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7 yrs ago
Current You did good, McGregor. Made us proud.
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8 yrs ago
No offense intended. But there's a sweet spot on the sliding scale of realism, and most of the interest checks I usually see skew too far to the realism end for me.
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8 yrs ago
Can't describe how quickly I go from excited to sad when a mecha premise turns out to be realism wankery.

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“Talk to me, Ensign.”

“I don’t know, sir!” Ensign Yelena Novikova answered, throwing her hands up in an unprofessional if perfectly understandable display of frustration. The Electronic Warfare officer was the youngest officer on the Pandora’s bridge even before she slept the whole journey to Proxima Centauri. There hadn’t been any need for an EW specialist in transit so she had been excluded from the skeleton crew that slept in shifts. For once she seemed as inexperienced as she looked, fighting with her console as though she had any control at all. She could monitor the computer with perfect clarity but nothing she did seemed to have any impact. The invasion of their systems continued as though she did nothing at all. “Nothing in the universe should be able to route data like this. It’s dropping the data flow down to a hardware level in real time to bypass the software restrictions, and it’s doing it without a noticeable drop in speed. It’s... “

Yelena threw up her hands again and everyone understood. It wasn’t that she didn’t understand what was happening, or that she couldn’t explain it; but no one on the bridge would understand it as well as her. Her rank was extremely junior for such an expedition but there hadn’t been a better EW specialist out of any human institution in a long time. If she said it was impossible, then it was impossible. By human standards, at least. She was fighting it tooth and nail but to no avail. The process continued.

“Harkin, put CIWS in local control.” The Captain ordered after a moment’s deliberation, inclining his head towards the Tactical station. “Our sensors may be out but they should work. If it’s moving and it doesn’t have a friendly tag it gets shot down. Then warm up the cannon. Mons I want our nose pointed towards that cluster of signals we saw before our eyes went down.”

A chorus of assent answered as the bridge went to work readying their precautions. Under the circumstances it was the best they could do. Until Tiger reported or until their sensors were restored they could do nothing but prepare for a fight. But if one came they would need to be able to see.

“Novikova.” The Ensign raised her head from her futile efforts, looking almost irritated at the interruption until she met the Captain’s eyes. “The first sign of enemy fire detonate the bolt. We can replace the comms array. We can’t replace the whole ship.”

Novikova nodded, a touch unwillingly. It was the right call. Cutting off the comm array with the old fashioned explosive charge pre-installed would end whatever process this way and free up their systems, but would render them mute and deaf. Worst of all it would deny then any ability to operate offensively in kind, but she had to admit (very reluctantly) that if a foe could do this then she couldn’t-

“We’re back up!” She snapped suddenly, eyes snapping down at a chirp from her console. “No system failures, all systems responding normally. We pushed a tactical update downstream to all deployed units, our IFF was altered, and… Khristos. Sciences are reporting damned near an exabyte of data uploaded to their drives!”

“Status change! Many signatures!” Harkin announced quickly trying to categorize the codes that had began blossoming on his display. Dozens of new icons appeared on the planet’s surface with at least as many in orbit and scattered through the system, filling the void with traffic where seconds before had been silence. “All friendly. IFFs queried, consistent with our altered IFF!”

“Tiger Three is reporting silhouettes on our current heading, obscured by orbital debris.” He continued, flashing the relevant data to the Captain’s chair. Clear it wasn’t, but definite movement had been detected from inside a dense cluster. “Trying to refine.”

As quickly as they were seen the bogeys vanished in an electromagnetic aurora, winking out of existence as though they had never been and taking some of the debris with them.

“Targets lost. Chief Takaya is getting an update from the ground, relaying status changes now.”




Bandit Two screamed.

[ERROR: Data Transfer to PANDORA unable to complete. Suspected Signal Interference. Retry? Y/N]

[UPDATE: Data Transfer f̵r̵o̵m̴ PANDORA completed. Cached tactical data dumped to PANDORA.]

In the span of a second an update was pushed to every device tied into Pandora’s tactical network carrying with it instructions that performed an update and reinstancing of the transponder on every unit. For a split second Kon’s display became a mess of orange, every unit pinged as unknown and giving Merlon an electronic fit before it was corrected and proper coding was reapplied to every detected entity.

Bandit Two died and it seemed to die painfully. A supernova flared from the point just below its spines, shrapnel and flame alike tearing into its surface with wanton delight. The sound of its scream simply stopped more than it died down, ending as suddenly as it began while the alien slumped. What was left of it, at least. The enemy had been nearly bisected and not cleanly. Traces of its armor, or carapace, were scattered in the sand and the remaining sinuous connections between its upper and lower halves were scorched and shriveled. There was no fight left in it, no sign of its earlier malice. And it did not die alone. Bandit One screeched as Fox’s interference began and when Bandit Two died it simply stopped. Voyager impacted, Aurora shifted, and the alien simply fell to the sand limp.

With their cessation the alien Orbital stopped moving, again slumping into the sand that had entombed it for so long.

“Starlight, what are all these readings?” Artemie asked, keeping Voyager at the ready but turning her attention briefly to the status changes from Pandora. “Where did all these icons come from?”

“That’s… A little strange.” The assistant answered distractedly, as though processing. Pandora pushed out a tactical update that added a thirty two bit modifier to each of our transponders. The first eight are shared among all of us, including Pandora. The next sixteen are shared sequentially by all observable Orbitals and the last octet seems to be unique. These icons appeared at the same time and seem to follow a similar pattern.”

<<Pilots, this is Chief Takaya.>> The COO chimed in on their shared frequency. <<Explorer One reached the ship. Now you guys, too. Saddle up and return to the hangar. Something had the bridge’s underwear bunched and we’re going to be checking it out. A security detail is deploying, so leave the hostiles. Bring the Orbital if you can.>>
Hey folks.

Short version, FedEx fought me a lot harder and a lot longer than I expected, assignments piled up, multiple family visits, a birthday, and on and on. The good news is that the post is done (a little shorter than I planned) and is going up right after I post this.

The bad news is, obviously, that it's late. And a lot of stuff went into that in the short term but in the long term it happened because I ran this first "episode" so to speak pretty poorly. Providing only two enemies centralized things in a way that if one person didn't post, someone else couldn't post. And if one or two people didn't post, I wasn't really sure how to move the fight along and preserve momentum without causing problems for myself and for all of you guys. On top of that some stuff that I had pushed back definitively pinning down because it didn't matter yet suddenly mattered right when I was dealing with everyone else, too.

I've got a two-fold strategy to fix this moving forward. Firstly I'm holding myself to having a post done every week on a certain day (to be determined when I check when coursework is going to be due over the summer so they don't overlap) or at least a post explaining what I'm waiting for before I make another one. I'll announce what day that's going to be, and I'm going to hold myself to it. The second part is decentralizing further storytelling a bit so it doesn't all fail if one or two posts don't materialize.

Lastly I would appreciate it if everybody who is still here and wants to stick around could sound off so I can do some planning. If you've dropped me by now I totally understand and no hard feelings at all. I just need to know for my own planning. If it turns out that pretty much everyone has dropped, I'll check in with whoever's left about how we want to proceed.

Sorry again about the problems, and letting you all know I still fully plan to stick with this.
Sorry to hear about your computer. I hope you don't need to replace the GPU.


You'd hope, wouldn't you?

You'd really hope.

Quick update: No progress from FedEx, but all of my big assignments for semester's end will be done after tonight. I've been working when I have time, post will be up before the weekend.
Quuuuick update on me. Finals hell. In addition to finals hell, FedEx trashed my main computer in transit. I have my laptop, but that means where I'm set up is a little more variable.

Short version, everything's on fire.

That being said after today I have no more assignments and I'll be fixing my computer as soon as FedEx pays out. So, I should hopefully have a post up before the weekend. Sorry about the delay on my end.





Wonderful! Perfect!

The tips of her fingers, arms still spread wide, swung to and fro as though coordinating a beautiful symphony. The ebb and the flow, the rise and the fall, the rhythm within the chaos. There was a pattern to it, a beauty. It wasn't a careful, perfect Classical piece; it was Romantic, with all of the rough edges and complex strands that bared the very soul of its performers. And hers, oh hers would be the brightest!

The new girl was perfect, a new instrument to the piece facing the monster with poise and power! Ahhh, her addition would round them out, smooth away the gaps and imperfections until they were a perfect performance. But now, in this moment, it was her spotlight! The devushka would confine it, with strong earthen walls and she would burn it just as the joy burned within her. Oh, this was living! Hell's attacks were parried, Selma fell from above, the strands came together and melded, building and building and building to that perfect crescendo for her to punctuate with-

The beast shattered, and her mood with it.

Crushed with as much finality as Selma's landing, and her perfect performance was finished with a fucking off-note, off-key crash. Her grand finale smothered in its crib, a track cut off right before the climax. How unsatisfying. Her joyous grin curdled, fading into neutrality as her arms lowered. In place of joy she had only sore ankles. She scuffed her shoe against the ground and kicked an icy fragment, grinding the next nearest under her foot as though the Void were responsible for the massacre of her vibe.

Hmph.

"Who's the..."
She stopped, voice flat and ruffled. Rivka jerked her thumb at their new arrivals by way of explanation, deciding the words she had chosen wouldn't be very... Diplomatic. Then she nudged the fallen tree (quite a sound with her toe without looking."You. Who are you? Up, devushka, you're making us look bad."
Yeah the bad news is FedEx trashed my desktop and one of my monitors. Soooo I have a claim going.

The good news is that my post work is in the cloud, so I can work from my laptop. So slight delay, but we aren't too far off track.
Hey guys! Sorry to be saying this after such a break again, but real life kinda got hectic for a bit. Classes, some upsetting family news, all that good when-it-rains-it-pours stuff. On top, of course, of the fact that there were a couple really key posts that I was waiting on. When they finally happened I had gotten busy myself.

The good news is I have been planning, drafting, and writing as much as I can during this, and I've got a good five hours stuck in an airport terminal on my way home with my laptop. If the post isn't up tonight (which even if it's done it may not be, because travel is exhausting) it guaranteed, 1000% will be up by the end of the weekend.

If it isn't Snow is going to physically show up at my house and beat me half to death so.

should be easy for you, right devushka?



By all rights it should have been over as soon as it began. Rivka's shots were perfect, two in succession grouped no more than centimeters apart. Her hand could have covered their path quite comfortably, and they struck with tremendous effect. Hell itself was nearly neatly nicked cleanly in two, nicely nominating her for her rightful acclaim. Its right arm simply separated at the shoulder, cleaved from its form and dispersed with prejudice. But still it remained.

To see it fall intact, to hear the commotion below that signified its survival, was disquieting. It warred with her sensibilities, made assault upon her wisdom, and openly clashed with all common sense. But she recognized the dissonance within her own mind quickly and the world slotted into its new proper understanding. Her brain insisted, despite all evidence to the contrary, that this was a living thing. It simply didn't compute to think of it as anything else. No living thing could cope with such massive trauma; contained within its torso were all sorts of vital organs and squishy bits, things that were supposed to remain intact and inside. Such wounds could only cause death, swiftly at that. Even her assailants at the station would have succumbed, had she the power to pierce their corrupted skin properly. It simply didn't make sense that things thing could still be alive, not even after she had already seen how its smaller kin manifested. But there was the root of the issue.

This Thing did not live. Not the way she understood life. This Thing was naught but Power, Power wrapped around a core somewhere in its being much as she could be thought of Power wrapped around a core called an Armagus. Rivka still possessed all of the incidental squishy bits, the form and functions that made her a human and not simply a gem that controlled Nox. But that had been stripped away, had it ever existed, and this Thing was nothing but power and control. Of course it didn't care if it lost an arm, or a leg, or half its body. It would simply will itself another, as it was already doing far below. It could not be mortally wounded, not without striking the core of its being. Would the same happen to her if someone struck at her Armagus, the prism of her soul? Would she be nullified as effectively, again reduced to merely mortal?

It didn't bear thinking on, but in that flash of insight she understood. If it had no form to wound, and its core could not be found, she would simply have to incinerate its entirety in the fires of creation. Let it burn within her soul, reduced not simply to nothing but erased down to its merest iota of energy. Let whatever remained scatter to the winds and speak her name, warn its kind that a new song had begun and theirs would soon end.

She laughed aloud and waved as Selma dropped like a messenger from the heavens, like the herald of her very own presence. Though, perhaps that was a thought better left unsaid to the girl who could tie her in knots? Still, Rivka didn't much like the idea of dropping to the street below quite so much. Her rocket idea had a lot of promise, but trying to slow a give herself a little bump and attempting a controlled landing were two different propositions. If she couldn't angle straight up and down what would she control her fall with? Her sleeves? Her gun? Did she look like Demonetta?

Actually, the gun thing had promise.

Kto ne riskuyet, tot ne p'yet shampanskoye.

Laughing again, more to cover her own flash of concern with her own plan than anything else, she dove over the edge and felt the wind whip her hair around. She would never reach terminal velocity, not from this height, or she would never attempt such a thing. She waited, and waited, and waited for what seemed like an eternity but transpired only in the merest fractions of seconds until she was about two storeys off of the ground and-

Her rifle ignited, not with a shot but with a plume. Rather than focused, it was diffused; combustive forces erupted form its barrel and in direct opposition to the rifle's path. They pushed it up, and with Rivka's steel grip pushed her up. Not enough to stop her, not nearly, but enough to blunt the forces; and for her to bleed them off even further by using her makeshift booster as a fulcrum, swinging herself down a hundred and eighty degrees to alight on her feet. Well, to hit her feet, feel her knees buckle, and turn it into what she made sure to act as though was a perfectly controlled somersault.

That one actually hurt a bit. Work on that idea.

Still she popped to her feet with no visible discomfort, spreading her arms in an expansive gesture proclaiming her mirth and enveloping the scene before her all the same.

"Selma! A kiln for our new friend, pozhaluysta!"
@Krayzikk: Is everything okay?




Joke aside, we'll go with 'mostly'. I should hopefully have a post up within a couple days, I'm sorry it has taken so long.
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