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Current Is he back? Is he going to show up for 2 days and leave forever? Who knows!
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6 yrs ago
Gonna be real slow during finals time
6 yrs ago
Gonna get all my replies out friday. Life hit me like a brick this week
6 yrs ago
Just cleaned out my Pms. Got a little sad seeing how many old friends are gone.
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A little dude trying to write some fun things with other people. I love to talk with people (especially about different media such as movies, books, comics, art and cartoons).

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@Wasted Ink

Perfect! Accepted!
@Fjanz Way too long a range, and whatever that 'must know how it is' thing, doesn't make sense. You still haven't added the quirk flaw.
@astralGemini I like it! I will say maybe give her an end goal. Instead of 'wanting to create all kinds of styles' maybe they want to make those to make a dojo or something.

Also, can you make so he can only steal one or two other quirks at a time.
@Fjanz

what does that who sentence in quotations mean? Regardless, You never put any sort of limitation on your power. You can manipulate all the light in a room into another room forever. They can also absorb all the light making it impossible to see and even if the other person comes prepared with a flashlight or fire, you can just absorb it, and because you can absorb ALL LIGHT there is nothing to allow them to see, he can also do that forever. The biggest thing is that you can BECOME LIGHT making you virtually impossible to hit ever and never in any danger. Your flaw is not about his quirk, Charismatic is not a skill but rather a characteristic. You did not give him a favorite hero, a biography and his reason to want to go to the academy is not nearly important, considering he has to enroll, go through an intense and rigorous entrance exam, struggle through intense training and studying all just to get strong, considering the school is set up to help people become official heroes. This is the best academy in the world for heroes, why would he do this instead of work on himself. You have to go to these school to be a hero, not to be strong.

Furthermore, earlier you said he could train to get the ability to manipulate matter.

I really suggest altering his power. People in this don't often have element powers. I really suggest trying with a new power.
@LeamonZest89 When we get two more people (Not including Fjanz do to him being unapproved
@Fjanz that power is far too powerful, try a different one.
@Jangel13

I hope things get better for you! If you ever need to talk about it, I am always open.

ALWAYS
I really like what we've done here with Alexi versus Xi Shi. They seem like a very interesting battle.

Alexi's blade is made to cut through swords and break them, where as Xi Shi weilds a Zhanmadao, which was made from cutting down horses. This would mean both sword is very tough, canceling out Alexi's initial sword breaking ability. More than that hers was made purposefully thick and heavy to cut through blades as well.

However, Alexi has a wrist mounted blade, making it versatile and very close combat, allowing her to close distance and make the unwieldy blade Xi Shi uses and thus leave her blade to be more of a burden.

To cancel this, however, Xi Shi is trained is Chinese techniques and was given training in basic kungfu, thus allowing her to stop Alexi from closing the distance with punches, kicks and other unique strikes.

That being said, Alexi does have a wrist mounted blade and punches and kicks would be very dangerous knowing she could be impaled by the blade.

To finish up, both have outside of school combat training that makes them powerful.

It seems to be the only grudge yet and so I eagerly await it to play out!
@sassy1085

As soon as the got to the training room, Xi Shi showed her distaste for the interaction with Alexi by pulling her wooden sword and swinging exceptionally hard at a training dummy set up, splitting her sword in half from the powerful two handed strike. Xi Shi has trained with an oversized sword all her life, at the age of eight wielding a blade a foot and a half longer than her. She had gained this immense strength from her training and it was clear no wooden sword would be able to handle this power. She was trained to break bricks with her arms and wood with her head, this was nothing compared to that. Nozomi spoke of Alexi, most likely seeing the disgruntled new student. Xi Shi turned around and smiled weakly, it was clearly fake.
"I only wish that she does not hurt Arir. I will train now, thank you for your assistance" She declared. Moving towards the wall, she used it to prop her leg up, touching her thigh to the side of her shoulder, past her chest. She repeated this with the other leg before going to do it sideways with both legs. After stretching her arms and upper body out too she moved to the weights, beginning on her curls, curling nearly 100 pounds.
@Fjanz Do it up! We have plenty of time.
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