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4 yrs ago
Current Steampunk or Cyberpunk decisions, decisions.
5 yrs ago
I've written and published two books before my 30th birthday, I'm happy but I should have started sooner.
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5 yrs ago
I stopped RPing for nearly a year because I've been self publishing novels, but maybe I should jump back in again.
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6 yrs ago
Stan Lee was able to create superheroes on the pages for us as kids, so we could find the superheroes in ourselves as adults.
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6 yrs ago
A local hairdresser was arrested for prostitution last night. I'm shocked. I was a customer of hers for years, and I didn't even know she was a hairdresser.
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@Reflection Looking good so far.
@CaptainSully This is very attractive looking CS but did you Even read the Zeroth Post?

EDIT: Change the teleportation to something else and I think you'll be fine.

EDIT 2: Also 'being human' isn't a weakness as there are non super-powered heroes who are simply human.
@sassy1085 Like jubilee?

Cool.





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Thanks!

Which biomass ability do you mean? The healing, or the mimicry? As for the mimicry, don't worry, I'm a biologist, so overtly BS biology pisses me off. Embryon will not be learning camouflage because it's too complicated (involving specialized skin cells, and the neural pathways to control them). Basically, Embryon prefers mimicking metabolic pathways (ability to construct or deconstruct specific biochemicals) rather than anything with an overtly structural, physical, or behavioral function. So maybe Embryon can produce neurotoxins, but King Cobras and Japanese Pufferfish are not easily accessible to the homeless, and Embryon would consider creation of a neurotoxin as 'excessive lethal force'.


Ah okay this basically covers my minor concerns. Approved!
He can be easily countered by ice users, temperature manipulators, weather manipulators, among other things. And to use any of those abilities, he has to absorb thermal energy in order to use them. The thermal energy comes from the heat in the surrounding area, such as the air, the ground, bodies of water, etc. All objects, creatures, etc. contain thermal energy. As for what form, he absorbs the thermal energy through his palms and that has a limited range to outward of about 10 to 15 feet and the further away the weaker the absorption becomes. Furthermore, depending on what time of year it is, the colder it becomes, making it more difficult to properly absorb thermal energy. Also, depending in what environment he's in (such as a polar ice cap) absorbing thermal energy becomes next to impossible, making him unable to use any of his powers.


So basically he can draw the energy he needs from almost anything? This is a highly populated modern city, there is never going to not be things to draw thermal energy from even with that radius. So it's barely a weakness. And having a vulnerability to a very specific counter-superpower is also barely a weakness. Your powers are too strong even if they did have significant drawbacks.

@Bone Father

Having Fire, Ice and Wind powers is 3 elements and the 'weakness' is much too specific to be viable.

Thermal energy is very nebulous and seems like it would either be too broad or too specific. Where exactly is thermal energy being drawn from and in what form?

@Stern Algorithm

Sort of like alien nurse? I like it!

Approved. Though I will be keeping an eye on the biomass ability in the IC.
@sassy1085 This looks great, just a heads up though I'm assuming SoarkGal means electrical powers? Because Im seeing a lot of electrical bases submissions lately. Just a heads up.


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