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@CaptainManbeard

Okay we will see. I am worried about wasting everyone's time.


As long as you read everyone's posts fully and completely as we go and proofread your own posts for errors, plotholes, and inconsistencies, we should be good :). I always type my posts in Google Docs first, proofread once there, then copy and paste into the post window here, add any BB code tags, hit Preview, proofread a second time, hit Post, and then proofread a third time once it's public. Even then, sometimes I'll notice small mistakes and go back to edit, lol.
@CaptainManbeard

Yes i have sir. But i do not want to be a failure, so i am thinking about dropping out. But idk what to do yet.


Well, don't drop out. Let's get a few more posts into it and we'll see how everything goes. If I see any issues, I'll DM you so we can work through it XD.
@Eviledd1984

And you read through the original idea on the Interest Check and understand that the Titans aren't actually a group yet and the first arc of this RP serves as their origin story? Just to be on the safe side, I'm gonna repost part of it here:

At the beginning of the RP, the "sidekicks" are attending the Justice League's Tenth Anniversary Celebration at the Hall of Justice in Washington, D.C. It has been ten years since the League first formed to fight an alien invasion by the Reach (one of the surviving civilizations from the Apokkian Wars), and tonight they are celebrating that union with a gala of sorts. Members of the Press, celebrities, politicians, etc. are all in attendance, while millions others watch on their personal devices via livestream.

For the first few posts, our characters will be suited-up and providing security for the event while mingling with each other and guests, but then everything changes when there is a mass prison break at Belle Reve and most of the League has to rush to clean up the mess, leaving the sidekicks to watch over the celebration. And then, to make matters worse, a different set of villains attack the party while the League is gone, which Batman suspected might happen and warned the sidekicks to be on alert.

So, we'll start there, have a few chill posts at the event, and then set the combat in motion and allow the plot to unfold as we go. Feel free to ask any questions and discuss what characters you'd like to play.


@Crimson Flame@WhiteAngel25

I assume most of the sidekicks will have at least heard of each other or became acquainted to some degree if they accompanied their mentors for team ups or whatever, kind of like how Dick and Wally met, but I left it vague so that we could just go with the flow. Crimson, you don't have to worry about editing your post though, no big deal on that aspect.
@CaptainManbeardI just have to remember to not post anything right after I wake up in the morning when my ADHD is at its finest. Lol! 😆

You wouldn’t believe how many times I reread the intro post to make sure that the characters were in hero costumes. I think you having more detail will help.

Also, I will be editing my post. I noticed several mistakes and will fix them here shortly.


Yeah, sorry about that XD. I'll make sure I put more detail in my posts XD.
@CaptainManbeard

My apologies boss. Let me just edit out that mistake.


Well, let me ask you this: Did you read through the interest check and everything posted here? Are you sure you have a pretty good grasp on the where the story is and everything? Do you understand why they are at the Hall and the initial plot discussed over in my first post in the Interest Check? I'm worried that maybe you skimmed over a lot of it and I don't think either of us wants me to have to keep asking for edits on every post moving forward. I'm not trying to pick on you, I just do my best to avoid plot holes and make sure everyone is on the same page.

While we're on that topic, does anyone else have any questions I can answer? Anything you're unsure of? I'm off work now, so I will be working on revamping my intro post shortly and then I'll write my new post after that.
@Eviledd1984

Well, I was curious, what group application are you referring to for Gar? I never mentioned any group application XD.

Gar was quite excited that he was invited to the Hall of Justice by Martian Manhunter. He had been a solo hero for a couple of years now, and he was not sure a group so well known would want him in the group. He had applied for the group a couple of times but his application was denied every time. So there must be some reason for his application to be accepted this time around.
Okay, cool. So I'm gonna edit my intro post after work later tonight to add in more detail, but nothing that would invalidate anyone else's post. It'll just be more sensory observations of the characters and the environment, which I chose to originally leave out to make the intro post shorter. Then, once everyone has their first post done, I'll write my second one and have my characters respond to everything that happened in the other posts XD.
So, I have a question for you guys. It was brought to my attention in past RPs that I put too much detail into my posts and made them too long, so this time around, in the hopes of not scaring anyone off, I sort of did the bare minimum for details in my intro post. But what do you all think? Would you prefer more detail in my posts? To give you a couple examples, here are two intro posts from past RPs where I put in a looooot of detail and they got suuuuper long:


@CaptainManbeard

I see my apologies, I have changed it so she has woken up only recently. Or if you like she can wake up later on in the RP and be introduced to the others?


Either one is fine. If you want to have her from the start, we can go with what I had suggested in the other thread, and say that while her pod was found at the same time as the other Kryptonians, the malfunction in her cryogenic stasis system was far worse and it took a few years before it was safe to awaken her. You could say now she's been awake for a few months and has been training with Clark, Conner, and Jon. To help you find a way to introduce her in the IC thread, you could say she was flying to the Hall with Conner and Jon but got distracted by something and said she'd be there in a bit and they continued on without her. That would explain why she enters the scene a little after them. Like, because she's still new to observing Earth, maybe she saw a cool garden with pretty flowers on the way and wanted to stop and smell them or something.
Room for ine more maybe? I have a couple of ideas. Maybe Sideways or Manchester Black? I'm afraid I'm not great at graphics.


Sure! Would you mind elaborating on your ideas?

@CaptainManbeard

Made some edits to my character sheet, how does it look now?


While Rao didn't technically go supernova, that's fine, I'm not gonna harp on it. Though I did want to ask - you mentioned her waking up at the same time as the other Kryptonians, which means she has now been awake for at least several years since those pods were found in the cleanup after the Reach invasion, which was in the early days of the Justice League. I never gave an exact date for the Reach Invasion's end, but it started ten years ago, which is what caused the League to first form. I kept it vague to allow more freedom in character creation and backstories, but even if the invasion and subsequent war lasted for three years, that still means Kara woke up seven years ago. Is that what you were intending?
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