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7 yrs ago
Current Laptop has suspiciously decided to have hard-drive failure two weeks after the warranty expired, so no RPing for me!
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7 yrs ago
Any in-progress RPs in need of some new blood? Drop me a PM!

Bio




Name:
Kyle (Obviously)

Age:
23

Gender:
Male

Sexuality:
I tend to like women

Occupation:
Criminologist

Location:
United Kingdom

Hobbies:
Gaming; Reading; Writing; Drinking; Sleeping; Napping; Snoozing; Eating; More Drinking; Kipping; and Laser-Tag.

A Random Interesting Fact:
I can make the dimple on my chin go up and down.

Warning:
I will vanish for months at a time because adult stuff. I'm also unlikely to post every day.



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@Fat Boy Kyle Perhaps change Drain Knowledge into Receptive Telepathy. The thing is I'm not that happy with the connection him and his dad keep. This is during the great age of the Republic and the Jedi Order, I mean they can prevent his dad from entering the Temple (and would have) and could have taught him better than to go out looking for his dad.

I'll let my Co-GM @Gowi take a first crack at it :P

@Cyrania From what I can tell your character is going to be, it looks good.


Receptive Telepathy was actually more accurately describes what I intended. But even then, I'll just leave both out for the time being. I could have expanded more on the dad thing; I didn't mean that it was like a constant relationship, but rather a case of "My dad lives like two blocks away, can you really stop me from seeing him?" sort of thing. Still, I can take it out if you like.
I'll be honest in saying that I started writing it at like 1am, and decided to cheekily push the boundaries as much as I could. On reflection, I see that I went too far. I've revised the CS and taken away the translator and the drain knowledge. I've also included more limitations in the other implant.



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EDIT: Obviously I'll continue to revise it (or bin it) as you continue to critique
My CS. His use of Force Empathy is pretty much his defining feature, so sorry if you get annoyed of reading that term :P If there's any problems or you think he's OP/etc., then let me know.

If anyone has any ideas for character relations then throw them at me :)

I'll toss in my interest....
Sgt at arms position open?


All positions are open. Given that there's adequate interest, I'll think about putting an OOC up shortly. Feel free to start making sheets.
Expect an empathetic Jedi Padiwan Investigator CS up tomorrow
@Naril Fair enough. It wasn't a serious criticism, I just kind of read it and went "Wait a second..."
@Naril, not meaning to be a douche-bag but I noticed your Miralukin likes books? :P
Dredd couldn’t help but let out a sigh of relief as the situation with the Jedi deescalated. Not only because it meant he wouldn’t have to go straight up against a lightsabre with a standard vibroknife, but because they had a mission to do after all. Still, part of him wanted to follow the robed figures as they marched away into the thicker woodland. If he had some decent Echani Vibroblades, ones that had the cortosis weave and were supercooled, he’d at least be able to block a lightsabre. And if he could have blocked their lightsabres, he wouldn’t have hesitated to fight them head on.

“Wonder who ‘she’ is?” Dredd mumbled out-loud over the comms as the Republic group eventually disappeared from sight. Anyone capable of putting the fear in the minds of a Jedi was likely to be a respectable opponent.

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Dredd crouched alongside Rika on the plains as they paused to evaluate the camp before them. He felt slightly exposed in the large open area without his cloak, but whilst he marched along with his brothers and sisters he didn’t want to risk them accidently shooting him.

“Dredd take out the Comms Officer and make sure you do it quietly and quickly before he can get a distress signal out.”

“I’ll get it done.” Dredd replied with a tinge of cockiness. He gave a quick nod to his comrades before activating his stealth field and disappearing off towards the camp. He knew a couple of them hated when he disappeared from sight, and so he couldn’t help but let out an unseen smirk as he did so. As he kept a manageable jog through the fields he made sure that he kept low in the tall grass to further reduce his chances of being seen. As he neared closer he slowed down and began creeping around the tents, taking care not to be seen or heard. He needed to hurry though, because he knew how impatient the others could be when it came to battle; it’d only be a matter of minutes before the place was torn apart and if he didn’t take care of the Comms Officer, things would get a lot more complicated.

“This is Golf-Five. Message received. Things are all clear here; no signs of bogies. Out.” the Comms Officer spoke the message with clarity and accuracy, and on closer inspection Dredd could see that this was a man on point. His eyes seemed to dart about cautiously as he seemingly tripled checked his rifle. Not convinced that he could get up close to the man without being detected, Dredd looped round behind the tent that the man was sat against. A quick glance through the thermal vision was enough to see that the tent was vacant, and with that Dredd quietly snuck in. Through the canvas, the moonlight cast the silhouette of the Officer and made it easy for Dredd to position himself.

“Goodnight.” Dredd whispered, causing the Officer to gasp. But before the Officer could do anything more, Dredd shoved a knife straight through the tent and into the back of the mans head, killing him instantly. Reaching through and grabbing the collar, Dredd made sure the corpse didn’t tip over and then reached round to close the eye lids. If anyone was to look at the Officer before the attack, they would just think he was sleeping.

“This is Dredd. Comms Officer is down. I’ll stay low while the havoc commences; I know how much of a crap aim Russ has.”
I genuinely will be posting in the net hour or two :P
Considering I've still yet to finish the post in the other RP, I should probably hold off.

*Tries to avoid @hexaflexagon's judgmental glare*
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