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Alrighty, so as you all can see on the character list, the only roles for which we don't have people currently making applications are for the Imperial Japanese Army member and one of the Edelfelts. If you'd like to submit for either of those, let me know!
@GrafRoy Zeppeli Good to go.
Ah sorry, the wiki hasn't been working well for me so I end up just using the BL posts with the translations, must have missed the Skill. And if you think the skill is well-defined enough then that's good enough for me. I'll shoot you a PM.


Alrighty, Assassin's good to go. Giving the same window as I'm giving for the other classes, of course.

Oh no, please don't use the wiki, never use the wiki. I'd infinitely prefer you use the BL translations than taking stuff from the wiki.

That applies to everyone, for the record. Please use any and all of the following info sources rather than the wiki. If you have specific questions for where you can find other translated materials, just let me know.

Besides the last couple volumes of Case Files (because I'm lazy and because reading through the scans without badgering people to help me figure out what chunks of Japanese mean like I did for CCC/Mahoyo/GO is crazy levels of effort), I can say I've read/played everything Type-Moon's put out.

I have wasted far too much of my life reading about this damn Japanese gamer's fantasyland.

I have friends who make fun of me by saying "Mahoyo trilogy".
@GrafRoy Zeppeli
-How old was she when the family pronounced her a failure and just churned out another kid? That seems like the sort of drastic move you wouldn't do prematurely, especially since she's got good latent talent.

-Also it's worth noting that families really only teach one kid the magecraft to begin with because of how the more people there are who know the magecraft, the weaker it gets. They'd be hesitant to teach two kids magecraft to begin with, let alone to keep teaching the one who isn't the heir anymore. That's why Sakura got pawned off to the Matous.

-Keep in mind that healing grevious wounds and fatal injuries is a pretty big thing; if you're ever trying to heal someone from the verge of death, for instance, expect it to cost quite a lot of jewels.

The main snag is this thing with the family you're wanting to do. Something like her having a sibling she competed with to be the heir would be feasible, but if she lost then she just wouldn't be taught magecraft to begin with, and probably wouldn't even know it existed.

I'd probably say the better way to handle this would be that, instead of saying she got disowned as the heir, say she got disowned as the family's representative for the Grail War. The Tohsakas care about it a lot, after all, and she'd probably have been told about it from a pretty young age. Doesn't want the responsibility, starts screwing up, family decides to hire in outside help, she gets mad, bam. That's probably the cleanest way to thematically do what you want while still making sense for the setting.

As an aside though, the phrase "Expert, knowledgeable and powerful mage" really has no business going anywhere near a Tohsaka at this point in history.


@Breo Looks good. The 24 hour window will be up in case anyone gets a Rider sheet in before then, but otherwise you'll get the slot.


I might as well give it a shot. Will attempt a Master.


Alrighty, let me know if you have any questions!
@Breo
Some of your coding's off,

For instance on first glance, look at Gram. You have it as (b)(i)(/b)(/i) when it should be (b)(i)(/i)(/b). Make sure all your coding goes from inside out like that.

EDIT: There we go! I'll take a look at it in a bit, today's a touch hectic for me.
And yeah, that's what I meant by her glasses lol

Worded that badly. I meant she can destroy the gems and use the energy inside to power up other spells. Basically using them to fuel her other gems.

Overall, though, is she like a bad character or do you think that tweaking the stuffs that you are saying will make her a-okay?

EDIT: Question, can the jewels vary in rank? Like, she carries twenty and their ranks vary from C to A(maybe lower if you think it best) as does their size? Of course, I'd count them as well.


That's fine then.

Sure, just keep in mind that once you put prana into a gem, it gets limited in what you can do with it.

Changing the things mentioned should be fine.

Sure, so long as you specify what amount of each rank she has. Remember, Rin squirreling away all of her excess prana over ten years had 20 A rank jewels, and Rin was amazing "top 100 in the history of the Association"-tier in terms of talent, so keep that in mind.


@MeteorD
Don't forget her Alluring Nightingale. I went to all the trouble of translating it from GO Mats, which wasn't difficult since I realized it was super similar to the Adonis skill.

Alluring Nightingale: A
A fascination-like magic effect that affects men, but one can abate it so long as there is a will to resist. Complete evasion by means of a Magic Resistance skill is possible.


Given that she has Alluring Nightingale, though, the effect of Whim of the Goddess will need to change. Just use the description from the Mats, since it mentions both beneficial and detrimental effects. If you have questions about what to expect from that, shoot me a PM.
@GrafRoy Zeppeli
H-Hayai...!

Alrighty, got a few comments. Sleep-deprived and going to bed shortly, so I'll take another look tomorrow to see if there's stuff I missed.

-The Tohsaka representative should have pretty poor Circuits, as mentioned in the roles. While it is possible for them to be freakishly good circuit-wise through chance and mutation, something to that extent is very unlikely, especially given this is before the Tohsakas even had Edelfelt power. Rin was like the first time the Tohsakas ever got a magus who could be ranked as objectively good in talent.
-The family could not adopt someone and give him the Crest. The Crest can pretty much only be passed to direct blood relatives like children and siblings, and even then there's a good chance of rejection. Also you can usually only do the Crest transfer while they're really young for the same reason. If you want to transfer it when they're older you need a Magical Centaur Doctor to help.
-Specify the number of jewels, their elements, and their ranks.

As they store energy, Syone can also use that same piled up energy to her own advantage, releasing magecraft way more powerful than those stored in the jewels by using the energy inside them.


-I'm not sure what this means.
-Keep in mind setting up those trap bounded fields will take time on the level of a few hours.
-Specify the kind of healing magic and her ability in it. For instance, the most common kind of healing would just speed up natural regeneration.
-The bracelets will be treated as a Magic Resistance Amulet, ergo D rank.
-What do you mean the glasses can "identify magecraft"? Like they can tell you that magecraft was used in an area or something?
@Rune_Alchemist
Archer is technically approved, as discussed, but I'm giving a 24 hour window for others to app an Archer before I officially slot you in, if there's someone out there who refuses to play as anything beside an Archer. If that happens then I'll evaluate the two apps side-by-side, as discussed.

@Liu Mei
Since you got technically long enough ago, Ruler's fully approved.

Anyone who wants to partner with the Ruler should apply for the Einzbern Master slot!
Will Servant profiles be kept secret, or are we putting them out loud and proud?


We'll be doing public apps unless there's an overwhelming preference for private apps. Given that canons are being allowed and we know their info, plus it's just cleaner, my preference is for public. The factions will have their own secret things like the UFO and Regalia replica, but playing that out on the Servant level in a teamfight where people can have their own agendas is a little shakier in my view.

With that said, if you all feel differently, let me know.
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