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“Is that what that was darling’?” Garem said with a smile and a wry chuckle as he cast his gaze up and down over the newcomer.

“I was approached by an older, distinguished looking lady who thrust a piece of paper towards me? Unfortunately though, lite….literar….ummm, reading stuff ain’t exactly my strong suit.” Thrusting a hand towards the girl, he added, “Name’s Garem Vursk. Pleasure to meetcha milady.”

He cast his eyes upwards over the strange yet equally stately looking mansion that was as impressive in its grandeur as it was bizarre with the odd, almost life-like statues that Garem was convinced were looking straight at him. He shook his head, blacking them all out of his mind’s eye as he turned his attention to the woman.

“She said something about this here manor, and dinner, and a job. A well-paid job, may I add, and that was the bit that really got my attention. So I figured I’d show up here and see what’s what.”

It was that precise moment that a creak was heard as the door of the mansion opened, and the same wizened looking woman poked her head out.

Nodding her head, the woman spoke, "The Lady Lavinia will see you now if you would care to wait in the atrium." She gestured past her into the mansion, then she looked at Garem and added. "You didn't bring your dice with you did you?"

Garem grinned, showing his teeth. His hand reached up to touch the expensive looking golden jewellery hanging around his neck.

"I always bring my dice with me."

Reaching into his pocket, he produced two six-sided dice as he walked into the mansion.

@Angstyrainbow
Love her!
Looks good to me @myrkwise. Once your write up is done feel free to add Strix straight into the characters thread.
Fyodor also looks good to go @rush99999, you’re ok to add him to the characters thread. I’ve got to say you’re all giving me plenty of things to torment you with work with, loving it so far.
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@Marrakt I too have finished my CS. What do you think?


Another one from the Feywild :D. She’s great, feel free to add her to the Characters section.
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@Marrakt I believe my character is ready for your review. ^^"


I loved the way you’ve weaved a background there across multiple planes. Feywild to Ravenloft before ending in Icewind Dale and with a potentially angry demon on your tail no less as well. Fantastic stuff. In terms of the sheet should your athletics be at -1 not -2, or have I missed something there? Other than that it’s great, could you add her to the characters thread.

Welcome aboard.

I’ll review everyone else’s characters over the next couple of days, cheers, although I also agree we probably need another healer.
Name: Garem Vursk



Appearance

With a smile and a wink, Garem is nothing if not ruggedly handsome, with a charming, charismatic aura that pervades the smoothness and charm that the man's aura pervades. From his wild, black hair, to his black goatee, Garem's appearance is one of wild charisma.

Indeed, Garem's appearance is all part of the package and appearance that he wishes people to see. Everything has its place, and everything has its purpose, and for him, he would not have it any other way.

His dark eyes are full of light and promise. When one looks into them, they see the promise of adventure and a life they could not possibly imagine. They see a doorway leading into another world, a world that while, perhaps wild and dangerous, is one of excitement and infinite possibilities. His smile steals both hearts and souls, and many a fawning lady would die just to see it for only a few seconds.

His leather jerkin and black tunic looks on the surface like it offers little protection from an incoming blade, yet it is possessed of some strange enchantment that renders it more effective than normal. This, combined with his breeches, simply emphasises the fact that here is a man that lives life on the edge..

Personality

Garem looks like he lives life on the edge, and his actions fully back that image. He is a wild thrillseeker who looks to live life to its fullest. In doing so, Garem doesn't give a damn who he annoys. All those stuffy, fuddy-daddy boring muppets stand in the way of him and his fun. Rafting down a waterfall on a boat split down the middle? Check. Playing chicken with a hill giant? Check. Jousting with dragons? He's got it covered.

Garem lives life solely for the moment. He tends to not get bogged down in inconsequential matters like possible long-term consequences of his actions. Life is for living and damned if he is not going to enjoy every goddam moment that he possibly can. And if he goes down, fine, but damn if he isn't going to take everyone else down with him and still come out of the other side unscathed.

Garem is a man of many admirable traits, but he is also a man of many vices, an unfortunate gambling addiction being one of them. Carrying around a set of loaded dice with him, Garem simply cannot help but challenge any random passers-by to games of chance. Being a thrillseeker, Garem is not beyond letting the dice decide his next actions for him, introducing a level of randomness and chaos that is his calling card. In addition to this, Garem is fond of taverns, booze, and wenching, but not necessarily in that order.

He is a wild, primordial force of chaos, one that cannot be tamed.

Background

Garem was born with the luck of all the gods on his side. Garem was destined for so, so much from an early age. And the young Garem had a fierceness, strength of will and sheer stubbornness to cheat fate and make his life so much better than anything that they could imagine

Garem Vursk was the youngest of two brothers. In the city of Alhaster, his family was a well-known and wealthy one. "Was" being the operative word. The Vursk family, with the exception of Garem, is no more. They had been marked by a dark and powerful family. On one dark night, the Vursk manor ran red with blood and burned with flames brought forth from the power of darkness. Assassins targeted Garem's home, murdering his father and mother in cold blood.

Garem never knew who ordered the attack, he only knew that the assassins were not as thorough in their task as they believed. The last remaining scion of the Mortliasta family, Garem escaped the attack, fleeing into the shadows that consumed his home beneath a tidal wave of destruction.

He fled to Greyhawk, with nary more than the clothes on his back, and a desire for vengeance. Fortunately (or unfortunately depending on which way you looked at it, Garem did not walk the streets of Greyhawk alone for long. He drew the attention of certain individuals in the city, in this case a shadowy guild known as "The Sewer Rats". Taken in by this collection of nefarious people, they fell under the watchful eye of the guildmaster, an enigmatic individual known only as the Red Hand. What he saw in the boy was never explained. It was enough that he was, and he spared no expense in training him in the ways of the shadow. He was to stalk the night like a ghostly wraith, targetting the rich and the well-to-do. From those people Garem would steal indiscriminately, relieving them of their riches and valuables. It was in the guild that Garem met his beloved, the beautiful and gracious thief Vanna, and the two fell in love, a whirlwind romance that would end in tragedy.

Perhaps that was what the mysterious Red Hand saw - an extremely talented individual who would serve his cause well. This continued for a number of years, Garem and Vanna working together, until perhaps inevitably, the duo stole off the wrong individual. In this case a man called Zelkyr, a necromancer of not inconsiderable might. As they tailed the man, Garem felt a strange sensation in the pit of his stomach. Fear. It was something he had not felt before. He should have noticed the colour of the robes that the man wore - black robes that, had Garem been paying more attention, would have identified the man..... Stopping his beloved in his tracks, Garem spoke to Vanna, imploring her to give this heist up and leave the prey alone. Vanna was stubborn and impetuous though, and refused to let any target go. Staying back as she walked the night, stalking silently up to her prey, Garem clenched his fist in fear. Vanna reached into Zelkyr's pocket and withdrew a large gem. A circular stone of darkest night. At that precise moment though, something happened. Something that would burn itself in Garem's memory indelibly for all eternity.

The necromancer stopped and turned to face Vanna, sensing her presence. He hissed, shaking a clenched fist.

"You have escaped! And you try to steal that which you have not earned little thief!"

Vanna turned to Garem, shouting at him, "Flee!"

Yet she was too late, a dark beam shooting out from the necromancer's outstretched hand, striking Vanna squarely in the back. Her eyes widened in pain as her mouth opened to scream. A scream that never came forth as she turned into a pile of dust, the gem falling and bouncing on the floor.

Garem escaped that night, but his soul was twisted and darkened by what he had witnessed and been through. He left Greyhawk, travelling to the port city of Sasserine, fearful of any repercussions from the necromancer, or the guild he had left without a word. And there he dwelt, nursing thoughts of vengeance. Vengeance against the ones who had destroyed his family, and vengeance in particular against the man who had struck down his beloved Vanna.
It was in the confines of the tavern known as the Bloodthirsty Pelican that this story begins. The Bloodthirsty Pelican certainly lived up to its name -- it was the roughest and rowdiest tavern in the Azure District. The entire tavern was drenched from top to bottom seemingly in spilt ale, or perhaps it was blood stained into the rotten, creaking wooden floorboards that threatened to collapse under the weight of so many patrons at one time.

This seedy, dimly light cesspool of debauchery was notable for its illegal underground gambling den and the opium den that was situated next to it. It was a place that the morally decadent and the corrupt could while away their ill-gotten gains. At this moment in time, the air was thick with the smell of tobacco smoke, and it was pierced with the sound of a scream as a thick, heavyset man stubbed out his cigar on the palm of a small, weedy fellow that had annoyed him. In here were the seedy, the fallen, the pirates and the ne'er do-wells within the Azure District.

And Garem Vursk.

Right now in fact, the ruggedly handsome fellow was steaming drunk, having spent most of his day drinking himself into insensibility with the cheap, disgusting pig-swill that the bartender said passed for ale in this hellhole. Standing next to Garem, another fellow with a slightly posh upper class demeanour ordered a bottle of wine, something that amused Garem no end. Holding his hand in the air, he clapped the posh fellow hard on the back as he draped his arm drunkenly over the other man's shoulders.

"A bottle of the house finest? You obviously haven't tasted the pig-shit that passes for wine in this place. Finest my ass, hahahahahahahhaha ughhhhh *hic*"

Garem staggered, swaying drunkenly as he placed his hand on the bar, steadying himself on it before he regained his balance. Waving a mug of ale around with his other hand, he took his hand off the bar to wipe his mouth as he groaned, "I don't think that last one went down too well, uggggghhhhhhhh *hic*."

The door opened and a gust of cool air came in to cool down the hot, sweaty atmosphere in the place. Garem looked around to see a wizened looking, older lady with gray hair and a wrinkled face standing next to him. In her hand she clutched a note, holding it out to Garem, who shook his head.

"Well, hello there.....ugghhh what's that you got *hic*?"

Swaying to both sides, he took the note and opened it. Garem’s eyes squinted as he started to read the finely-written, beautiful flowing script. What the note actually read was as follows:

Greetings, and I trust this missive finds you in good health!

My name is Vanessa Laveine, and I humbly request your attendance at dinner at my estate on Festival Street and Blue Skink Lane tomorrow evening. I think that I can present you with an opportunity uniquely situated to your skills. Please inform the carrier of this letter of your response to this invitation, and hope to be speaking with you soon.

Yours truly,
Vanessa Laveine


However, what Garem saw was a series of squiggly lines that, when he squinted, just turned into a blurry mass of strangeness. He sighed, screwing the note up in a ball as he shrugged, tossing it over his shoulder.

"I can't read."

Then an idea came to him. His eyes brightened as he held his finger up in the air, proclaiming, "AH-HAH!" He reached into his tunic pocket, withdrawing a pair of six-sided dice as he looked back to the woman. "Do you play dice by any chance?"

--Time Passes--

At the designated meeting spot and time, Garem stood outside the large, very fine-looking manor that served as Vanessa Laveine's Manor. The seven-foot-high stone wall that surrounded the estate was impossible to miss, as was the towering, gothic three-story house that dominated the grounds within. Leering gargoyle's and capering nymphs festooned the manor roof. The front gate was open, inviting him to step within.

Garem looked at the gothic architecture and the decorations on the manor, and he smirked to himself as he remarked, "Nice, lady. Real nice. Like crazed serial-killer nice."

Dressed in his finest clothes, a fine black tunic with ruffled white shirt, and fine black breeches and boots, Garem Vursk certainly looked the part. What was different about him than before though was the beautiful golden jewellery that he now bedecked himself in.........

@Angstyrainbow
Hey all, I’ll check through everything when I get back, I’m away for a couple of days.
In all likelihood we will start in Bryn Shander.

I will be away for a few days from tomorrow until Tuesday, so there may be a delay in me responding to questions.
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