So, uh.
@Joshua Tamashii Nicely posted. I'll have a response soon enough.
@Rune_Alchemist Nicely posted. Alright, I'll see how I have the rest react.
@Pikmin Eye Nicely posted. Okay. Now to get into Gothita's mind a little. Heh.
... Anyway. I'll try to have a post up in 15 to 24 hours, I want to because you're my precious players and I want to give you more, but right now I can't guarantee anything due to the state of things. Yikes, I'm tired.
Anyways. I wrote some comments for the new guy. Here you go.
@SupernovaBlitz I'm kind of perplexed as to why your quotes don't work. I mean, it even detects the quote and snippets it when I quote your quoting post. Oh, well.
Hm. You’re putting me in a bit of a spot here as I have to figure out who these evil people were, what the hell they were doing and why, how they were funded and later discovered, what happened to the other at least 67 Pokémon as well as where the evil men might be now, and why on earth they’d recolor the Pokémon and brand it. That kind of hints that they were never intending this Pokémon to see the light of day and that they had terrible tastes. Usually you just clip an animal’s ear with a tag, they went full on with branding? And why are the colors there? If you have ideas about that, feel free to send them to me in a PM. That’d be plot-things nobody else would know, after all. Also, what did you intend “SCI5” to mean? Because right now, I have no idea. Oh, and expect a lot of strange looks if you have that Pokémon with you when out travelling. … And what on earth’s going to happen when she evolves?
A replica Pokéball, huh? Well, that's basically a toy. Yeah, sure, she can have that.
I must admit I am a little worried that you’d call your Pokémon your “lover”. I’m not going to decline it, but, let’s
-not- explore those limits, okay? XD
Aaaaaaaaand I got to bring up the bracelet/watch again. That he made it is certainly better than it falling from the sky in a capsule, I don’t even know where you got that from and would happily hear it, but it’s still not, like, realistic, even for the Pokémon World. Does it, like, absorb the technology? How does it work? Do you press a button and a full-sized Pokédex springs up from it with a beam of energy like a Pokéball for machines? Or do you get a full Pokédex, but with a much smaller and inconvenient screen so you barely see what’s on it? did you have any specific intentions of what else except a Pokédex you were going to integrate?
Because I’m having a tough time considering why I should allow you to have this item that so clearly borders what’s reasonable. If you present a cool enough case, sure. But right now, if you simply wanted to use the watch in the image for something can’t it just be a cool watch that can be connected to your actual Pokédex so it draws functions from the actual Pokédex instead of, like, absorbing it or whatever it’s doing? The Pokédex is already supposed to be your all-tools-in-one thing, you know. It’s already a phone as well. Anyways, that’s my comments right now.