of six. During his early years, his master and defacto father taught him many things of the Dark Side, and Zrintor seemed to have a natural grasp of it.
In his twenties, whilst undergoing some of his master's more strenuous training, Zrintor accidentally killed the man who raised him by slicing him with a light sabre in a training session. Though he at first felt regret over the accidental killing, he soon came to understood that what had happened was a natural evolution of the Sith. Had his master been stronger, he'd of not fallen so easily.
Comforted by his deluded take on matters, Darth Zrintor spent the next three decades travelling the galaxy, searching for apprentices. It was during this time, that he became noticed by the Sith Lords, who after giving him a series of tests, nominated him to join their ranks.
Darth Zrintor is what one might call a minor Sith Lord, who is more concerned with following the ways of the Dark Side, than he is with obeying his masters. The recent arrival of the alien UNSC ship in the Outer Rim has peaked his interest, and so he has gathered his disciples and headed there with all haste.
Name: Aria Fothe
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Appearance Without Armor (If they do not wear any): Middle-height, slim build, dark skin, black hair fashioned into ringlets, blue eyes. Bears the same black circular mark as Darth Zrintor.
Appearance With Armor (If they do wear it.): Garbed in shades of black, but with no hood. Her chest is protected by some traditional armoured plates.
Homeworld: Coruscant
Race: Human
Rank: Sith Marauder
Position: Sith
Primary Weapon: Lightsabre
Secondary Weapon: Force Push, Force Lightning, Force Jump.
Personality: Rash, eager, violent.
Bio: Aria was found by Darth Zrintor as a homeless, orphaned child begging on the streets of Coruscant. He immediately sensed that she had much anger in her, given her poor start in life, and romanced with that anger to earn her trust. He offered her the chance to take revenge on all of those that had abandoned her, if she agreed to go with him.
After ten years of training, she was ready. Her first test was to track down and murder her parents, which she did with little mercy, other than granting them quick deaths.
She follows Zrintor blindly, and will admit to some that she loves him, even though such talk is frowned upon in the ranks of the Sith. Nevertheless, there is no length should would not go to to make her master happy, even if that meant killing herself. All of this is known to Darth Zrintor, who continually uses her emotions to his advantage.
Name: Seger Diggs
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Appearance Without Armor (If they do not wear any): Short but stocky, Seger does not represent a traditional Force user's build. He has tanned skin, and black hair pulled back into cornrows. His left nostril is pierced, and his eyes are green. A neatly trimmed beard covers the bottom half of his face.
Appearance With Armor (If they do wear it.): Wears a black version of Sith Trooper armour, and also a dark knee-length cape.
Homeworld: Hoth
Race: Human
Rank: Sith Apprentice
Position: Sith
Primary Weapon: Lightsabre
Secondary Weapon: Force Push, Force Lightning, Force Jump, Force Rage.
Personality: Energetic, brutal, excites easily.
Bio: Seger was a lowly criminal, operating in the far reaches of space. His usual day involved operating with a group of pirates, murdering innocents and stealing their cargo. He thrived in the excitement this life offered him, and enjoyed brutalising his victims to the point that even his comrades became uneasy by it.
One day, Seger and his pirate pals made the misfortune of trying to hijack Darth Zrintor's ship as it travelled to Bastion. Zrintor slew the pirates with ease, but paused when he met Seger, for he sensed an enormous anger in the man, borne entirely of hate. Though Seger was almost 30 at the time, Darth Zrintor decided to train him anyway.
Seger struggled at first, but soon grasped the gifts the Dark Side had to offer. He became a brutally effective combatant, often sinking to any lows to achieve victory. He thinks himself greater than Darth Zrintor, but has not yet gained the confidence to challenge him. Darth Zrintor is aware of this, but chooses to hide it, and continually sends Seger against opponents greater than he - only to see him survive, and gain yet more confidence.
Name: Jazen Brie
Age: 45
Gender: Male
Appearance Without Armor (If they do not wear any): Tall, muscular male with cropped hair and chiselled features. He keeps his face shaven, which allows his foes to look upon the scarred wreck that was once his mouth and nose. His hair is blonde, and his eyes are blue.
Appearance With Armor (If they do wear it.): Wears scarlet red Sith Trooper armour, commonly worn by commandos. He also wears the Sith Trooper helmet, obscuring his face from view.
Homeworld: Athiss
Race: Human
Rank: Commander
Position: Sith Trooper
Primary Weapon: Light Repeating Blaster
Secondary Weapon: Thermal Grenades
Personality: Stern, calm, devoted to the chain of command.
Bio: Jazen was born and raised under the Sith, and though not a Force user, is nevertheless a dangerous adversary. He is an experienced leader, and decorated war veteran. Battle is all he lives for, and he has served under many Sith Lords during his time in the Imperial military.
He commands the troops stationed aboard the Oppressor, and is in charge of overseeing their deployment and leading them in battle. He often accompanies Darth Zrintor wherever he goes, giving him up-to-date status reports and also taking down the orders as they come.
