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Current "When you have an unfair system the only thing you have to do in order for that system to be used against you, is to wait."
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Nothing ever ends poetically. It ends and we turn it into poetry. All of that blood was never once beautiful. It was just red.
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Oh sorry. I read the question wrong. 1's actually my social security number.
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The phallic stimulation toy of consequence rarely arrives pre-lubricated.
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I have 3 mottos here in life, really.




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C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T P R O P O S A L
THE DEATH OF...
S U P E R M A N


Clark Joseph Kent
Kal-El Of Krypton
Metropolis
C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T:


"The only way to change the world is to quit thinking it’s a job for Superman. Real power lies in your own hands."

Five years ago, crisis struck and a force of the earths' mightiest heroes came together, out of the shadows, the oceans and the sky to save humanity from cataclysm. That force was lead by a survivor of a dead race who grew up amongst the humans, Superman. Dubbed the greatest hero among them, Superman brought truth, peace and justice wherever his red cape touched. But tragedy struck, the kind even the greatest among us can't prevent.
Clark lost what mattered most to him. Crippled from the same battle, Clark had to face a world of grief in a way he had never done before. While the kryptonite was out of his body and his spine had healed, his spirit was still broken. He left the cape behind and retreated into solitude.
New dangers are on the horizon and the world will once more cry out for the last sovereign son of Krypton.


P L O T ( S ) & G O A L ( S ):

Ultimately, I love Superman and I've always wanted to put my own touch on him. I'm not aiming for a whacky reimagining of the character, but simply aiming to explore what the most overbearing human emotion - grief - would do to the strongest mortal in the universe. To not just loathe in self-pity, I want to explore how he, like all of us can overcome and thrive.

Superman may be dead, this is the story of how he regains hope and comes back to life.

P O S T C A T A L O G:

Pending feedback from our fearless GM, I present to you the first draft of my character.

He be rootin' he be arrow-shootin' he be traumatized by race war, he's -



It's worth noting that I haven't read the books, only watched a couple of episodes of the TV-show, but everyone else's sheet was a huge help in figuring out the vibe I should pursue, so amazing job on that front guys!

I took some liberties with expanding upon the lore of our acorn-snacking friends, leaning heavily into more traditional wood/dark-elf relations, but I also didn't feel like it was worth it to write an entire bible on tragic history of race war.

Hopefully my rather outside perspective on Redwall will be more of an aid than a hindrance in this game. If anyone else but Wraith has any comments or feedback they'd like to give, I welcome it with open arms.

And yes, I know writers who use spellcheck on their first drafts. They're all cowards.

E K O R R N E L I U S
E K O R R N E L I U S

"I've got a pinecone for every last one of them"
C H A R A C T E R P O R T R A I T
C H A R A C T E R P O R T R A I T
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C H A R A C T E R S U M M A R Y
C H A R A C T E R S U M M A R Y
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Ekorrnelius "Ekko" Poxborn
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Six Seasons | | Red Squirrel
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Engaged | Forage

P H Y S I C A L P R O F I L E
P H Y S I C A L P R O F I L E
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C H A R A C T E R N O T E S
C H A R A C T E R N O T E S
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C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T
C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T
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It's impossible to tell the story of the Squirrel Ekorrnelius without talking about his parents, his mother Greta The Red and his father Malley O' Grey. What people outside of the squirrel tribes don't know is that there's a great deal of tension between the grey and red squirrels, away from the abbey they squander and fight among themselves and rarely manage to live harmoniously. The greys outnumber the reds, three to one in general population which forces the reds to move habitats when a tribe of grey squirrels move in, the greys tend to keep to themselves which is why we're all far more familiar with red squirrels as the members of many fellowships in tales. Greta was a member of a red tribe, a proud daughter to the tribe's spiritual leader. It was after the battle at Birch Oak hill, far to the east of Redwall Abbey that Greta med Malley Koll, a grey elf who had fought against the vermin who had attacked his tribe. Malley was one of few survivors holding onto his life while hiding in a pile of bodies in the mud. Unlike most of his peers, Malley was absolutely worthless with a bow, opting to fight with spear and sword instead.

Mallley was nursed back to health by Greta and it was apparent their relationship was blooming. Such a relationship was seen as highly taboo among their peers which is why their relationship remained secret. Soon they sired a child and their relationship could no longer be held secret. Ekko's grandfather shunned his daughter, but allowed her to stay in the village, and thus Malley came to live with her. When Ekko was half a season old, his mother fell ill. She had contracted the highly contagious squirrelpox. Greta was soon blinded by the pox as it took root in her son, and soon most of the village of Rootstam was blinded, starving and perishing one by one by the pox. See, it isn't just because the Greys are bigger and stronger than the reds that they are overwhelming them in numbers, but also because they are asymptomatic carriers of the squirrelpox gene, in squirrel folk-lore, it is believed the red and greys were once one species but a curse was put upon them, creating the pox and stripping the greys of their red color. The greys, naturally have a altered take on the tale.

Malley quickly escaped the village once he found out that he had given them the pox and has not been seen by another red squirrel since. Ekorrnelius survived the pox without blindness or any permanent effects, sans a few scars on his skin largely because of his mixed heritage. He was shunned by his peers for his father's curse, named Poxborn and exiled from ever living in a red squirrel tribe again. That is how he found his way to redwall where they clergy accepted him with open arms.

In a sense, Ekorrnelius is exactly what you would expect from a young red squirrel. A defender of nature, protector of those who cannot protect themselves, a masterful climber and naturally gifted with a bow. Knows the woods like the back of his hand and can identify just about any fauna on sight or smell alone. He's just entered his young adult phase and with it comes new responsibilities and a desire to shed his past full of grief.

In the abbey, he forages food that they cannot grow themselves, as such it is not uncommon to see the rather large squirrel come carrying large mushrooms or wild berries in droves. He also makes it a point to scout for potential attacks while honing his archery - a task nobody has ever asked him to perform but some of the gatekeeper and other guard personell are thankful for.

D E T A I L E D A P P E A R A N C E
D E T A I L E D A P P E A R A N C E
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For a seemingly red squirrel, Ekko stands taller than his peers, a few inches taller than any of the biggest red squirrels, yet smaller than any grey squirrels - not that he's met any since he was a kitten - he's incredibly athletic and lean. His tail is fluffy and messy as is the rest of his fur, being well-groomed has never been a priority for him. When he arrived at the abbey as a young boy, the other children sometimes teased him for being stinky, the teasing never stuck enough for him to change his grooming habits.

Beyond bodily size, his eyes are calmly grey and carry a fire within them. Ekko is driven, energetic and deeply empathic to other people's plights, sometimes he prefers to hide it behind a rash surface and stiff body language, yet his true self always cracks through the surface. The squirrel is never seen without his bow and quiver. His clothes are torn, stitched up by himself- some holes were too big for him to patch so he asked one of the maidens at the abbey for help - usually rather dirty and a poor fit as they haven't kept up with his recent growth spurt.

P L O T ( S ) & G O A L ( S )
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Goals:
Protect those weaker then him - a goal of just about all red squirrels

Become the greatest bowsquirrel to have lived

Learn more about the conflict between his two heritages

Get accepted back into the red tribes

Find his father

Plotlines:

Archery Contest - Ekko signs up for a friendly competition at Redwall that spirals out of control when he forms a rivalry with a pure blooded red squirrel.

Steal From the Rich Give To The Poor -
A Rich noblemen parades around the forest, abusing his power and position to bully the farmers and peasents around Redwall, Ekko plans a heist.

I am no Lionheart -
Ekko comes to terms with his paternal affinity for swordplay.

The Grey Knight -
He finds out tracks that could lead him to finding Malley and maybe finding answers to putting all of his grief and shame behind him.

I think I'm going to join, I'll be creating a hare character, wot. What's my deadline again please?


Hare frens!

I'mma slam out my sheet.
Is nais.

Gonna make a hare after all.
Good morning all, what is everyone thinking for characters?


Some kind of archer squirrel. Though, upon seeing a few episodes of the show I'm kind of smitten with playing a big ass hare... <.<

Hell yeah

<Snipped quote by Byrd Man>

I was trying to be funny.


And see where that got you

If it is directly over lower Manhattan then it’s only like, 3 miles. If it is above upper Manhattan then that’s like 15 miles. You’d still be able to see the obvious space ship on the skyline from Brooklyn.

But what is more fun? I don’t want Superboy and Silk (well mainly Silk since it is her second fight ever) to be too easy


I'm cool with either. Enemy can always have reinforcement if you guys wanna keep fighting in spite of assistance from the witch.
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