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Current It's been 6 years, but I'm back, baby! Old 4 eyes is back, and hopefully less horribly cringe than I was when I was just starting out! Armed with a keyboard and wit, I'm back.
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7 yrs ago
Hello. It is I, Supernova. I am new here, and I am glad to be here!
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Name: His real name is Svetnoglar, but he refers to himself as Svetlalna or even just Lalna.

Gender: Male.

Human? No, he is a human-like alien raised as a human, so thus he does not know of his true species. Thinks of himself as a human and looks like a human, mostly.

Personality: He is a very intelligent person, and won't let you forget it as he is blunt and thinks of others less intelligent then him as slightly lower life forms, but that has to do with his species. But, dispite his coldness towards others less intelligent than him, he is very kind, and will help people if they are in trouble, because he knows every species has a right to live. He is also a bit stubborn, so convincing him that he is wrong about something or that something he doesn't think is real is real would be difficult.

Physical Description: Svetlalna is a tall man, being a little under 2 meters, being easily the tallest of most groups. He is also a wee bit awkward because of his height, but has decent muscle and stamina to make himself less awkward. His skin tone is lightly tanned, but obviously white, with a bit of fur at the back of his neck and back, as well as a tiny little tail from what the doctors call a genetic mutation, but could well be a result of being whatever species of alien he is. He has a handsome face, and his face is almost a little foxlike, having two small beautiful and calculating hazel eyes ringed with what seems to be stars, a small nose, and sharp(er) teeth.

Favorite Morph(s): None yet, ability undiscovered.
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Not until he's approved.


Ahh, I see, thank you, I understand.

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Also, one can use [noparse][/noparse] if one doesn't want code to actually do anything. Like I just did on the very code to use it. Heh.

@SupernovaBlitz The heck do you mean "love Pokémon for more than is socially allowed"? This is the Pokémon World! Basically everyone loves Pokémon! I don't think there's any social limits on loving Pokémon here! Or do you mean he does immoral experiments on Pokémon the general public would have issue with, or what? XD

That said, I think I would prefer if the hider included his name in front, with perhaps some fluff after if you so wish. The link to his image doesn't work as intended, I have to remove a ".com", which is more than I should.

I will say the first-person all-blue paragraph of background might not have had the effect you were going for. It felt like unnecessary padding when I just wanted the information. Quotes for flavoring can be used in-between sections, but like this it dragged.

So his name is Steven and had a tutor named Stevenson? Heh. Okay. Well, that is perfectly plausible.

Alright, so he trained for months before actually being given his own Pokémon. A little excessive, but alright. Anything to become as efficient a Pokémon trainer as possible, I assume. This background is accepted. *turns to look at fairly well-sculpted world* ... Now to figure out where those parents fit into this.

"a strange bracelet/watch that allows him to integrate technology into it, such as a pokedex, found in a capsule that fell from the sky" - I'm, uh, confused. That one came out of nowhere. Honestly, I might even have considered it if you said he MADE it, because he's that much of a scientific genius, but you're saying it literally fell out of the sky? No explanation? Why do you even need it, it's not like I'm burdening the others with needing to mind how they're carrying all the things in their inventories? I'm afraid that until I know the answers to that I cannot allow you to have this item.

It is the intention that the players is to determine who their first Pokémon that they receive from Kalmia is, even if the character themselves won't know. Now, you didn't claim anywhere that you were done, but you did say you posted it here for review, so I'll say that. Unless you for some reason want me to pick your first Pokémon, make the sheet for that one, too, following the rules in the first OOC page.

@Eklispe Gotcha. Nicely posted, anyway~
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I will edit my post accordingly, and get back on you. When can I post my character in the characters tab?
Ahh, I see, so I made a mistake. Sorry about that, once again, my eyesight is temporarily impaired... But I will do as you say, and fix my post. Terribly sorry. @Balthazar007
Ohh, I see, I didn't notice that before! Blame half my vision going to shit because of an industrial accident with a machine suddenly falling apart due to something to do with a forklift crashing into a machine, but my eye is damaged and cannot see very well anymore, which is probably why I never noticed that.
I think that 7 people could work if we do it well enough, and I have no concerns really. I am glad to start this!
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@SupernovaBlitz you need to learn the codes my friend.

To use a image, you need [img] [/ img] around the link. Minus the space between '/' and 'img'.
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Ahh, thank you. Sorry, I am new to this site and have yet to know how this site uses formatting... I have limited knowledge with stuff like BBCodes and HTML, since I am a chemist, so using HTML-like things in writing is not my forte, however much I write... Sorry...


Oh, I see. Sorry it took me a while to respond, but I had a little accident at my factory that left my one eye injured, and half my face badly wounded. It may take me a while to respond/react for this, while I recover to the accident with a damaged machine. I apologize for this, but these things happen. So, please be patient while it may take me an hour to type a response due to my bad vision. I hope when I can recover we can settle down to a sort of medium. ~Love, Jonathan.
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