Holy Soldier

The Seven Deadly Sins [Recruiting Storyweavers! LF Lust and Sloth]

@YahrlanThey can be any of the human races. The main races in the show were the giants and the fairies. I mean, I am open to there being other races like elves and such. I just don't want anyone choosing anything over-the-top like some vampire/angel/werewolf/demon or shit like that.

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@NobodiesHeroSure. There's no limit on the Holy Knights at the moment.

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@PyromaniacwolfNah. You don't have to do that. It just would have been easier if everyone made a distinction between their current personality now versus how they were before. I felt that you did that but I wasn't sure if his post-banish personality was going to be his 24/7 mood for the remainder of the game.

@AllHollowsEveYep! Still need a Sloth. :D And I don't mean the animal.

@HammermanSeems all right. Very anime (not saying that's bad. It meets the theme of the game).

I'm going to give everyone a heads up. When we get all the people needed for this game, I'm going to have everyone submit a writing prompt. This isn't a writing prompt from another game. I want an example writing sample for the character you created. The reason why is I've had situations in the past where people ignored the casual-advanced tags in the game and wrote on a "free form" level. This is not a free-form game. Also, while this is in the casual section. I am going to be lenient to a point on English grammar. If I can tell you didn't at least proofread your work, then that laziness is going to speak wonders on the kind of writing we can expect from you.

@Pyromaniacwolf@Dark Light@Majoras End@Yahrlan@Keksalot@Hammerman@AllHollowsEve@Caelum

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@PyromaniacwolfSounds good.

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@Dark LightSure. I guess so. This is anime-themed after all.

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@KeksalotI promise and guarantee nothing.

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@Dark LightYou're trying to make pistols/gunblades out of flintlocks. That's taking us out of the Medieval vibe a bit. Flintlocks fire a single round and then have to be reloaded. I mean, they are a legendary weapon but the weapon has to be like the actual weapon and not a hybrid of multiple weapons into one. There's also other projectiles to try such as bows, crossbows or throwing knives. Maybe even a musket.

@KeksalotI'm just going to hold off on it until all the other CSes come in. Because then I'll decide what concepts are accepted or not. Whatever I take, I'll post up the OOC/IC (since the OP is the OOC) and maybe when the game goes up, I'll fill in any roles that weren't filled during the interest check. I'm also going to be deciding who Eve approaches first.

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@KeksalotWith that argument, the White God might as well have made them glow like a beacon so they wouldn't be able to hide it at all. The brand is what I just posted in the example. You don't have to like it but that's how it is in this game. As I said, I'm not going to tell you how to play Lust. I'm just going to let you know if I like the concept or not and for this kind of game, I can't accept your idea. As I said, you're welcome to try for other Sins, even Sins already reserved by players because as I said the roles are contestable. You can try for Holy Knights, but what you currently have I can't accept it.

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@PyromaniacwolfHis personality is "all right." It's workable. I was more concerned with him being over-the-top and having a personality that can't interact with anyone. Like, if he was actually a cool guy but had severe anger issues when ticked off. The hot-head. Instead of being wrathful 24/7. Yeah, just decide if you plan to give him an arc weapon or not.

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@KeksalotI went looking at Lust in the old game to see how the other player played her and he made her desire things expensive, powerful, and pleasant in excess and afterwards, discarded them because those things were no longer special. Very similar to Greed except I believe Greed is more of a hoarder about it, and shares nothing.

I don't want to tell you how you should play your interpretation of Lust. It is your character. I just read CSes and if I feel the concept doesn't fit, then I try to work with you before I out-right reject it. Your current CS can work but you seem to have a difficult time explaining how its theme is lust. Maybe try for a different sin that is easier for the muse or a Holy Knight.