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"In this tale, we explore the tragedy of competition."

"The tragedy of having difference. The tragedy of lacking difference."

"We love our fellow countrymen, deride those of other lands, learn wisdom, spread ignorance, foster grudges, are incited by misunderstandings, relish prejudice, savor persecution, and feel pity."

"And for this, we pray."

"We pray that there may never be another war."



It is August of 1939, on the eve of Adolf Hitler’s invasion of Poland and with it, the second World War. On this day, the Holy Grail of Fuyuki, crafted by those three families who live within it, has come to life.

...however, an abnormality has manifested.

A force of four magi on behalf of the Chancellor of Germany and the Thule Society has come to Fuyuki, each summoning a Servant and acting in mutual cooperation. Their goal is simple: obtain the Holy Grail of Fuyuki, and with it, achieve something impossible.

At the same time, a member of the Imperial Japanese Army has been dispatched to Fuyuki to aid the families of Matou, Einzbern, and Tohsaka as they attempt to protect the Holy Grail from the enemy’s advances, each summoning Servants of their own. An overseer has been hastily dispatched by the Holy Church, but nonetheless, this will certainly be a conflict that will engulf all of Fuyuki.

As the Second World War is waged in the forefront, this Holy Grail War occurs in the background. A battle between magi and Servants, all for the purpose of grasping that ephemeral “wish” that might one day materialize.

Welcome to the Third Holy Grail War for the 726th Holy Grail.











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The character list has been updated!

As an aside, for those of you who are making or have made Servants, if you'll be making a Master (which I do recommend doing), please let me know if there's a particular slot you're gunning for so that I can note that! (@Yukitamas @Breo @MeteorD @Cu Chulainn @Liu Mei)

While we do have applications for seven Servants in the works, newcomers are welcome to apply! This isn't a first-come first-served system, so if I get two applications for a Servant reasonably close to one another, I'll look at them both and approve whichever one I think is better done or will fit with the roleplay better. The same is true for Masters! (Please please please app Masters, everyone, we can't start without them!)

Also, as a reminder, your Servant and Master must be on the same faction! While you can partner with yourself, I'd really very much prefer you don't, since it makes things more fun if people are partnered with one another.
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Will Servant profiles be kept secret, or are we putting them out loud and proud?
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Will Servant profiles be kept secret, or are we putting them out loud and proud?


We'll be doing public apps unless there's an overwhelming preference for private apps. Given that canons are being allowed and we know their info, plus it's just cleaner, my preference is for public. The factions will have their own secret things like the UFO and Regalia replica, but playing that out on the Servant level in a teamfight where people can have their own agendas is a little shakier in my view.

With that said, if you all feel differently, let me know.
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I'm cool with either. Private is fun, but I kind of want to reveal who my Servant is.
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Here we are!

Thank you muchly for helping me understand some Fate mechanics again xD

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@Rune_Alchemist
Archer is technically approved, as discussed, but I'm giving a 24 hour window for others to app an Archer before I officially slot you in, if there's someone out there who refuses to play as anything beside an Archer. If that happens then I'll evaluate the two apps side-by-side, as discussed.

@Liu Mei
Since you got technically long enough ago, Ruler's fully approved.

Anyone who wants to partner with the Ruler should apply for the Einzbern Master slot!
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Well, then, here's mine!


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i did a thing

@Relexquick bring ozy there's a rebel here
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H-Hayai...!

Alrighty, got a few comments. Sleep-deprived and going to bed shortly, so I'll take another look tomorrow to see if there's stuff I missed.

-The Tohsaka representative should have pretty poor Circuits, as mentioned in the roles. While it is possible for them to be freakishly good circuit-wise through chance and mutation, something to that extent is very unlikely, especially given this is before the Tohsakas even had Edelfelt power. Rin was like the first time the Tohsakas ever got a magus who could be ranked as objectively good in talent.
-The family could not adopt someone and give him the Crest. The Crest can pretty much only be passed to direct blood relatives like children and siblings, and even then there's a good chance of rejection. Also you can usually only do the Crest transfer while they're really young for the same reason. If you want to transfer it when they're older you need a Magical Centaur Doctor to help.
-Specify the number of jewels, their elements, and their ranks.

As they store energy, Syone can also use that same piled up energy to her own advantage, releasing magecraft way more powerful than those stored in the jewels by using the energy inside them.


-I'm not sure what this means.
-Keep in mind setting up those trap bounded fields will take time on the level of a few hours.
-Specify the kind of healing magic and her ability in it. For instance, the most common kind of healing would just speed up natural regeneration.
-The bracelets will be treated as a Magic Resistance Amulet, ergo D rank.
-What do you mean the glasses can "identify magecraft"? Like they can tell you that magecraft was used in an area or something?
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I might as well give it a shot. Will attempt a Master.
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All righty, will have to re-check it then...

And yeah, that's what I meant by her glasses lol

As they store energy, Syone can also use that same piled up energy to her own advantage, releasing magecraft way more powerful than those stored in the jewels by using the energy inside them.


Worded that badly. I meant she can destroy the gems and use the energy inside to power up other spells. Basically using them to fuel her other gems.

Overall, though, is she like a bad character or do you think that tweaking the stuffs that you are saying will make her a-okay?

EDIT: Question, can the jewels vary in rank? Like, she carries twenty and their ranks vary from C to A(maybe lower if you think it best) as does their size? Of course, I'd count them as well.
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NOTES: Changed Caprice/Whim of the Goddess from how it is in the Materials, since it was far too vague to use, and I couldn't think of any recorded instance where it was actually used. After some thought, I decided to change it to sort of an "imposed Heart of Steel" from Bobmiya based on the legends of the Gorgon sisters requests of those who came to take their hand.
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And yeah, that's what I meant by her glasses lol

Worded that badly. I meant she can destroy the gems and use the energy inside to power up other spells. Basically using them to fuel her other gems.

Overall, though, is she like a bad character or do you think that tweaking the stuffs that you are saying will make her a-okay?

EDIT: Question, can the jewels vary in rank? Like, she carries twenty and their ranks vary from C to A(maybe lower if you think it best) as does their size? Of course, I'd count them as well.


That's fine then.

Sure, just keep in mind that once you put prana into a gem, it gets limited in what you can do with it.

Changing the things mentioned should be fine.

Sure, so long as you specify what amount of each rank she has. Remember, Rin squirreling away all of her excess prana over ten years had 20 A rank jewels, and Rin was amazing "top 100 in the history of the Association"-tier in terms of talent, so keep that in mind.


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Don't forget her Alluring Nightingale. I went to all the trouble of translating it from GO Mats, which wasn't difficult since I realized it was super similar to the Adonis skill.

Alluring Nightingale: A
A fascination-like magic effect that affects men, but one can abate it so long as there is a will to resist. Complete evasion by means of a Magic Resistance skill is possible.


Given that she has Alluring Nightingale, though, the effect of Whim of the Goddess will need to change. Just use the description from the Mats, since it mentions both beneficial and detrimental effects. If you have questions about what to expect from that, shoot me a PM.
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@Breo
Some of your coding's off,

For instance on first glance, look at Gram. You have it as (b)(i)(/b)(/i) when it should be (b)(i)(/i)(/b). Make sure all your coding goes from inside out like that.

EDIT: There we go! I'll take a look at it in a bit, today's a touch hectic for me.
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