Life hits like a truck. Only reason i haven't forfeited yet is because no-one else has called it so far, and i'm still hoping summer will cut me some slack; as ridiculous as it may sound, i'm still eager to bring this fight to a conclusion.
I'd have been happier if you let me know once or twice you were still planning on posting, but if there's a chance then I'm happy to wait for a proper conclusion.
An arrow would be a good idea - I imagine she would seek out a special arrow to use in some kind of extraordinary circumstance or the like.
That's exactly what I was thinking. If you come up with something specific I'll add it in to opinions. Might also work on the full story for each of the legendary items (why he made them) in anecdotes at a later date.
@MelonHead I imagine in terms of my two Ash will have had little association with Kozz. Aylin may have asked Kozz to make some kind of bow for her, or the like - probably have to be honest.
If you want Aylin to have sought an item of some kind that's cool. Could be a special arrow of some kind?
Oh snaaaaaaap it's a thing! A thing it took me forever to post because I wasn't happy with it over and over again. I haven't 100% decided on a starting city, but I'm considering dropping her in Pacific Point, like a lurid hydrogen bomb.
Character you have created: Caroline Lewis Alias: Babel Speech Color: DeepPink Character Alignment: Villain Identity: Known Character Personality: Babel is entropy in action: a disaffected, destructive adrenaline junkie who now finds herself with the ability to fulfill every whim, appetite and revenge fantasy she ever had. There's no plan, no grand ambition, no long-term goal other than burning through life like a roman candle and tearing down the comfortable little illusions of a broken society. She's a one-woman circus, and everyone's getting a free ticket.
Uniform/costume: Caroline herself is thin, her face long and a little too pale, crowned with a punkish, neglected mess of bright pink hair and glittering with a number of cheap piercings. Most of her life til now has been spent comatose in thrift store throwouts, threadbare stockings and hoodies and bad heavy metal t-shirts.
In contrast, her 'working' costume is a well-tailored carnivalesque outfit that was intended for an upmarket casino hostess: A glossy lycra catsuit the same deep, lurid pink as her hair, belted at the waist and stitched with six black diamonds in a playing card style, the ensemble completed with shoulder-length gloves and heeled over-the-knee boots in matching black patent leather. You know, like a comic book. Not practical? Maybe. But when all you have left is making an impression, why stop at the ankle?
She keeps two Glock-18 automatic pistols tucked into the belt, the slides repainted in pink and engraved in silver glitter -- one reading 'Eat Me', the other 'Drink Me'.
Origin Info/Details: Babel was an experiment that both succeeded and failed. First a happy accident; then an unhappy one. Remember Darrow Engineering? They may be a lot of things, but they're not quitters. The loss of Dr. Gaster and xenohybrid experiment BPE-45A (Yeah. Her.) was a setback to their psionic tinkering, but while they lost the subject, they'd learned a lot. They still had a wealth of research, a clear agenda, considerable resources and powerful backers greedy or frightened enough to want that power in their hands.
With stakes that high, "ethics" is just a word.
And that's how we got the Babel project: a grand attempt to create organisms that could access and influence what they called the noosphere -- informational space. A tall order, and one that required raw material. A lot of raw material. Living material. Recidivists, junkies, the homeless; people nobody would care about or miss, supplied in secret to covert facilities by shadowy third parties or corrupt law enforcement. Deniable. Disposable. And Caroline Lewis was all of these things. A deeply troubled young woman who had lost the battle against her inner demons a long time ago and finally fallen so far down her own spiral of substance abuse and self-hatred that even the thugs she'd found shelter with had left her to overdose or die in a drunken fistfight with a moving train.
Despite her penchant for self-destruction, tests showed Lewis as one of the most promising specimens by far: in fact, she was a latent natural psychic in potentia, who only needed a touch of biological coaxing to blossom into rich, useful material for the project -- material that would then be harvested, cultured, and put to better use.
But history has a way of repeating itself. Impossibly and for no understandable reason, the subject activated before the altered brain could be removed. The half-baked specimen was unleashed, and the facility was burned out to the last living thing.
Guess they didn't learn as much as they thought.
The final punchline to this bitter joke is that the source of the girl's psychic potential is a small, anomalous brain tumor, inoperable and steadily growing, which allowed the unnatural treatment to take root, almost seeming to welcome it. By degrees, it is both twisting her brain into increasing states of mental power and ever so slowly killing her. She has a limited, stolen supply of an experimental medication, Noussphairaretroamphetamine 44 (abbreviated to Nupharamine, or just "Noose" on the black market) that stabilizes her condition and allows her to exert greater control over herself, but in one last, cruel twist of irony, the tablets are damagingly addictive when taken over an extended time, taking a toll on her even as they ease her burden.
Hero Type (Select one): Psychic Power Level (Select one below): Street/City Powers (Be Specific):
Psychohazard: Babel radiates madness like an isotope. Where she goes, a whirlpool of psychic chaos goes with her, and unlike most metahumans, she doesn't so much employ her powers as try with all the willpower she can muster to keep it under control. Restrained, her influence manifests as overexposed vision and chromatic aberration, images splitting apart into flickering red, green and blue planes like a malfunctioning LCD monitor. Unleashed, her presence dramatically warps the perceptions and sanity of those around her, its intensity ranging from confusion and disorientation to mass hysteria. People collapse, scream, hallucinate, attack one another, and gradually lose control of language, regressing into an odd form of glossolalia. The closer to her epicenter one draws, the worse it becomes.
As if this weren't enough, she is vulnerable to rare, psychoactive seizures which tremendously swell the power of her abilities while completely incapacitating her control over them. Paradoxically, it is at her most vulnerable that she becomes the most dangerous.
Hallucinopath: When in control of herself, Babel can influence the nature of the illusions she spawns, and through that, the people experiencing them. In accepting the evidence of their senses, people find themselves playing by her rules.
1.5 Second Sight: Babel's affliction dilates her perception of time, allowing her to instinctively 'see' 0.5 to 2 seconds into the future. While so short as to be useless for planning, this expanded awareness has a critical effect on her aim, physical instincts and reaction time, giving her the appearance of having superhuman reflexes when in fact her physique is normal, and she's simply started moving a second before a shot is fired.
White Noise: It's not that Babel is immune to mind reading; It's just that attempting to mentally probe or restrain her is like flying a light aircraft into a hurricane. To a psychic or sensitive, her mind reads as raw, lurid chaos, a raging pink vortex that doesn't repel them, but rather tries to drag them in and eat them alive.
Attributes (Select one at each category):
Strength Level: Normal human Speed/Reaction Timing Level: Normal human speed/Uncanny reflexes (precognition) Endurance: Normal human Agility: Normal human/5x depending on illness and drug use. Intelligence: Average. Fighting Skill: Somewhat trained
Resources: Minimal -- if she wasn't able to take what she wanted, she wouldn't know where her next meal was coming from. Weaknesses: Pyrrhic Victory: Babel's greatest strength is also her most dangerous flaw: Her own power is slowly killing her. Restraining her psychohazard ability taxes her greatly, even painfully, and though rare, her random seizures can leave her hemorrhaging, crawling on her hands and knees.
Addict: A dependance on experimental, psychoactive medication to stay in control is its own set of problems.
How Can You Challenge a Perfect, Immortal Machine: Since Babel's abilities are almost exclusively mind-affecting, robotic adversaries, drones or those otherwise completely immune to psychic influence naturally counter her main advantage, leaving her to rely on her precognition window and her capable but limited combat skill.
Supporting Characters:
Cheshire Cat: Only Babel can see or hear this taunting, elusive monster. It has to be a figment of her fevered imagination, yet it sometimes knows things it shouldn't possibly know...
Rabbit Hole gang: The Rabbit Hole is a seedy "villain bar" frequented by C-list bad guys unlikely to ever make the big time.
Tommy Trollface: A former mob triggerman, Tommy's life was changed after an accident during a shootout in a chemical plant with a vigilante hero left his face permanently twisted into an uncanny replica of the Trollface meme. Though initially embittered, Tommy has since embraced his new persona and is even considered something of a folk hero amongst the bulk of internet culture. If he had a voice actor, it would be Gilbert Gottfried.
Professor Amstrad: After being diagnosed with terminal cancer during the height of the cold war, this brilliant scientist replaced most of his body with mechanical parts, attempting to future-proof himself using the finest cutting-edge computer technology 1981 had to offer. The result is now something both impressively ahead of its time and laughably obsolete. Though something of a laughing stock amongst the meta community, it's never wise to underestimate the old professor. He may be a stubborn traditionalist, but he is still a genius, and his assault robots are no less lethal for being made of ribbon cables and cheap plastic.
Killa Deth: A hereditary metahuman and rap artist who inherited abnormal size and comparative super-strength from his father, an unnamed superhero who didn't stick around to pay child support. Despite his name, Killa Deth is actually a chilled-out vegetarian and not given to violence. Unless you badmouth his mixtape, in which case he'll pulp your skull with his bare hands.
Do you know how to post pictures on RPG boards?:
It was a warm and sunny day in the garden maze. Insects chirped happily in well-tended flower beds. Birds sang from hidden perches amongst shady trees. Dandelion blossoms floated gently on the still and breezeless air. And for mile after mile in every direction, the maze stretched out, a deep, shady labyrinth of tall, green hedges, walling it all safely in.
It was a very calm and peaceful place.
At the center of the garden, on the trim, green grass, sat a long, low table draped with a white cloth, set as though for a tea party. At its head sat a dark-haired young girl of perhaps seven, dressed in blue and white frills, the other seats filled by a number of floppy, friendly-looking stuffed toy animals arrayed in their own little chairs.
With practiced manners, the girl picked up the teapot and poured, a stream of milky, violet fluid that smelt of hospitals and antiseptic bubbling from the spout. Setting down the pot, she took the lid from the sugar bowl, which was filled with small, plastic medical tablets, pink at one end, blue at the other. She dipped her spoon and emptied the pills into her cup, stirring vacantly. It was better to have one spoonful, but sometimes she needed two, for that was simply how things were done. She took a small sip, swallowing it down. It tasted like nothing at all.
The girl, whose name was Caroline, kicked her legs under the chair, back and forth, her thoughts empty. There was no bother to think of anything. It was a lovely day and she had only to wait here until her mother came for her, which would surely not be long now.
She had just started taking another sip when there came floating through the still, warm air a smooth, beguiling voice that didn't sound like anyone she knew. Caroline looked up, blinking as surprise slowly surfaced from beneath her placid thoughts.
"Though thy slumber may be deep," it crooned, "Yet thy spirit shall not sleep; There are shades which will not vanish; There are thoughts thou canst not banish..."
The girl's head tilted curiously as a wide, bright, toothsome smile appeared at the far end of the table, bobbing along the edge of the cloth.
"...By a power to thee unknown..."
Around the smile, a cat's head faded into view, followed by a long, plump body and a swirling, question-mark tail.
"...Thou canst never be alone."
"What a curious song," observed Caroline, blinking slowly. Though she had been content here with her tea and her dear animal friends, her thoughts now felt clouded and suddenly unquiet. She struggled to speak. "Wherever did you come from, mister cat?"
"Why, nowhere." the cat replied, smiling, "The same as you."
"Oh." The girl's eyes dropped. She stared vacantly down into her rippling cup of violet liquid. Her stomach rebelled, gurgling and twitching. "I feel... ever so queer, of a sudden." she said, softly. "Not well at all."
"Truly?" the cat paced sidelong in front of her, brushing her comfortingly with its tail, in the manner of felines. "Perhaps you would feel better if you drank a little less tea."
"But it's a tea party. One must drink tea at a tea party."
"Ah? But are you drinking tea because it is a tea party, or is it merely a tea party because you are drinking tea?"
Caroline's brow creased as she wrestled with the odd question. She went to take another sip, but faltered, held back, something nagging at her fogged mind.
"...Do you suppose mother will come soon?" she asked the cat, "I must wait here until she comes to collect me. But..." she trailed off.
"Perhaps we should go and find her?" the cat got up, stretching its forepaws and arching its back contentedly. "The Caroline I know was never much fond of doing what she was told."
"But I don't know the way through the maze." the girl protested.
"But I do." the cat declared. It coiled its way around the teapot, drawing close, eyes luminous above its glowing grin. "Come with me, Caroline. The way is simple, if you know it; Not out, but through. All you need do is open your eyes, and wake up."
"I can't wake up if I'm not asleep!" she admonished.
"Well then," grinned the cat, padding right up and smiling into her face, "You must be asleep."
The girl stared.
The teacup slid from her fingers and shattered, pink and blue tablets scattering across the tablecloth.
Whoah, is it supposed to light up like--
EEG just--
The girl's eyes fluttered open.
Oh sh--
LOCKDOWN LOCKDOWN START THE BAFFLERS
There was a horrific noise, like a detuned string section being slammed into an active microphone. Pain burst through her head. A woman started screaming into an intercom. A mirror-faced hazard suit standing over her swore and staggered backward, spinning cranial saw in hand, overturning a metal tray full of vicious stainless steel instruments with a tremendous crash that didn't stop but grew louder and louder and louder, joining the tumult of shouting and the pandemonium of warped, deafening noise.
The girl sat bolt upright, tearing a respiration mask from her face and dragging a ridged rubber tube out of her mouth, retching as she felt it come up her throat, trickling violet fluid. She heaved down breaths, facing her pale, pink-haired reflection in a mirrored observation window, coughing and blinking in the sterile glare of blinding hospital spotlights. No longer a child but a young woman, slumped upon a molded surgical table in an enclosed, glistening cell of shining white tile, air thick with the overpowering smell of antiseptic, surrounded by glowing readouts that flickering on wall-mounted machines straight out of a science fiction film.
"What the f..." The room heaved to one side and she slid from the table, falling heavily to her knees, fighting the urge to throw up. "What the fuhhh..."
Everything lurched and spun. Caroline clutched at her head, choking back a scream as her brain throbbed, burning in her head and swirling outward, thick and sticky like candyfloss and fallout. One of the machines sparked and went black. Alarms started blaring from outside.
A gloved hand grabbed hold of her roughly, the faceless, white-suited surgeon pulling at her, the electric saw still whirring in his other hand. She kicked, struggled, cried out, threw the bedsheet at him in an irrational, desperate reflex. The figure panicked, shrieking and flailing at the white fabric as though it were a scorpion, driving the whining saw through it and into his leg, stabbing again and again, yelling get it off, get it off GET IT OFF ME. Blood sprayed like sawdust from a mill, painting the pristine tiles red, and still he kept slashing, hacking and babbling until he sheared through the tendons of his leg and collapsed, thrashing helplessly in a spreading scarlet pool.
Caroline struggled to get to her feet, trying to raise herself from the blood-slick floor on shaking, nerveless arms. It was happening everywhere, now. The intercom filled with bellowing, panic, madness. Facility staff were attacking one another in the corridors, shooting at things that weren't there, doubled up on the floor in fits of hysteria. The men in the security station were laughing and slapping each other on the back, convinced they were watching cartoons. The walls seemed to melt, to run like quicksilver. Her head was pounding like a cheap apartment over a shitty nightclub and she could feel her poisoned mind spilling over, expanding like a nuclear accident, contaminating every living thing it touched.
one and two are overloaded-- --cinnamon the cinnamon we have to-- Go near that door son and I will put you down without a second-- /It's on fire it's burning-- MY BABY, MY BABY'S IN THERE--
She heard gunshots, saw silhouettes in the dark mirror with each muzzle flash, bodies slumping and falling as they ran for the door to her room. There was another shower of sparks and an electronic screech before the monitors blanked out and the room was plunged into pitch darkness, bathed in red emergency lighting a second later. The corridors outside rang with tinny, hysterical laughter, clunking metal and unhinged, animal howls that couldn't have been human but were. Caroline slumped on the wet floor, laughing weakly along with them, pushed beyond endurance as her mind continued to seep like radiation out of her skull. She was Chernobyl. She was Babel. She was Babylon. It was a horror movie, and everyone was the monster.
Fala la lan-
BURN IT TORCH THE FREAKING WING IF YOU HAVE TO JUST KILL IT KILL IT NOW KIT IT RAW KOIL LO L̶A ̨X̨F͡I Ļ̨́͢͠À̡̛͡ Z̧͞O ̴̛͠͝F̴̵͏H̕̕G̨̀̕̕F͡͠í͝͠͞I̴͘͘͡į̛͢͞͞i~̴̕
There was one final gunshot.
She stood in the pouring rain and watched it burn, barefoot in a backless hospital gown, soaked to the skin. Gun in one hand, plastic bottle in the other, coastal winds beating at her remorselessly. It all looked so small from outside. Just another ugly warehouse in a row of ugly warehouses. Nothing to suggest the six levels underneath it that were now going up in greasy, colorful smoke. Nothing to hint at the shrink-wrapped bodies and the floating brains.
Caroline tore her red-rimmed eyes away from the roaring inferno, staring off into the vague glow of night. The cat's smile beckoned from a streetlight far ahead, its tail flicking idly below, and she followed, as though in a trance.
What else could she do?
I wonder if Lekh and Babel will ever meet. Their powers are incredibly similar, so it could be interesting.
Hey guys. Just wanna get some feedback on Chinasa's opinion on the others. If you ever have a problem or feel something went a bit different than you may think it would have, let me know. I'll gladly work with you so we get it cleaned up and all that jazz.
No problem here, I can work a reason round for why Kozz would bestow an item on anyone, based off the item chosen even.
Is there anyone else who wants to add an item that Kozz made for them now, before I start working on opinions? I'll just adjust them later, but if they haven't associated with Kozz (or even been denied, if you want that rivalry) it will effect the relationship.
Going to start working on opinions in a bit, I see you had one of Kozz' weapons Cayce, so I'll reciprocate in my opinion section. (Kozz respects all those he makes weapons for, in some fashion, it's a mutual thing)
I'm not sure if this is still open or what have you, but in the hope that it is I've sketched up an archetype/prototype for a character that I'll leave here.
Name: Kozz the Forgemaster
Description
Physical: Kozz’ form resembles most closely that of the cyclops in ancient Greek legend. With a browned leathery hide marked with immeasurable numbers of scorch marks and scars, a monstrous but remotely humanoid face and one great eye in the centre of his forehead. There is no risk of him winning a beauty contest, at any rate. His form is none-the-less impressively muscled by toil, standing at a great twelve feet in height, but prone to stooping at around 9-10 feet, he towers above man and beast alike. His hands resemble a humans and are surprisingly dexterous, but otherwise he is far removed from humanity with sharp protruding tusks and a gravelly voice.
Psychological: Kozz, despite the crudity of his form, is a master of craft. Though not a genius by any means, he has a practical knowledge of the world and a refreshing pragmatism that sets him apart from most of the children. He is reserved, blunt but otherwise mild mannered. Slow to anger, difficult to please, Kozz is a creature few would choose to speak with but those who take the time have rarely left with a poor opinion of him.
Powers: Other than the great strength and durability of his chosen form as a cyclops, Kozz’ only significant power comes from his ability to craft great weapons. Enchanted, legendary, many of the ‘relics’ and ‘mythical weapons’ that exist in the modern world came from his forge. The nature of his ability means that he can only craft a single item for a person, and his own artefact were gauntlets that made him near impervious to fire. Many have come, seeking some boon or item from him, most leave disappointed.
Original tribe: The Barun, mountain people of low stature but powerful build, drawn to the rock to excavate metal or stone. They found Kozz within the mountain, and overtime he accepted their gifts and bestowed upon them the knowledge of forging and smithing. The tribe grew famed for its iron and even its steel in the Dawn period, though rarely waging war themselves their materials were widely sought out. They lived a rough and ready lifestyle, but a happy one, surviving off the reputation of their weapons and armour in the same way some nations survive off feared mercenaries. They were too useful to invade. Unfortunately, Barun suffered at the end of the Dawn, when they sided with the Angels they became targets for the Demons. The tribe only barely survived the conflict, only to be eventually conquered in the ensuing years after Kozz was betrayed and imprisoned. It is said that the descendants of the Barun still exist, albeit as part of the republic, continuing their work into the present day. Some even credit them with the invention of firearms.
Faction: Angels
Anecdotes: Though Kozz was unwilling to pick a side in the war initially, his tribe chose to work alongside the Angels and he followed suit. They were the armourers of the Angels, and his legendary weapons were equipped by their heroes, only for him to be eventually sought out and betrayed as the war reached its end. Unlike many, Kozz did not resent the betrayal as much as one might expect, understanding its necessity. His actual issue is far more complex, and lies within the use of his knowledge in the world he returned to.
Kozz’s main influence in the old world was his forging of many of the legendary weapons and other artefacts that cover the land. Though many have been lost or destroyed over time, many others have fallen into the hands of heroes and villains, even other children. Those who have yet to have an item forged by him often seek him out, but many are refused on the grounds of his own peculiar morality. Though not the only one capable of creating such items, Kozz is reported to be one of the greatest, particularly in the sphere of blacksmithing.
Opinions
Eyra the Seer: Kozz does not hate Eyra, at least not for her betrayal of the Angels. He understands her reasons, even if they cost him dearly. What he cannot accept is his work being turned into rifle and cannon and slaughtering thousands. In his great forge the prototypes that eventually became the weapons of Eyra’s people lay, and he recognises them for what they are. It was not her right to make him a mass-murderer.
Kinion the fool: Kozz has no time for fools, as a pragmatic creature who sees the world in a simple but efficient manner, the subtleties of Kinion irritate him. It is uncertain if Kozz sees through the mask of madness to the danger within, but he certainly underestimates him.
Wu Dan: Kozz, as a pragmatist and an infinitely practical being, has less respect than he should for the spiritual and philosophical Wu Dan. That being said, he still has respect for his fighting spirit, which tends to balance things out to a neither positive nor negative opinion of the Mountain Spirit.
Therelon: Although Kozz is fond of seeking knowledge in his craft, he dislikes Therelon’s desire to obtain all knowledge, and his people’s claims to have been the first to craft steel irritate him. It’s uncertain who first came up with it, but considering Kozz’ place as the Forgemaster, one can make some assumptions. Regardless, they are at odds over Kozz’ unwillingness to part with certain knowledge out of his own sense of morality, and Therelon’s desire to obtain everything.
Tarthus: The God of Death has little to offer the world in terms of great crafts, in Kozz’ eyes. Though he hardly knows the creature, he has little time for it, and may even fear it for its abnormalities.
Chinasa the Pallid: Kozz sees something in Chinasa that perhaps it cannot see itself. When asked, he crafted for it a crown of its own, for he saw the role Chinasa could play. The King of the outcast, the abnormal, the scorned. Before the Betrayal Kozz admired Chinasa’s nobility, he hopes that one day the crown will remind Chinasa of what he was, and could be again.
Azoth: For obvious reasons, Kozz has little time for Azoth. A liar and a manipulator will always be at odds with a practical creature who lives for craft and toil.
Aylin the Huntress: Though they would be unlikely to truly get along, Aylin and Kozz share mannerisms as such that they would either become reluctant friends or amicable enemies, it is uncertain which path they may take in the Dusk age.
Ash: Ever changing and far too fickle for Kozz’ taste, though he neither likes nor dislikes the shapeshifter. Nod: For the wild and unruly creature known as the Great Beast, Kozz found it suitable to bestow upon him a great axe. In truth, Kozz respected the beast’s freedom and simplicity, a warrior who lives but to meet each challenger. To such a creature only an axe that personified that ferocity and singularity of that purpose would be suitable. Though it could do good or evil, it would stay within the hands of one who would use it for great things. To Kozz, that was enough.
Also, if anyone has any interesting weapons or what have you and would be interested, Kozz may have forged it for you. Up to you though, I'm not claiming a monopoly on legendary items or anything.
@Vordak This might seem like a forgone conclusion at this point, but how could you leave me like this Vordak? Goddamn it, why does everyone I fight dissapear? First you, now Innue. What curse is this?
True, I'll wait to enter a collab until he's decided on what to do.
Also, if you do introduce him into the scene first, there's also the chance Odette will just detect him, as she's trapped the area, so you might get an in that way.
Could I be in a collaborative post with someone else in the arc? That way he can show up and all the interactions and what not will be genuine and no guesswork has to happen?
You might want to wait until there's a good moment to interject, unless you want him to burst in while Odette and Lekh are trying to re-subdue Racheli.
Depends what sort of role you want the guy to play though, I suppose. You only really need to collab with one of us if he's interfering directly, because of the magic used or what have you. If he's just watching there's no real need.
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