@NegatomskI put off reviewing this character sheet because I didn't want to be "that guy" y'know. I didn't want to come back and just be the negative nancy, but I really can't put it off anymore.
Misc Info: Great.
Appearance: Love it.
Personality: Fantastic.
Powers:
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Man I'm just trying to work with you and not be an asshole, but you're making this real hard on me. I really am trying to work with you, but somehow you've posted a character that defies even more of the basic rules of the roleplay.
Okay, so I'm gonna lay this down politely and logically so I don't upset anyone.
The biggest and most problematic feature of this character sheet, from the first power and the first power alone.
Gateway.
This roleplay is segregated from the rest of the multiverse, I wanted to prevent any galaxy spanning empires from appearing and being a strange threat. I wanted to keep this roleplay small, compact, and having only the characters and their connected characters involved in this. It's to keep the scale of the roleplay simple so people aren't feeling disconnected from the other characters. Every character in this roleplay is contained within the confines of this plane, and a power that defies that is problematic.
If this weren't a gateway, and were literally just a digitized portion of hell, I would be okay with this. But as you stated in the sheet. It outright states that it bridges this plane of existence to the Hell. Which is not withstanding in this setting.
If I weren't trying to maintain a set of rules for everyone including myself, I wouldn't bring it up at all. But the rules apply to everyone uniformly, so giving even one allowance of severance from the rules would make the rules meaningless in the first place.
If you make it a duplicate portion of hell, I can accept it. But it CANNOT be a portal to hell.
That's just the first power, there's several more of these to go through. I suppose to clear everything up, I'll have to go through and review every one of these so they don't come into question later.
Hellectricity.
First of all, your naming conventions are solid gold. A+ work, gotta give you that.
But there's only one small problem with Hellectricity.
Repairing himself?
To what degree?
I need upper limits. Becuase if he can just auto repair himself at the cost of "Being Tired." I can't accept that.
Hellfire.
Like fire.
Hellfire.
I gotta be honest, I would be a hypocrite if I didn't let a character who used flame be immune to flame. Especially since it's not constant. So I have no major complaints about this, there's no range but we're all pretty competent people, we understand how it works.
Sin.
I cannot in any way accept this. I hate being blunt about stuff like this, but with literally no description of what Hell Magic is, I can't in good conscience accept this.
Corruption.
I've got an android who would like to say hello. I can't say no to this, especially since it's a non-combative power with very little utility in this setting.
Continuance.
"Fused with a Nigh-Indestructable gate."
"Is likewise incredibly durable."
You're saying that he's Nigh-Indestructable. That's beyond high tier in scope, Nigh-indestructable and indestructable are reserved for objects, not people. Otherwise every high tier character would need an extinction level asteroid dropping on their head to kill them.
I don't know if that's what you mean, but Nigh-Indestructable doesn't have much wiggle room in the term of definition.
Conversion.
How does it enhance the abilities of the weapon? Just makes them better? Adds effects to them? I need specifics here.
Consolidation.
Consuming your enemies, gaining their powers and knowledge? I cannot accept this in good faith.
Creation.
Standard hammerspace, I can accept this.
Conveyance.
Teleportation is above high tier, especially instantaneous teleportation. I cannot accept this as it stands.
Pure Violence.
Standard special fighting style.
Hard Drive.
Acceptable as is.
Hard Drive 2.0.
This is a contained roleplay, a vehicle that is used for space travel is redundant and I think you can understand him not bringing it with him.
This is as polite and simple as I can possibly make it, I'm not trying to be an asshole, I'm not being rude. I'm being honest and contained within the rules and setting that is laid out.