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6 yrs ago
Current Sliced Bread is the best thing since Betty White
7 yrs ago
I finally got around to watching A Silent Voice. Very nice to see some deaf culture representation in anime.
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7 yrs ago
My room is so empty! All of my furniture sans bed and wardrobe have been moved to the new place. Not long now :)
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7 yrs ago
Buzzbead... BuzzBEAD. WHICH GEMSTONE ARE YOU? TAKE THIS INSIGHTFUL QUESTIONNAIRE TO FIND OUT!
7 yrs ago
*Downing a bottle of cab merlot whilst filling out mental illness quizzes on buzzbeed* COMING OUT OF MY CAGE AND I'VE BEEN DOING JUST FINE
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"Just a white girl trying to enjoy the croutons in her salad."

Most Recent Posts

@Crimson Raven I know what you mean. I've been thinking I should shut down Librarium apps. Though there are still a few people I know who are submitting CS' for it.

I think I might end up changing Ignis to a Cloud Chaser. We want more people on their side than the Librarium.
@Fenris123 I like what you're going for with this character, but I think you may need to add a little more detail to the personality.

I see a promising antagonist here. Good job.
Second character done!

@Sarcelle Renard Okay! No pressure but we do have someone else who has put forth for the last S Class Position with the Librarium. As I stated to everyone earlier, these positions would not go through the same selection process as the Slayers did; it's first come first serve. Meaning the decision will come down to whoever's character is put up and accepted first.

With that in mind;

@Lmpkio Excellent character. Really like what you've created. I'll need to go back and find your Lizardman Race App to add to the OP.

I feel like you could have kept some aspects of his backstory hidden to be revealed later, but it's otherwise solid and acceptable.

Magic is fine. Though I feel like I should point out that having such versatility means you should be relinquishing raw power. Despite being an S Class, I think it's fair to assume that an A Class specialising in a certain element would be more proficient in it than Ulysses. He has limited ways he can use his elements so I think this is a fair trade-off.

EDIT: Accepted! 1/2

Forgot to add that part.
@Sarcelle Renard Just wondering how your updates to the CS are coming along?

@Lmpkio I don't think I need to really give you a full review, since you already know my opinion of Alexanders personality and his character in general. My basic gist was that I think he makes for an interesting antagonist and I like him quite a bit.

I'm still very apprehensive on parts of his history. Particularly the whole concept of simply absorbing a Lacrima and then becoming insanely powerful doesn't gel right with me. Other than the mentioning of attending a Military Academy when he was young, there's no real mention of him ever earning his power. It's just bestowed upon him.

The Magic is fine balance wise, but I can't help but feel as though it's redundant. We already have a character who uses Sun Magic, and unfortunately Alexander's variant doesn't really attempt to do anything unique to separate itself from theirs.

I'm glad you decided to rework Alexander to bring into the Roleplay even though he wasn't able to fill a Slayer Role. Though all that's really been changed is the fact that he's not a Devil Slayer anymore and that he's now been bumped up to S Rank. It's not really substantial given the problems I identified above. At this point I'm not really sure if there's a way for him to be accepted unless some major changes are made at least to his magic. I can live with the backstory, even if I find it to be a bit too convenient in terms of how he gained his power; but I'm not going to allow another Sun Mage.
Here is one of my characters! Finally

@hatakekuro Certainly
@Lmpkio If @Denny and @Indra have no problem with your race, then we're good. I've read through it and clarified a few things with you over the Discord. I like what you're going for so consider them accepted by me. Though it'd still be a good idea to wait for the other GM's input.

@Demous Alright let me just say that I've always liked this concept since you pitched it to me. In particular, I'm quite a big fan of the archetype "A boy and his dog" for characters. Now, I'm not trying to compare a young child to an animal because that would just be insensitive to children everywhere. Though I like how Sayuri will be accompanied by Irene (You're free to write up an NPC sheet for her as well, btw) for this journey. She seems like a very calm, level headed (if not slack) character. I'm interested to see how Irene's presence influences her personality.

History is perfectly fine. I have no issues with her magic as we have discussed the potential for Angels in the Roleplay in PM's.

Aura Form is accepted and given we've already had some discussions involving her magic in the plot, it's safe to say that I also accept that. Well done!

Character Accepted! 1/2

Please await the acceptance of one other GM.
@dragonmancer Honestly I have to say, while I appreciate the effort, the whole point of making it perfectly clear that dragons are extinct in our universe was to make it so we didn't have any Dragon Slayers.

Your character is pretty much a dragon slayer in practice if not in name. I'm using my rights as GM to say that this character won't be accepted and that you should try and come up with a different concept for him. It's just not going to fit into our roleplay.
@dragonmancer Present the magic and we'll review it accordingly.

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