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Absolute Comics - Season Two: The Monster Within

@DocTachyon

Absolute Comics - Season Two: The Monster Within

So, one thing I did want to put out there is that there are now multiple Power Rings floating around Earth whilst Hal and Sinestro try to hunt them down. If anyone maybe wants to interact with the rings, I'm more than happy for that to happen.

Examples:
*The Venom Symbiote gets chosen by the Star Sapphire for how much it, deep down, is absolutely madly in love with Peter.
*Lex Luthor's ambition to rule the world gets him chosen by the Orange Ring.
*Magneto's Hope's for a future where Mutants rule gets him chosen by the Blue Ring.

Now, I'm not asking for a Crossover or anything, just saying that, if you think a character in your story getting to weild a Lantern Ring would benefit the story, I'm more than happy to discuss that. It just adds to the size of Hal and Sinestro's search as they track the path of destruction that the Rings leave as they frantically search for a soul to bond with. "Hal, I just got a report that the Sapphire Ring was spotted in New York, attached to a weird, alien slime monster. It has let go and is on the move, but it's going fast and we need to get out there now if we want any hope of catching the damn thing!"

I dont want to spoil too much, but let's just say that, due to some fuckery on the bad-guys part, the Rings are trapped on Earth, unable to leave until they find a suitable host and so, are going crazy from their inability to leave and find the one true being in the universe that they should be bonding to.

Absolute Comics - Season Two: The Monster Within

@Lord Wraith

Absolute Comics - Season Two: The Monster Within

Well, here goes nothing. Thank you again to the GM's for allowing me a chance to try again.

The Lanterns

C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T P R O P O S A L

The Green Lantern

^{_{Hal Jordan ♦ Student ♦ Coast City ♦ The Lanterns}}

C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T:

^{"It isn't easy being Green... Oh wait..."}

This version of Hal is a bit younger, having grown up on the streets of Coast City, he has been in and out of foster homes since he can remember. His father was a test-pilot for the US Airforce, his mother, he doesn't remember anything about. He was always getting into trouble with Officer Stewart, who always tried to keep him on the straight and narrow. It worked for the most part. Hal is known as a sort of Homeless hero, always leaping to the rescue of other homeless that get attacked. Hal has never had a home or anyone to really cling onto as a parent figure. All he can do is keep surviving until he hits 16, when he's allowed to follow his father into the Air Force.

Then, one day he gets a magic ring, and then a man called Sinestro came into his life. Sinestro tells him of the power of the ring, tells him that it is one of 7, Green, Gold, Blue, Indigo, Pink, Orange and Red. He was previously on a team with the other 6 Lanterns, but they were defeated by the Intergalactic Warlord Despero. All he could do was flee to an unknown world and regroup. The Green ring chose Hal and now they need to work together to recover the other 5 rings, lest they fall into the hands of evil.

C H A R A C T E R M O T I V A T I O N S & G O A L S:

Hal is a good man that just wants what everyone else seems to have. He wants a family and the power to protect that family. When Sinestro comes into his life, suddenly, he has a father-figure who can teach him about the world, who can care for him and he can care for. He has a school and he has friends, he has a roof over his head. He has these things now and with the power ring, he's going to make sure nobody can take that away from him or anyone else.

But, in order to do that, he needs to find the other rings. They have been scattered across the planet and, according to Sinestro, are laying dormant until they can find someone to latch onto and grant power to. However Despero is on the way and he has an army and advanced Vanguard, alreaady scowering the planet for the rings. If he gets his hands on them, then he will use their power, combined with his own immense dark magics known as "The Pyre" to conquer the universe.

C H A R A C T E R N O T E S:

Like all heroes, he is only as good as the people around him and the obstacles he overcomes, a quick list of the people you should know about to begin with:

Allies

Thaal Sinestro

Sinestro is the Gold Lantern from the far-off world of Korugar. He was the leader of the Lanterns, a group of people wielding the 7 Rings of Power. Sinestro keeps his background vague, dodging questions about it, claiming his past to be "Too painful to talk about now. Maybe another day." On earth, he uses the alias T Sinclaire.

Carol Ferris

Another of his friends is Carol Ferris, daughter of Carlos Ferris, president of Ferris Industries. 2 years older than him, who he has had an on-again-off-again relationship with since he was sent to a rich foster family living next door to her. He didn't stay with them long, because of how strict their rules were. He still hangs around with Carol sometimes, though her parents hate him.

John Stewart

Somewhat a mentor to Hal, Detective John Stewart, an Veteran from Desert Storm who, after the war, came home and enrolled in the police. He has been looking out for Hal ever since he transferred to the CCPD.

Hector Hammond

Hals only other friend is a petty criminal by the name of Hector Hammond. Hammond is a little fish with big idea's, that he will some day become one of the great heroes of the world, robbing from the rich and giving to the poor. Mostly, it just boils down to him ripping off rich old people with Pyramid scheme's. Hal has had to protect him from angry loan-sharks on more than one occasion.

Enemies

Despero

Intergalactic warlord and pirate. Claims to be the rightful ruler of the universe. He commands an immense warship known as Eye of Darkness. Despero's background is shrouded in mystery, but what is known is that he possesses a mean-streak a mile long and is immensely charismatic and is known for his great acts of benevolence, saving whole planets from the brink of extinction, whilst attacking defenseless Kree, Skrull, Shi'Ar, Thanagarian and Tamaranian merchant vessels. He is even known to have scuffles with the Shi'Ar grand fleet from time to time. He is an excellent military strategist and a powerful warrior, wielding immense powers known as "The Pyre" The full extent of its power is unknown.

Known Powers:
The Pyre (A mysterious power that nobody is quite sure of the extent of. All that is known is that it is some kind of magic)
Telepathy (When his third eye opens, he can hear the thoughts of anyone he looks at, can see into their very soul, can even control them if their mind is weak enough)
Energy Projection (He can shoot energy beams from all 3 of his eyes)

Lyssa Drak

The mysterious and stunningly beautiful right-hand of Despero. Lyssa is a powerful sorceress, who gets all of her magic from the mysterious book that she always carries with her.

Known Powers:
Sorcery (Lyssa wields immense plumes of golden magics that sprout from her book.)
Future-Sight (Lyssa can predict the future with varying degree's of accuracy.)

Larfleeze

Larfleeze is one of Despero's Lieutenants. Nobody knows where this beast came from or what it has been through to get here. All that is known is that he wears an orange uniform with logo of the Orange Power Ring on his shoulder. He is immensely strong and fast, and is one of the most deadly hand-to-hand combatants in the known universe. He uses a large arsenal of weapons that he has collected from fallen foes.

Known Powers:
Super Strength
Super Durability
Super Longevity (It's unknown exactly how old he is, but records show him existing for at least 1,000,000 years.)

Shark

Shark is a strange one. He is a ruthless, unstoppable killing machine that never says a word. He simply follows any order that Despero gives him to the letter. He is one of Despero's most notorious henchmen.

Known Powers:
Super Strength
Super Durability
Super Stamina
Waterbreathing

Doctor Polaris

The self-proclaimed "Master of Magnetism" Polaris was a former warlord of his planet. When he saw that the planet was dying, he put his best minds to work on a suit that would allow him to save them all by harnessing the planets magnetic poles to do his bidding. The suit was completed, but too late. As he began to use the magnetic field of the planet to guide it away from the sun, his time ran out and he saw death coming for his entire planet. Despero and his ships arrived just in time and saved as many as they could. Polaris' people were moved to a new planet. Polaris, in return, pledged his undying loyalty to Despero.

Known Powers:
Magnetic Control (Polaris is able to use his magnetic powers to control metal, shape it to his whim, even make it explode. This can be interfered with when exposed to extreme heat. If he concentrates, he can create a localised magnetic storm, completely disrupting all electricity in the area and rendering most machines inoperable.)

Paibok

A Skrull working for Despero as one of his Lieutenants. Formerly an espionage agent for the Empire, he was charged with infiltrating Despero's ranks. He, however, had no idea that Despero's Pyre gave him the ability to read minds and he was immediately captured. Despero then made him a deal "Work for me, or die." Seeing that the writing was on the wall, he agreed.

Known Powers:
Super Strength
Super Durability
Super Stamina
Flight (Can sprout wings from his back at will)
Shapeshifting
Hypnosis
Elemental Energy Blasts (Ice and Electricity)
Steel Skin transformation

Bakin

The Spaceknights of Galadoria are an ancient and sacred order, sworn to don the sacred armour and fight the evil scourge known as The Dire Wraiths at every turn. Sometimes, they go rogue. Bakin spent years hunting Dire Wraiths on a world full of evil. He soon began to question why he even bothered, since the Wraiths were usually nicer than the people they were replacing. He abandoned his position and became a bounty hunter, hunting and killing the real evils in the world. Every so often, hunting the Dire Wraiths come back into his crosshairs. He enjoys this as it feels nostalgic.

Known Weapons:
Neutralizer (A Special weapon designed to send Dire Wraiths to Limbo, but also has a high-energy kill setting)
Analyzer (Built into the helmet of his, the Analyzer allows him to see shapeshifters in their true form, mainly used for finding Dire Wraiths, but also usable in tracking down other shapeshifters)
Plandanium Armour (Armour worn by all SpaceKnights, the armour is nie indestructible and self-repairing, it grants him the following powers:)
Super Strength
Super Durability
Flight
Omni-Survivability

S A M P L E P O S T:

It had been a good day for Officer Stewart. Nothing particularly bad had happened. Special Victims was usually a hellish beat, full of rape victims and abused children, but today had been good. One of his "Victims" kidnap victims had turned out to be a hoax from a dissatisfied foster child (Best possible outcome) He had finally gotten a search warrant for a pedophile's house and best of all, the lady at the sandwich shop slipped an extra gherkin into his sandwich without charging. Walking into the station, he nodded to the secretary and smiled as he headed to the elevator. Getting inside, he breathed a sigh of relief. It was going to be a quiet evening of paperwork, the best kind. The lift played the latest cheesy top-40's pop song that had been annoying him for the last 2 months, but he was determined to not let that spoil a perfectly good day. The door opened and he saw, charging towards him, a beaten and bloodied teen. "4532! GET THAT KID!!!" Yelled another officer. 4532 was the code for escaped suspect. Stewart lunged forward, spearing the kid almost out of his shoes and getting him on the ground.

"OOOOOOOH!!!" The kid wheezed "Ya got me..." John began to get up, before realizing who it was he had just brutally tackled.

"Hal?" He asked.

"Sorry, officer, i didn't get the plates..." He groaned as a pair of officers ran up and turned him over, putting cuffs on him.

"Look, Hal, i'm sorry, instincts. Look, boys, what did he do?" He asked. One of the officers looked at John.

"Vigilantism, Theft and resisting arrest."

"Ok, i did 1 and 3, but-" John glared at Hal

"NOT ANOTHER WORD!!!" He grunted. "I'll book him in, i'll get him talking. For the love of god, tell me you read him Miranda?" He asked. The officers nodded. "Again, Hal?" He asked as he pushed Hal towards the booking office.

****

Hal sat in the interrogation room, looking around at the four walls and the 2-way mirror. He had a pair of bloodied tissues up his nose, blood dried on his forehead and a blackening eye and an ice-pack on his head. "COME ON!!! I DON'T HAVE ALL DAY!!!" He yelled. The door opened and John walked in.

"For crying out loud, Hal, what did you do this time?" He asked, walking over and sitting down. Hal just stared.

"Look-"

"Hal, i can't keep protecting you like this. Vigilantism, despite what the Media would have you believe is a crime."

"Bu-"

"Hal, look at me!" John ordered. Hal looked him in the eye. "Is your name Batman? Is your name Captain America? Is your name Supergirl? When it is, then i'll start looking the other way on these Vigilantism charges. As for Theft-"

"No!" Hal slammed his fist on the table. "Look, i have done a lot of shitty things in my 15 years on this planet, but i have NEVER stolen anything from anyone!"

"The officer who you lifted the keys from in that Steve McQueen impression begs to differ-"

"Besides the point, i didn't steal anything other than that today" He sighed.

"The report says that you were found with an... Emerald ring?" John asked.

"Yep, and i didn't steal it." Hal replied, burying his face in his hands.

"You found it?" Laughed John.

"Nope..." Hal replied. "It found me." John stared at him with a face that said Well, that's a new one for me "Yeah, i wouldn't believe me either..." He groaned. "But i've got proof." John continued to stare, his poker face not relenting. "That ring was put in evidence, correct?" John flicked through the report.

"Yyyyyyyyes." He replied.

"Then would you kindly explain why it's in my pocket?" He asked, pulling it out of his pocket. John got up and instinctively grabbed a handkerchief from his pocket and closed it around the ring in Hal's hand. .

"THE HELL DID YOU DO!?!?!?" He roared. "YOU BROKE INTO EVIDENCE?!?!?" John was clearly fuming, despite Hal not changing his face.

"Nope, i was locked to that chair for half an hour, then i got the keys and immediately bolted for the door. I never had any time to break into evidence. Plus, how many locks are on that door?" He asked. John's face was now just confused. "Alright, now put it in your pocket and walk out..." He said. John was confused, but complied, wrapping up the ring, he put it in his pocket, before walking out. He then looked in through the mirror and saw Hal hold up his hand, dangling the ring in it. John stormed back in.

"How did you do that?" He growled.

"Magic." John looked at him with angered disbelief this time. "Alright, let me tell you the story."

****

2 Hours Ago

Hal walked down an alley on his way back to his current squat, whistling. It was a little cold at this time of the year. He heard someone yelling around the corner and immediately set off at a run. Rounding the corner, he saw an old man being beaten by a man whilst the other one grabbed his wallet. "Hey, leave him alone." The 2 men looked at him, one of them grabbed a pipe. "You want to take on someone, try me, i got more cash than him." Hal yelled. The 2 men ran towards him, Hal ran towards them as well.

Dodging under a swing from the pipe, Hal pressed his feet firmly on the ground, before pressing forward and lunging into the mans chest, tackling him to the ground. As he leaned up and punched the man he tackled across the face, he was grabbed from behind, under his arms. He instinctively went limp, letting his hands flail a little as he tried to slip through the grasp, but it was futile and he was dragged off, before the man he tackled got back up and punched him in the face, before grabbing the pipe and delivering one last blow, leaving Hal on the floor, blood spirting from his forehead, he coughed heavily, a hoarse cough. He tried to crawl to the wall, trying to get up.

"STAY DOWN!" The man called, smacking the pipe into Hal's back and he fell down the wall, before trying to get up again. "Tell you what, this kid doesn't quit. Think you're fucking Iron Man or something?" He asked. He tried to get up again as the pipe went into the back of his skull, smacking his nose into brick, he fell down coughing again, this time, a little vomit came out. Blood spraying from his nose. Hal tried to get up again, the world going dark. Then suddenly bright.

"So this is what death feels like..." He giggled in his throes. Then it went Green "Wait, that's different..." Suddenly, everthing felt good... The pain started to melt away.

"HAL JORDAN, I SENSE GREAT WILL IN YOUR HEART! SAY THE OATH AND JOIN OUR RANKS!!!"

Hal opened his mouth as his eyes started to glow

"In Brightest Day, In Blackest Night
No Evil Shall Escape My Sight
Let Those Who Worship Evil's Might
Beware My Power, Green Lantern's Light!!!"

Hal suddenly was stood, staring at the men, his clothes were different. One of the Men began to run. Hal put his hand forward and, bursting from the ring, was a giant hand that streamed forward and wrapped around the man, before pulling him back and hitting his partner in crime with him. The two men sprawled onto the floor. One got up and swung the pipe at him, A Green sword appeared and shattered the pipe in his hands, before another fist appeared and the mugger was down for the count. Hal stood shaking, he looked at his hand and saw the green ring. He pulled it off and the light disappeared, his clothes going back to the bloody, slightly vomit-soiled mess they were previously. At that point, a pair of police rushed into the alley.

"DROP YOUR WEAPONS!" Yelled one of them, pointing his gun at them. Hal threw the ring down and one of the cops grabbed it with a handkerchief and put it into a ziplock bag, before cuffing Hal. "You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can be used against you in court. You have the right to talk to a lawyer for advice before we ask you any questions..."

****

John stared at him again. "What the fuck was that?" He asked.

"Well, if you let me put the ring on, i can prove it-"

"NO!" John grabbed Hal's hand. "Do NOT put that on... Look, i don't know if it is Magic or not, but if you put that on then there's nothing i can do to protect you..." John buried his face in his hands "Alright... Here's the deal... I can reduce the Vigilantism to Defense of Another, i can get the Theft dropped, but you shouldn't have run. Resisting Arrest is only a Misdemeanor, so nothing that will keep you out of the Military, but i will need to turn you over to your foster parents-"

"No deal!" Hal yelped.

"It's that or bye-bye Air-Force." John growled. Hal flexed his fingers in thought.

"What if-"

"You don't get it, do you?" Asked John "There's no negotiation in this, i'm handing you a Get-Out-Of-Jail-Free card. You can take it or leave it."

"I can't go back to them..." Hal groaned. "My "Dad" is going to kill me because i set his weed plants on fire."

"Weed as in..."

"Cannabis, Ganja, Kush, Hash, whatever you call it, smokey-feel-good." John stared daggers at Hal.

"If you're lying-"

"It's Bye-Bye Air-Force, i know." Hal leaned back and crossed his arms. John got up and walked to the door, looking out and seeing that nobody was watching. He walked back to the desk and sat down.

"Mention this ring to no-one. There are some fucked up stories going around with what happens to people with things like that..."

"What about the other guys, they'll say i-"

"It was Supergirl... Or The Flash... Claim it was anyone else, do not let anyone else know who you are and what you can do. In the meantime... I'm going to get on to investigating your fosters. You'll be held in custody whilst we decide the next course of action." He got up and walked out. "Chin up..." He replied, as he was closing the door.

****

2 weeks later

Hal sat in an office. Today was the day that he would meet his new Foster parents. He sat at the desk and let out a sigh. He was already making plans for an escape. The door opened. "Hal, this is Thomas." the Social Worker said. "We know that you have had a real problem with multiple authority figures, so we thought that a single parent might be more your speed." The man that walked in was not what Hal expected.

"Hello, Hal. It's nice to meet you." The man said with an emotionless face. "Can we have a moment alone?" He asked. The Social worked smiled and nodded, before leaving the room. Thomas walked over to the door and made sure the woman wasn't looking in. She had gone to get a coffee "Alright, Hal, let me level with you, i'm not a foster parent." He said.

"Thank god?" Hal asked with a confused expression. "Or is this one of those "Waking up in a bathtub full of ice without my liver" things?" Thomas stared at him, not understanding what he was saying.

"I'm like you." He said, completely ignoring what Hal had just asked. He showed him the Golden Ring

"I... Don't know..."

"In brightest day, in blackest night..." Thomas said.

"You know? Are you a Green Lantern too?" He asked.

"No, you are THE Green Lantern. I'm the Gold Lantern."

"Gold is so much cooler than green..." Hal sighed.

"I was the leader of the Lanterns until recently, when your predecessor was killed. The Rings look for those most worthy to wield them. You have been chosen. If you want to know more, then you tell that social worker that you're happy to come home with me... If you want me to take the ring and give it to someone else, give you your life back, I can do that... Your choice." For Hal, time stopped. What the hell was he supposed to do? If he went with this man then he was opening up the pandora's box that he couldn't close... The door opened and Hal launched himself into Thomas' arms, embracing him in a hug.

"I love you, daddy!" He yelled. The Social Worker dropped her coffee.

P O S T C A T L O G:

A list linking to your IC posts as they're created. This can be used for a reference guide to your character or to summarize completed arcs and stories.

Digimon: The Convergence of the Human and Digital Worlds

I just popped in to brag about this glorious motherfucker i just bought to find that you had fucking shanghai'd Dirk behind my back. I'd fuckin' ban all y'all if i was still your fucking tyranical dictator.

I'm not mad, i just wanted to brag about finding this thing in a charity shop for £5, still boxed.

[Denied] Jedi Knight Korrsh

OoC

How long do you usually write?:
Usually Several paragraphs, but it can be longer or shorter, depending on the situation. Generally, my post length is whatever i feel it needs to be in order to get the message across.
Do you enjoy writing collaborative posts for things like conversations, combat, etc.?
Generally, i enjoy writing conversations. Combat is also fun, but my favourite form of writing combat is on the losing side, as i find the paniced thoughts and involuntary bodily actions of someone on the losing side to be a fun thing to write about.
Is grammar and depth of writing important to you?
It is to an extent, but i tend not to always make sure every post is immaculate.
Are there any writing subjects you particularly enjoy exploring?
Generally, creative writing... I mean, i don't particularly understand the question
Is there anything you really dislike and want to avoid like the plague?
Death Troopers. I fucking hate them in Star Wars, they are the absolute stupidest fucking thing ever put into the genre "What if we throw Zombies at Han Solo?" is really scraping the bottom of the barrel.
Is there something you are uncomfortable with happening to your character?
Nothing specifically. I'm fine with anything that advances his character.
Do you have any short-term or long-term goals with this character?
Yes, the long term plans for him are quite extensive. Essentially, the key plot-points will be as follows:

Spoilers

*Korrsh has a number of back-alley treaties with the scoundrels and rogues of Coruscant. During one of his missions, he hands over just a little too much.
*This overextension of Korrsh's grip allows one of the gangs to go on the offensive against another, pushing into their territory. When Korrsh and his Apprentice go in to stop the fighting, his Apprentice is killed.
*Korrsh's involvement in the matter is found out and he is sentenced to Exile from the Jedi Order.
*Going underground, Korrsh hires an old bounty-hunter friend of his to help him fake his own death, before he returns to Nar Shaddaa.
*Arriving, he quickly uses his affinity with The Force to overpower and oust one of the local crime-lords, before inserting himself into the local power scene in his position
*He goes out looking for force sensitives and is able to soon find a few and recruit them into his fold.

Jedi Temple Public Records

Name: Jedi Knight Korrsh
Species: Hutt
Homeworld: Nal Hutta
Age: 271
Gender: Male
Rank: Knight
Master: None
Former master(s): Master Ludo Plots (Deceased)
Apprentice(s): Padawan Talisha (Zabrak, Current)
Jedi Master Undrik Brant (Human, Former, Deceased)
Jedi Master Vuka Jiktu (Jawa, Former, Deceased)
Padawan Luke Brunside (Human, Former, Deceased)
Jedi Knight Moktus Grund (Rodian, Former, Deceased)
Jedi Master Mina Bozworth (Cathar, Former)
Jedi Knight Kegresh (Bothan, Former)

Jedi Temple Internal Records

_{Detailed appearance. Imagery insufficient.}

Korrsh is a typical Hutt, 6'2 tall and 14' long, his skin is an off-grey, with a green underbelly. His eyes are large, amber orbs, full of great intelligence and wisdom, He wears a beige robe over his form, with a brown cloak that stretches from his head, down to the base of his tail. Hutts are not known for their mobility, but to remedy this, he is equipped with "Mobility Legs" Spider-like legs that run down his tail and allow him to keep up with other Jedi. His lightsaber, that is always on his belt, is an electrum-plated Lightsaber with a slightly longer handle in order to accommodate his large hands.

_{Report on natural ability with the Force, as well as all known Force Techniques and the skill level.}

Korrsh's alliance with the Force is his greatest strength. He has a natural affinity with the Force's ability to manipulate the minds of others. He uses this to remain inconspicuous. Even in the crowded streets of Coruscant, he's able to remain completely anonymous and unnoticed. Not invisible, but unregistered. He is a master of interrogation, able to pull the thoughts from some of the most hardened mens lips, make them dance to his song. He is also known to use this ability for offensive uses, forcing aggressors to fight shadows. Convincing them that all of their worst nightmares have come to kill them.

This ability to influence others minds might also explain why he has such an ability to influence the programing of Droids. Korrsh likes droids, their ability to survive, to be programmed to perform any task given to them and an inability to corrupt them using such things as promises of power and wealth. He, however, can use his control over the force to overload their central systems and shut them down. Simple droids, on the otherhand, he can use the force to forcibly activate subroutines that will make them docile and compliant. In more advanced combat units, those subroutines are far more complex and the extent of this power can be used to distort their ability to precisely target.

Like all Jedi, he was trained with telekinesis. Although his legs allow him to move with the speed of a bipedal, he is not even nearly as dextrous. To allow himself to combat far more agile foes, he has perfected a technique that allows him to wield his lightsaber using The Force as if it were his own hands. He has mastered the technique with a single lightsaber, but is currently working on the ability to use a second as well. His ability with Telekinesis has also given him the ability to lift himself to help him reach higher area's.

His current efforts, in as far as his ability to use the force is concerned, is the ability of Precognition. He is currently trying to see into the future. He is so far able to get small twinges when in immediate danger, but nothing as elaborate as some of the masters who can see whole events days before they happen.

_{Report on skills not directly rooted in the Force, including level of skill}

Like all Hutts, Korrsh has a large and complex brain, this brain allows him to perform mathmatics and problem solving immensely faster than others. Some have told him that, had he not been a Jedi, he would have made a great businessman. This also extends to him being a great tactician, he has been known for coming up with great battle-plans when it comes to crackdowns on gang-hives and Black Market raids.

He is also an excellent diplomat. Even though his mind-affecting force abilities are immensely powerful, he also has the charisma to convince others as well. Korrsh has sat in on many a territorial dispute among families and factions within the Republic, able to mediate with great wisdom.

_{Report on known combat experience, training and lightsaber training.}

Like all Jedi, he is well trained in Form I: Shii Cho, due to all younglings being trained with this stance. Due to his fluentness with this form, he favours this when using his telekinetic Lightsaber fighting.

Of course, due to being a very large target, he quickly learned to favour the form Form III: Soresu, due to its defensive properties. When he first draws his saber, he will go for this first to secure his position, before deciding how to proceed. He does consider himself quite the master of this form.

After "Mastering" Soresu, he has started to properly expand his horizons by beginning to learn Form V: Shien / Djem So, which is a natural progression, due to its similarities to Soresu, however, is a more offensive variant. Usually he will transition from Soresu into Djem So after the fight has started in earnest.

_{Detailed notes on political influence and associates.}

The Jedi order has always had a love/hate relationship with the Hutt Gangsters. Mainly because they are two orginizations that cannot really hurt each other. The Jedi have no jurisdiction in Hutt Territory and the Hutts like it that way. The Hutts only ever talk cleanly to their own kind, which almost immediately pegged Korrsh as the key diplomat for whenever the Jedi Council need to contact the Hutts. Korrsh has a lot of contacts in the Hutt Cartels and has spoken before the grand council on more than one occasion.

_{Detailed notes on known rivals and enemies, outside and within the Order and Republic.}

He has an affinity for making friends. Enemies are useless to him. However, he does rarely see eye-to-eye with the Grand Master.

_{List and description of other known associates, including intimates.}

Korrsh's main beats are Corscant and Nar-Shaddaa He has the following contacts:
Gloorak (Rodian member of the "Cannock Crawlers" swoop gang in the Coruscant undercity)
Matrika Poondok (A Cyborg Mon Calamari Bounty-Hunter on Nar-Shaddaa)
Inuel Kai and Renny (A Talortai and Human pair of scoundrels who constantly tip-toe around the law and perform any and every job imaginable.)
Kolkar (A Kyuzo Mercenary who works for whoever will pay him. Korrsh usually hires him as back-up on missions on Nar-Shaddaa.)
Runtak (A Gand Crime-Lord in the Coruscant undercity. Korrsh helps him to expand his territory in return for information)

_{List of all known ownerships, including vessels, (non-standard) equipment, and locations.}

Sleepy Rancor (A Starscape-II-class Freighter. An upgraded version of the old Yachts, in that it sacrifices a lot of its comforts, in return for storage space. Although he doesn't technically own it, as it legally belongs to Inuel and Renny. He does, however, own it as a form of collateral, since it is his money that actually commissioned it, built it and keeps it flying, Inuel and Renny just use it for their purposes, as well as performing missions for him.)
Jewel of Coruscant (The Jewel is a Defender-class light-corvette that he owns and is his official craft that he uses to get from place to place. Although he isn't a very good pilot, he uses Enty to chauffeur him.)
NT-302 "Enty" (Enty is a customised droid built by Korrsh in order to be a Catch-all companion. Enty is an excellent pilot and air-combattant, as well as having access to the Holonet to keep a track on his allies movements, as well as for making quick contact with his informants and his bank accounts. He was originally built by Korrsh to assist in his training of Talisha, who wished to become a Jedi Ace, but has evolved over time.)

_{Psychological evaluation of Jedi Order member.}

Korrsh is an enigma. Although it is always a welcome sight to see a member of the Jedi Order that is of an... Uncommon background... It is slightly unsettling. Hutts have a very specific talent that they seem to have evolved over their history and that talent is crime. Korrsh seems to know how it works and how to make it work for him, which is not always a bad thing. The Jedi Order is pledged to keep peace in the galaxy, but they are also pledged to be realistic and sometimes crime and peace have to coexist. He seems friendly towards everyone that he meets, but there is always an heir of dishonesty behind that initial amiability.

Korrsh is not believed to be any real liability to the Jedi Order, after all, he has trained multiple Padawans to Knighthood, but he has always skirted that line of the law and many, the Grand Master included, believe that he will, one day, go to far.

_{List and description of known and suspected flaws. To be put into restricted database.}

Being a Hutt, Korrsh has sever mobility issues if he is without his cybornetic legs, they are most certainly his weakness, cutting them off will leave him able to move at, pun intended, a slugs pace.

His other flaws in his methods. Many of his means of bringing in criminals are what the rest of the council deem as "Skirting on the side of outright illegal" The Jedi have always been ones for their many codes of conduct and Korrsh seems to be pre-desposed to breaking them or, at least, bending them to the point that they are starting to crack. This has earned him the ire of most of the council. But he is a man that believes that the ends, almost, always justify the means.

This way of thinking is why he is one of the longest serving knights that has never been given the title of Master, despite having trained many students that have gone on to become Masters.

_{known interests of the force-user.}

Korrsh has very little in the way of actually known interests. It is known that he very much enjoys watching Pod Racing on Malastare. His other main interest is reading. After spending 20 years as an archivist, he has become quite fond of reading about the histories and sciences catalogued within the archives.

_{Major achievements on record.}

Securing safe use of Hyperspace lanes through Hutt space for Republic Forces.
Clearing out multiple notorious gangs in the lower city, including the Black Riders, Mynock Squadron, The Uscru Pirates, The Hyperspace Angels and, recently, even a notorious Hutt by the name of Galdradi.
Training many Padawans to Knighthood.

_{Major failures on record. Confidential.}

The Corellia Incident.
Abandoning his post during the Sith Sacking of the Jedi Temple.
Failing to prevent Luke Brunside's fall to the Dark Side.

Interview

_{Personal biography, as detailed by the candidate for use in Jedi archives. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note.}

Interviewer: "Good day, Master. I'm glad you could take time out of your busy day to answer some questions for this interview."
Korrsh: "It's my pleasure. I hope you do not mind Talisha's presence."
Interviewer: "Not at all, i'm also surprised to hear you talking Basic."
Korrsh: "Yes, it is odd. In my peoples culture, it is seen as a great dishonour to speak in a language other than Huttese. But the Jedi are my people, I speak your language in order to show respect. Other Hutts refuse to speak your language in order to demand your respect. They see Huttese as "A language so beautiful, that to sully ones tongue with another language diminishes us." *Chuckles*
Interviewer: "Indeed... So, tell me about your early life."
Korrsh: "Well, what is there to tell? I was raised within these very walls. I lead a surprisingly unremarkable life as a Jedi, despite being the only one of my kind here, or at least, no more remarkable than any other long-lived species Jedi."
Interviewer: "So, how did you get brought here?"
Korrsh: "Father thought he was untouchable by the Cartell's. He was wrong. His right hand, a Devaronian by the name of Fimbalt brought me to Coruscant, to be raised by Father's old friend Galdradi, but before he could meet, he was stopped at customs and was brought for questioning. That is when Master Plots found me."
Interviewer: "Master Plots?"
Korrsh: "Yes, Ludo Plots, an Ugnaught. He sensed my latent potential and brought me to the Temple to be raised. Fimbalt was wanted for murder. Most of the Jedi, at the time, didn't want someone like me to be brought into the Jedi. Master Plots faught hard to get me instated as a Youngling"
Interviewer: "So, if it hadn't been for Plots, you may never have become a Jedi."
Korrsh: "Not at all. You need to remember that this is shortly after the end of the Civil War. The Jedi order was broken, fractured. It there was no option for bigotry."
Interviewer: "So, there's Bigotry within the order?"
Korrsh: "Do not twist my words. What i meant was that we all make judgements based on race. Not always bad judgements, but judgements nonetheless."
Interviewer: "My apologies."
Korrsh: "Anyway, i spent the next 10 years as a youngling, before finally being given my Padawanship. Master Plots was... A tough master. He had me perform many a... Demeaning task..."
Talisha: "Like when you get me to scrub the urinals?"
Korrsh: "I wish. Master Plots had me haul computer consoles from the bottom floor to the hangar, without use of the force or any technology." *He sighed, staring at his arms, before pulling the flaps of skin dangling from it.* "I actually became quite muscular at the time. 2 centuries have not been the kindest to me... Anyway, Master Plots trained me to be the man i am today. We fought some pirates, droids, gangsters and... Well, we parted ways. Master Plots had other padawans to train, i had my own Padawans to train."
Interviewer: "Yes, tell us about your Padawans. I have heard you pride yourself on your abilities as a teacher."
Korrsh: "Pride is a path to the Dark Side. But yes, i do feel proud of my Padawans. So, my very first Padawan was just after Master Plots had taken on a new Padawan of his own. I needed either a mind to mold me or a mind i could mold myself... Undrik was such a bright boy. He was always trying to tell me how the code worked. I swear he had the entire thing burned into the inside of his eyelids. I like to think of Brant as my success, but in all honesty, he pretty much taught himself. He was so driven. He became one of the most brilliant minds the Order had and one of the key reasons it was able to get back onto its feet after the Civil War. Vuka was next, by the force i swear i rarely understood a thing that boy said. I am fluent in Trade-Speak, but he was always talking so fast. I think half of the things i said to him in those first 6 years was "Wait, slow down and annunciate" Almost as bad as you are when we start talking about Starships." *He pets Talisha on the head*
Talisha: "I just want to make sure that i know everything. I plan to pursue a path as a Jedi Ace."
Korrsh: "Vuka grew into a fine knight who always had an interesting set of students. His first was a Wookiee, then a Karkarodon, a Lasat... He seemed to have a thing for students that would become big. Maybe he had a short-man's complex... Anyway, after Vuka was off on his own, i had Luke. He was a little older than i was used to, he was immensely powerful in the ways of the force. The order found him in the burned out wreckage of a crashed freighter. His connection to the force was... Too powerful. I trained him as best as i could and he was right on track to becoming a fine knight... Then the incident..."
Interviewer: "Would this be the Corellia Incident?"
Korrsh: "Yes..." *Korrsh's eyes frowned*
Interviewer: "If you do not wish to discuss it, we can-"
Korrsh: "No... I have come to terms with the Corellia Incident. It was shortly after Brant had been granted the rank of Master, after Vuka took on his first apprentice. I was reunited with Masters Plots and Brant for the first time in a while. We had received word of a Dark Force-user on Corellia and the 3 of us went to check it out. I brought Luke with me. I thought that, by showing him the dangers of the dark side of the force, he may be persuaded to never go there. It worked on me with Master Plots, it worked on Brant, it even worked on Jiktu... When we were confronted by the man... It wasn't a Dark Force User... It was a Sith Lord and a powerful one at that. Called himself "Darth Karanus" The three of us did what we could, even the Padawans tried to assist, ambushing him as we fought through the streets of Coronet. All that i remember about him was... That mask. That cold, dead mask. Like peering into a wound in the universe itself... Brant was the first to fall, lost his legs and an arm to that thing. He destroyed my mechanical legs and i was unable to keep up without them. Master Plots rushed off ahead as he, his padawan and Luke chased them. By the time i got there, all i found of Master Plots was his cloak, his padawan was dead, slumped over it and i saw Luke with his Lightsaber through the monster's throat. I tried to get in, but as the beast died, it brought the entire building down around us. I was barely able to get out."
Interviewer: "And Luke?"
Korrsh: "Luke was trapped in the rubble. It took us 3 days to dig him out. When we did... He was different. He was quiet. It was amazing, he had just killed a Sith Lord, i thought he would go on to do great things. I completely missed the thing that was growing inside of him. We never found Master Plots' body. But we burned his Padawan. After that, i went back to training Luke. We had a few more run-ins with pirates and the like, but he was far more brutal this time. I saw him... Almost torturing them... I could see he was enjoying it. I took him back to the temple, put him in the meditation chambers and went to the council. When we came back, he had escaped the temple. We decided that he needed to stand trial. I helped them to bring him in. We chased him through the underlevels of Coruscant... That's when we found him, he had constructed a crude version of that mask that Karanus had worn. He was powerful, far more powerful than any fallen Jedi i had ever fought, but he was no match for the Jedi Masters. He wouldn't be brought in alive."
Interviewer: "You killed him trying to capture him?"
Korrsh: "No, we successfully subdued him, but as we began to transport him back, he reached out with the force and willingly ended his own life. He looked at me with an insane fervor, the likes of which i have never seen, then with a flick of his tongue... He was gone. Autopsy says that his spinal-column was severed and his brains synapses had been... Popped for a better word. All of them at once..."
Interviewer: "That's..."
Korrsh: "My fault. I should have had him brought before the council before he had gone that far. The Council agreed. I spent the next 20 years cataloging the archives before i was allowed to train another student. Moktus was exactly what i needed. Young, bright and eager to please. He was a hugger... I had to ween him off of those slowly. Moktus grew into a hell of a Knight, so sure of himself. He was one of the best pilots in the order. And his way with words. I have NEVER heard a man able to sway so many with his words. I saw him bring many a foe to justice without even igniting his blade... It was a pity that he left the order just before he was due to be made a Master."
Interviewer: "He left?"
Korrsh: "Yes, he said that he appreciated the order and everything that it had done for him, but he decided to go into Politics. He became the representative for the Rodians in the Republic Forum. We remained good friends till 3 years ago when he finally passed away from his ripe old age. He was a true success."
Interviewer: "Are any of your former Padawans still alive?"
Korrsh: "Why, yes. Master Mina was a former student of mine... We, sadly, never got along that great. I took over her training after the death of Master Oprak and i don't think she ever adjusted to the change. He was VERY strict with her and she distrusted me greatly because my style was far more laid-back. She began to loosen up a little near the end, but it was a grueling 5 years training her into a Knight. She recently made it onto the Council."
Interviewer: "So, why aren't you a Master, surely you have so many success stories that you should be recognized as a master?"
Korrsh: "There are many... MANY reasons, but those are my secrets to keep."
Interviewer: "Very well. Any other Students?"
Korrsh: "Sadly, apart from Talisha here, the only other student of mine that still walks this plane is Kegresh. A Bothan, he is currently out on the frontier, helping the Republic forces in their war with the Empire, he has his first padawan in tow. I can't say anymore about him, though, for obvious reasons."
Interviewer: "I understand. You're other main mark on your career would be the Sacking of the Temple. It says that you abandoned your post."
Korrsh: "That was a... Misunderstanding on behalf of the council. I was on the planet at the time, following a lead on a case that i was working on, i saw the shuttle coming down at heading for the temple and saw the smoke, but by the time i returned, it was too late."
Interviewer: "So, why does it say that you abandoned your post?"
Korrsh: "I was supposed to be giving the younglings a training session, when the attack happened... I was also not supposed to be working on the case, as the Council had removed me from the investigation due to... Unfortunate circumstances. As such, they slapped me with a "Dereliction of Duty" charge."
Interviewer: "Very interesting. So, you are fresh off of your latest victory against Galdradi The Hutt?"
Korrsh: "Yes, Galdradi... It is a shame, in another life, he was to be my mentor. He first caught the attention of the Jedi Temple when they found me after an attempted assassination against me. When i became a Knight, i hunted down Galdradi, used him as a contact to get in touch with the Grand Hutt Council."
Interviewer: "The Jedi actually have communications with the Hutts?"
Korrsh: "Well, yes. They are one of the key powers of the outer rim. Although the Republic does not recognize them as an official government, they still hold all of the power in those regions. We have to keep contact with them in order to secure safe passage to the outer rim. For quite some time, The Exchange had a bounty on us. We needed to make a few concessions to keep the exchange off of our backs constantly.
Interviewer: "So, if he was so important to keeping relations between the Jedi and the Hutts open, then why did you bring him in?"
Korrsh: "This isn't going to be released until after the trial is over?"
Interviewer: "This isn't for public release. And, yes, we will not be publishing this until after the results of the trial are in."
Korrsh: "We never had any proof to bring in Galdradi... I can't go into the details of this, but we followed some leads to a freighter that was packed to the brim with Selkath slaves. We traced the freighter to him. Sadly, we know how the legal system on Coruscant knows and we knew that those charges wouldn't stick. So, we decided to dig a little deeper. We found some people willing to flip on him. That, combined with some help from my Padawan in chasing down his Lieutenant in a high-speed fighter chase and we marched straight into his club with the Coruscant Police. He gave us quite a show, but, now we have one of the most powerful crime-lords on Coruscant in custody and tossed his place to get enough forensic evidence to clone him and throw both of them in jail for the rest of their natural lives."
Interviewer: "So, your Padawan helped in this case?"
Korrsh: "Yes, very much so. I have no doubt that she will be a Master one day."
Talisha: "I KNOW that i will be a great master one day."
Interviewer: "Alright, that should be it. Thank you very much."

Agents of SHIELD - Concluded

Cool, i'll probably ask again at a later date, then. This is looking pretty cool.

Agents of SHIELD - Concluded

Any spaces open in this?

Fire Emblem: The Eternal Struggle

Currently writing out a CS.

Fire Emblem: The Eternal Struggle

@TheLazarus I was thinking less that he can't transform and more that he won't, in order to protect his secret. Awful lot of racists around.