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    1. KriticalKrab 10 yrs ago

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Note to self: "What have I done?"

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Still accepting?
Yes, feel free to put up an app.
The City is still in disarray, but is it still under attack from the alien crafts or is just the mother ship now approaching?
The mothership has been approaching this whole time, and the alien crafts are returning to the mother ship. Those that are still around are just finishing what they were doing.
@KriticalKrab The bolt in which the guy fired from his lance, what type of bolt is? plasma? Electricity or something else? Also how damaging is the bolt? Just trying to find if Basoth could take a hit from it.
Trident, it's a golden trident buddy, this is essential to plot that you recognize this. Back on track, the bolt is magical, and it would burn right through you. Since you can reconstruct your body you could probably take a hit or two.
Hmm. I'm not... completely sure what to post... any characters in position to interact with mine? ^^;
I placed your character around Scarifar and the patriarch's characters. Although they're flying around they should still be in the area.
March 5, 2020:
The being smashed down the door, eyeing the room he noticed his missing data pad, and an open vent. Carrying an aura of anger and disapproval he slowly turned towards you. "You're one of this Darkseid's furies are you not? Surely you knew we were here, and I have no need for his forgiveness. He knows we have an alliance. But if you and he must know I suppose there's no harm in reminding you, this ship full of incompetent soldiers!" The being shouted angrily and backhanded a nearby alien into the wall, after his short tantrum he continued. "Was sent here to test the waters so to speak, to see if their plan was truly a success. So far it seems to be a failure with all these rodents popping up."
As you stumbled back into the command area you could now see many more beings present, along with the trident wielding being from before. "Ah, so there's our little pest now." The being spoke as he made his way over to you, he turned his armored head slightly to Bellona and spoke. "Perhaps you would like to do the honors, last time I checked you new gods loved blood shed." The being paused slightly. "Apologies, it's Apokoliptians here isn't it? The multi-verse can be so confusing sometimes."
Your unaimed pistol shots, at the most merely grazed various aliens, leaving them largely unharmed. The trident wielding being turned to you. "Ha, they seem to be multiplying. Of course if these slaves were more competent this wouldn't be happening." Spinning his trident rapidly in the air he quickly aimed it at you, and launched a bright blue bolt at you.
Some of the lights throughout the ship began to flicker, as you began to dig in you could feel the ship destabilize slightly, but it didn't seem to be enough to bring it down. Although the ship was nearing the city, you don't know that for sure. The energy of the crystals you had consumed previously began to assault you from the inside, almost like heartburn.
As you searched around the city you soon encountered what appeared to be a disaster area. People were trapped under debris, or pinned down by it, around the area you could see downed ships, and some of them appeared to be dug in the side of various buildings. The ships had electrical burns around the hull, as if they were attacked earlier, however the ships appeared to be in flying condition should you prove brave enough to fly them.
As you scrounged for food you appeared to obviously enjoy yourselves, enjoying yourselves to the point where concealing noise was not an option. Because of the extra noise you and your friends were making you seemed to attract a small round up patrol of the alien invaders. No doubt they were following some of the humans, but your odd appearance seemed to stop them. Looking through the front windows they appeared to be confused, but that feeling obviously left them as they jumped through the windows with weapons trained on you.
<Snipped quote by KriticalKrab> The room I was just in. The control center. Did I not do my post right? Because I can change it...
Well there were two rooms, that side room and the main command area. But now that I know I'll try and put up a story update.
@KriticalKrab I thought about that as well, but with Ironclad being built after the event it wouldn't fit. I can change the woring to make it less childish, though. After that am I free to put him in the Character Tab?
Yes I already said I accepted him, I just wanted to point out something that I missed. You don't need to change it but I would like for you to do it. [Edit] @ScarlettWaters16 Which room are you talking about?
March 5, 2020:
The mothership passed over the small island it was hovering over previously and now continued moving closer to the city, while still above water, it would only be a matter of time until it reached the city.
As the lightening danced around you it seemed to do exactly as you willed it, stricking the remaining aliens in the chest it gave a satisfying crackle. The already disoriented aliens couldn't stand up to your attack and quickly fell backwards, their armor smoking slightly from your electrical attack.
You somehow managed to land in the drop-ship's hangar before it closed completely, how fortunate. Your powerful landing shook the ship slightly, but all appeared to be well, except for the part about being on an alien drop-ship. To the invaders you were simply another body to lock up, quickly drawing their weapons they began to rush at you, careful not to pierce their own ships hull.
If you studied your geography you would be able to tell that the dots were certain cities across the US, however it is unlikely there are any other ships. The water you blasted towards the tall being seemed to have no effect whatsoever. Freezing his legs seemed to merely stall him as it took him but a moment to break free. "Hmph" the alien grunted as he calmly marched through the ice. Unfortunately the room you stumbled upon was not the power room, however it did have multiple things scattered around the room, one of which was a thin pad with letters on it. But you wouldn't have enough time, the large being already seemed to be on the move as the door quickly shuddered under multiple hits. It would seem it would not last much longer.
Your motherbox seemed to manipulate the portal for you, in order to satisfy your wish of seeing their leader, the aliens that were brave enough to follow through simply gestured forwards as you spoke to them. Looking forward you could see the remains of what seemed to be an ice trap on the floor, multiple other aliens with frozen hands, and a large being with a golden trident on the verge of breaking through a door. The room itself had a large blue holographic globe in the middle, with multiple pulsating dots at certain points on the globe.
It would seem Kobby's tactics succeed as the aliens quickly trained their fire onto your spectral birds in an attempt to rid themselves of such an annoyance.
As you bit into the crystals, the power they were supposed to release into the ship released into you, the sheer power of the crystals forced you backwards. However, you were successful in removing the crystal you had grabbed, the crystals themselves were to big to group up in handfuls.
Okay, I edited the Bio to mention that he was built by a group called Paradigm Robotics. If you want more info on this company I would be happy to supply it, but it would take time to come up with a history for it. :)
I will accept it as is, thank you for making the change. Another small thing I forgot to mention earlier, you don't have to change it. But if you could, would you change " replacement for the missing Superman and friends" to something like "replacement in case the league falls." It's something minor and completelymy fault so don't feel obligated to change that, but if you could I would appreciate it.
@KriticalKrabWill we be having another story post soon?
Expect it soon. [Edit] SilverDawn I don't know who the "red suit" is supposed to be. But I have a feeling you wanted to place your guy near River.
Saturday, this should be exciting. Just have to hurry on this last post.
Well, that's awkward. But everyone likes what they like so I'll leave it be, but if I may. What exactly is the attraction to Joker and Harley Quinn, why do you like them?
@KriticalKrab Okay, if it is alright I will get on changing the Bio tonight to give him a place of origin. You are fine with the construction and reconstruction then? @Rin OMG, I grew up on the 90's Batman show! It was (And still is) one of my favorite TV shows!
Yes I suppose I am okay with the construction times, he's not exactly superman level, so I think that it's acceptable. I remember as a kid I only had 1 or 2 episodes of that show, but it was still my favorite show.
This is an alternate universe, you could have made your own. I just wanted a name. Though I can tell you for sure, Cadmus, Wayne Ent, and Lexcorp all exist and will appear if you guys do certain things. If you guys don't then, well they don't show up lol.
I too dislike the Joker, but I don't think I could ever voice it quite as well as you did. As for the grim setting people seemed to favor nowadays, i'm not to much of a fan as well, I can watch or read it but I usually prefer the more friendly depictions. Like some of those older Batman/Superman comics where they work together like partners or brothers.
I want to say no because I have a feeling you'll try to make a hammer to blow up the entire ship with one hit. So, I'm a little hesitant but how about this, It's made of a series of hyper charged crystalline structures that provide power to the entire ship. @ScarlettWaters16 No problem, I'll put up a story post soon if all goes well.
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