@PlatinumSkink

Wow. Another one, huh. Hmm... Lileep isn’t really a favorite but it is up to Erika and what she would do.

@Pirouette say a prayer of thanks to whatever god of fortune let her find that really, really rare pokemon and take it?

@Joshua Tamashii Pretty much.

@PlatinumSkink Alright, that sounds wonderful! I will begin making my OC, and posting him here, for review! Alright, with little time to waste, I will begin.

@SupernovaBlitz you need to learn the codes my friend.

To use a image, you need [img] [/ img] around the link. Minus the space between '/' and 'img'.

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@SupernovaBlitz you need to learn the codes my friend.

To use a image, you need [img] [/ img] around the link. Minus the space between '/' and 'img'.
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Ahh, thank you. Sorry, I am new to this site and have yet to know how this site uses formatting... I have limited knowledge with stuff like BBCodes and HTML, since I am a chemist, so using HTML-like things in writing is not my forte, however much I write... Sorry...

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Ahh, thank you. Sorry, I am new to this site and have yet to know how this site uses formatting... I have limited knowledge with stuff like BBCodes and HTML, since I am a chemist, so using HTML-like things in writing is not my forte, however much I write... Sorry...

No problem. We've all been there. If you look before where you type, there is a formatting cheat sheet. If you press the button that says toggle, it'll help ya.

Ohh, I see, I didn't notice that before! Blame half my vision going to shit because of an industrial accident with a machine suddenly falling apart due to something to do with a forklift crashing into a machine, but my eye is damaged and cannot see very well anymore, which is probably why I never noticed that.

No real action but I figured I might as well put some thoughts down.

Also, one can use [noparse][/noparse] if one doesn't want code to actually do anything. Like I just did on the very code to use it. Heh.

@SupernovaBlitz The heck do you mean "love Pokémon for more than is socially allowed"? This is the Pokémon World! Basically everyone loves Pokémon! I don't think there's any social limits on loving Pokémon here! Or do you mean he does immoral experiments on Pokémon the general public would have issue with, or what? XD

That said, I think I would prefer if the hider included his name in front, with perhaps some fluff after if you so wish. The link to his image doesn't work as intended, I have to remove a ".com", which is more than I should.

I will say the first-person all-blue paragraph of background might not have had the effect you were going for. It felt like unnecessary padding when I just wanted the information. Quotes for flavoring can be used in-between sections, but like this it dragged.

So his name is Steven and had a tutor named Stevenson? Heh. Okay. Well, that is perfectly plausible.

Alright, so he trained for months before actually being given his own Pokémon. A little excessive, but alright. Anything to become as efficient a Pokémon trainer as possible, I assume. This background is accepted. _{*turns to look at fairly well-sculpted world* ... Now to figure out where those parents fit into this.}

"a strange bracelet/watch that allows him to integrate technology into it, such as a pokedex, found in a capsule that fell from the sky" - I'm, uh, confused. That one came out of nowhere. Honestly, I might even have considered it if you said he MADE it, because he's that much of a scientific genius, but you're saying it literally fell out of the sky? No explanation? Why do you even need it, it's not like I'm burdening the others with needing to mind how they're carrying all the things in their inventories? I'm afraid that until I know the answers to that I cannot allow you to have this item.

It is the intention that the players is to determine who their first Pokémon that they receive from Kalmia is, even if the character themselves won't know. Now, you didn't claim anywhere that you were done, but you did say you posted it here for review, so I'll say that. Unless you for some reason want me to pick your first Pokémon, make the sheet for that one, too, following the rules in the first OOC page.

@Eklispe Gotcha. Nicely posted, anyway~

Oh darn. My Inkay .gif is, all of a sudden, deciding to grow three times its original size.

Edit: Well... Couldn't save the original but I found a new one that has a lot of extra blank space so it stretches out my Party list a bit.

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Also, one can use [noparse][/noparse] if one doesn't want code to actually do anything. Like I just did on the very code to use it. Heh.

@SupernovaBlitz The heck do you mean "love Pokémon for more than is socially allowed"? This is the Pokémon World! Basically everyone loves Pokémon! I don't think there's any social limits on loving Pokémon here! Or do you mean he does immoral experiments on Pokémon the general public would have issue with, or what? XD

That said, I think I would prefer if the hider included his name in front, with perhaps some fluff after if you so wish. The link to his image doesn't work as intended, I have to remove a ".com", which is more than I should.

I will say the first-person all-blue paragraph of background might not have had the effect you were going for. It felt like unnecessary padding when I just wanted the information. Quotes for flavoring can be used in-between sections, but like this it dragged.

So his name is Steven and had a tutor named Stevenson? Heh. Okay. Well, that is perfectly plausible.

Alright, so he trained for months before actually being given his own Pokémon. A little excessive, but alright. Anything to become as efficient a Pokémon trainer as possible, I assume. This background is accepted. _{*turns to look at fairly well-sculpted world* ... Now to figure out where those parents fit into this.}

"a strange bracelet/watch that allows him to integrate technology into it, such as a pokedex, found in a capsule that fell from the sky" - I'm, uh, confused. That one came out of nowhere. Honestly, I might even have considered it if you said he MADE it, because he's that much of a scientific genius, but you're saying it literally fell out of the sky? No explanation? Why do you even need it, it's not like I'm burdening the others with needing to mind how they're carrying all the things in their inventories? I'm afraid that until I know the answers to that I cannot allow you to have this item.

It is the intention that the players is to determine who their first Pokémon that they receive from Kalmia is, even if the character themselves won't know. Now, you didn't claim anywhere that you were done, but you did say you posted it here for review, so I'll say that. Unless you for some reason want me to pick your first Pokémon, make the sheet for that one, too, following the rules in the first OOC page.

@Eklispe Gotcha. Nicely posted, anyway~
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I will edit my post accordingly, and get back on you. When can I post my character in the characters tab?

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I will edit my post accordingly, and get back on you. When can I post my character in the characters tab?

Not until he's approved.

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Not until he's approved.

Ahh, I see, thank you, I understand.

Though I am not the gm I might be able to anticipate some problems. Namely that Pokemon are received from Kalmia save for special cases. In this case, unless you PMed our kind GM already, I doubt you have sufficient reason for your special case. And of course there are the other matters that were already brought up. Incidentally if you want help with coding, I'd be willing to help out with whatever is perplexing you at the moment.

I was trying to write a reply, but I just ran out of time.

But I'll mention I'm under the impression that this Vulpix was saved by evil men, left in Kalmia's care, and then she was supposed to give it to him, probably to ensure she gets a real trainer to care for her. Correct me if I'm wrong.

Shall try to finish what I was writing later.

@PlatinumSkink You are correct in the fact that his Vulpix was rescued from an evil group by some trainer, given to the professor, and was meant to be given to him to protect as a proper trainer. So you got that right.

Whew, with any luck I'll do a thing with Claire this evening.