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@Azure13

But wouldn't you rather play something like Harpy Lady to suit your character better? Rather than a big beater?
@Azure13

I don't know if you've read the OP, but Zarc in this setting is like Zushin the sleeping Giant, where it's powerful relatively speaking but also very common.

@Shortcake

I also wanted a few NPCs so that the players weren't all fighting one another.

@Satoshi Kyou

You mean a duel disk?
I was hoping for at least ten people so we could have a proper tournament.
@Ammokkx

Yes. Thank you. I get that you're trying to be helpful, but please let me do my job.

@Pleek

Looks fun, though you've got some coding issues in the history section of your profile.

For you Master/Speed Duel ability, you may want to say "From the deck", perhaps alluding to the old tutor turtles UFO and Pyramid. Of course, it might be hand, graveyard, or maybe even all three, though I think either from the deck, the deck and hand, or the hand or graveyard would be the best options, possibly speeding up your deck as the motors turbo charge your character.

Once you get that fixed, you're good to go.
@Scarifar

Oh right. I forgot to say if I gave you the okay or not. Uh. That's fine. I feel like maybe you could put in something to make the deck somewhat stronger, maybe add in the Superstar retrain I have in the second post for filler since you don't have much of an extra deck.

@StarInaBox

I'm actually fine with prodigies. It's just that your history doesn't have a lot of personality to it and that doesn't lend very well to the character itself and certainly does not set very high expectations for later on in the game where we may perhaps discover more about your character, going by what sort of world he came from.

Does he just like dinosaurs because the deck is fun? What if he's actually a genius archeologist who happened to study the game the ancients had played on stone tablets? What if he's actually the son of Rex Raptor, raised in order to seek revenge against his old nemesis, Joey Wheeler?
@GarlandDaHero

RNG stuff like dice rolls, coin flips, and rock-paper-scissors are determined by the players.
@StarInaBox

Dinosmasher's Fury is probably one of the best structure decks out there. That said, you don't become champ just by putting three structure decks together. Where's Giant Rex? Where's Double Evolution Pill? Where's Dragonic Diagram? Rescue Rabbit? This isn't 2013. Why are you using Gameciel over Dogoran? You know? The one you can actually search?

That said, your character's history is kinda bland and the deck is kinda basic. I don't think you'd do very well in this RP.

@Shortcake

Now RIP ROCKBONE, on the other hand, that's a name I can get behind.

We'll run into some trouble playing real turbo duels, but other than that, I find this character 100% acceptable. Approved.
@Scarifar

So what exactly is the Light? There's real world geographical locations and people so I don't see why you can't have real world religion. That said, I don't think anybody here knows how to do religion very well, myself included. Of course, you can still have a religious character, I won't stop you from playing your character as such.

Your deck doesn't have Kristya in it, unless I missed it somewhere, which was a little surprising. Granted, I guess it is difficult to have exactly four fairies in the grave in order to summon it, especially when you need fairies in the grave as ammo for Hyperion.

I don't have much experience with agents though so I can't give you much judgement.

But yeah. Those are just my notes to let you know what I think. The character's accepted.


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Then, with a swish of his coat, Kaiba stepped off the podium, taking the brick with him.
@StarInaBox Yeah no problem.
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