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Current "Back after two years", I said three years ago. Five years, then! What's up?
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Back after two years... what's new?
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here to write some posts and kick some ass

and I'm all out of posts

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For a moment, it looked like everything had stopped. That's when it all began. Trained athletes and those in accidents feel each moment as if it were several seconds, or even minutes. Ryunosuke thought it was something like that. His eyes darted from one face to another, desperately hopeful that they would not have noticed anything.

The short girl with the brown hair had a relieved face.
The girl that just walked in had a sardonic chuckle. It would have pissed Ryunosuke off, but, to be fair, he would have done the same in her scenario.
The boy getting chewed out for his friend- no, acquaintance's behavior ran towards him, handing him napkins like a cop handing his aniki speeding tickets. That is, if the cops could outrun him.

Anyways, the unwanted helper was busy wiping at the table, cleaning the mess faster than a waiter on his first day.

“I’m so sorry. Canned coffee’s the worst at that. Anything I can get you?”

You can 'get' the hell out of here. Like I wasn't given enough attention!
"Hm? Oh, yeah, um..."

Ryunosuke pulls his wallet out, drawing one of each a ¥1000 and ¥500 bill.

"Please pay my bill for me. Keep the change, thanks, man.."

Hastily handing the unexpected visitor the money, Ryunosuke lightly pushes him aside, quickly walking to the counter and looking straight ahead, praying that the two girls weren't looking at him. A waitress stifles a laugh, than approaches him.

"Er, sorry I spilled my drink. I gave him (pointing his thumb at the napkin guy) my money. Excuse me."

Following his rather embarrassing encounter, he then proceeded out, hastily walking towards his car at the end of the parking lot. A shame it wasn't closer, thus making it less awkward to walk around in a stained uniform. He hopped in the Beat, started it up, and sped away like a criminal. To be fair, such a humiliating event was social suicide anyways. Shifting up like a street racer (no wonder he's got that kind of a brother), he sighed, heading home to change and speed back to class, hopefully on time.

Of course.
@NuttsnBolts
TIL, thanks
<Snipped quote by Inkarnate>
It isn't a parody, it's the sheet done correctly and a parody.

@ZEDDOILO
I'm not even sure if you're the guy with a problem-ridden character, or someone making fun of him. Regardless, it's still... got holes in it.

  • Remember that time we said keep the height/weight in realistic terms?
  • Part-time jobs count as McDonald's, waitress, intern, etc. I'm pretty sure boxing would either be a school sport (which it isn't) or committed enough to pull him out of school (which isn't unrealistic, unless you look at the title of the RP...)
  • Sure, the 360's a kei car. But it's 50 years old. Imagine a teenager in America with a hot rod, and that's how I feel.

Declined
@Inkarnate
It seems good for now, but once you're ready feel free lol
@Inkarnate
Approved!
I'd say Sola hits the main points here.
Also minor thing, the character "永" isn't a first name and is read either "naga", "haru", or "tokoshie". Ken (as a name) is 健, 堅, 建, or 兼



Ryunosuke rests his head on his right hand, in boredom. After all, there wasn't much to write home about- students talking, eating, his almost 'invisible' nature, which he had grown accustomed to over the years. In fact, he liked to think it was a special trait, allowing him to eavesdrop, sneak past (a casual, nonchalant stride always beats crouch walking), and notice things most others wouldn't. In reality, it's just that nobody cares enough to pay attention to him, due to his seemingly boring and aura-less presence. Ironically enough, this gives him such an impression of a special ability, which he regularly exploits to silently keep tabs on those he deems interesting.

He taps his fingers in rhythm to the beat- that of the silent humming in head. Ever since listening to the song in his car on the ride over, it got stuck in his head, a habit he sometimes despises. Fortunately enough for him, he likes this song- "Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap" by AC/DC. Like always, his mind would take a train of thought somewhere barely related to the previous topic. As Ryunosuke taps his fingers and silently sings along, he connects the title to the JoJo's Bizarre Adventure ability of the same name.
Allowing neighboring worlds to exist simultaneously in the same location. That is my Stand ability, "Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap".
Dojyaaa~n!


Eventually, he notices the other Uesugi students forming groups of two- his mind naturally wandering to the... implications of such pairings. Anyways, he tries to see if he knows any of them.
The two American blondies? Probably not. He'd be amazed if they could stand a conversation in Japanese.
The two (fairly pretty, although he refuses to admit it) girls making conversation? He feels like he knows their faces, although he never really did pay attention to anyone outside of his homeroom last year.

His silent snooping is interrupted by a waitress delivering his coffee and ice cream. Without even turning his head, he mumbles an "arigato gozaimasu", shaking his coffee can without paying attention to the fact that it's already pressurized. Before long, two other Uesugi students, based on the uniform, walk into the restaurant. The girl was rather peppy, as if stifling a laugh, and the guy seemed... paranoid? They take a seat, and Ryunosuke redirects his gaze to the two girls- but it's not like he's doing that for a particular reason, or anything. He tries to pay attention to the dialogue, although he can't help but listen in on the Americans' rapid-fire English and mediocre Japanese. Eh, it'll pass. In fact-
“WOOOO! UESUGI SENIOR HIGH! WE DID IT, JUN!”
All eyes are soon on the two, and the quiet girl reading a book (he wasn't paying much attention to her, as she was minding her own business until then) marches over, scolding them. Ryunosuke lets out a quiet chuckle.
Heh. Seems like even the book nerd isn't safe from attention. Mwah heh heh... that's the ability of my Stand,
『Silent  Night』! Invisibility (in a social context), stealth, and spying! Watch out, Public Security Intelligence Agency! Nobody will ever notice I-

He shakes his coffee once more, then opens it. The pressure hisses loudly, spitting coffee all over his chest and face area.
...Exist.
@AdmrlStalfos19
Seems good for now, although I thought Hiroshi was a male name?

@Inkarnate
Yep, whenever you can!
@Ioua8654
Again, hate to be that guy but

  • The Aveo's size (4039mm×1735mm×1516mm, 1.4L engine) is too large for the Japanese Kei-car maximum limit (3400m×1480mm×2000mm, 0.66L engine).
  • Still a big boi, basically everyone in the RP is in the 5 foot range IIRC

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