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Fate/Exit Order

The Holy Grail War. In another place and another time these words might have meant the word for the Heroic Spirits that reside within the Throne of Heroes, and even some beings who lie beyond its eternal grasp. However, now wasn’t one of those times, not anymore.

This time, what compelled the Heroic Spirits to listen and answer the summons was something much greater. A call to arms, a cry for help, call it what you will but this is the last chance of salvation. For the future to continue to exist, the Heroic Spirits of old, those who became legends, and had their souls recorded by the world, would have to step into action and fight a threat beyond even the most legendary of the Phantasmals.

All that was left to see is whether they would succeed on their efforts or not.

— X —

If you’ve clicked on this, I assume that you know enough of Fate for me to not need to go on a long exposition about Servants, Masters, and their exploits through the numerous iterations of the franchise. Nevertheless, I’ll just go through a brief explanation to be sure anyone reading this is close to be on the same page and then, proceed to explain the specific details that concern this story in particular.

The various Fate related works take place in a world — or rather, worlds — not very different from our own, with the exception that spells and magic are a real thing and pretty much every conceivable myth is either real or has sufficient ground in reality to be considered “real”. Normally, a number of mages, known as Masters, summon figures of those legends, Servants, to fight for them in a bloody conflict called the Holy Grail War. The final prize that both Masters and Servants are fighting for is nothing other than the Holy Grail, an all-powerful artifact capable of grant any one of its bearer wishes.

Of course, nothing is ever so easy. Catastrophe and suffering go hand in hand with most Holy Grail Wars ever fought and most of the times, if there’s even a winner, they’ll not be feeling like they won anything at all.

Nevertheless, neither Masters, nor the Holy Grail War will be the focus of this story. Instead of them, the Servants will be working under the command of the Moon Cell, a gigantic magical computer buried deep within the Moon that has existed since before the dawn of World. This incomprehensible machine which has a will of its own, called Servants to fight a threat that could not only decimate it but also deal a finishing blow to the derelict remnants of the Earth below.

While the Moon Cell has been able to fight off big threats at many different times and realities thanks to the interference of a certain unwitting Master who managed to win the last of the Holy Grail Wars on sheer luck, this time it has to fend on its own. There’s no traces of that person, or any other humans left in its data.

This is a story about how those who vowed to protect the world fulfilled their role in a war that’ll remain unsung for now and forever…

— X —

Character Sheet

Class: (The seven main classes, plus Shielder, Ruler, Avenger, and Alter Ego, are available to be used)
True Name: (Most canon Servants, including many that aren’t normally summonable in regular Holy Grail Wars, as well as Original Servants are available to be used. Since the list is too comprehensive to mention, just be sure to ask before applying a Servant, in case you are in doubt)
Origin: (The legend or work from which your character comes from. e.g.: Arthurian Legends, Greek Mythology, Historical Fact, etc. For canon characters that have no origin in myths or history, mention the work in which they had they first appearance)
Height/Weight: (In metric units, please)
Appearance: (Any combination of text descriptions and, or images is acceptable. However, refrain from using real life photos, if you are going to apply an Original Servant)
Alignment: (Any canon alignment choices are acceptable. If you really need to do something different, please ask first)
Personality: (A brief overview of your character’s behaviour and perhaps some details like any personal goals, regrets, etc. Try to keep this succinct, one or two paragraphs are more than enough to get a good first impression of any character)
Backstory: (You only need to add this if there’s any noticeable difference or detail in your character’s backstory that deviates from their origin. If it’s just generally the same story, or you are applying a canon Servant, you can skip this section)

— Parameters —
STR: | END: | AGI: | MAG: | LCK: | NP:
(For Original Servants, all parameters can be ranked from E- to A+, any excessively high statline, or any parameter goes above A+, will require a very good explanation. For Canon Servants, with more than one set of Parameters, you can choose whichever you like the best, unless they have a version in the Extra timeline, in which case you have to pick that version’s Parameters)

— Class Skills —
(Follow the same recommendation for Parameters. Original Servants with original or cross Class skills, or an excessive number of them, will require an explanation for them)

— Personal Skills —
(The same recommendations to both of the previous sections apply here as well. However, given the nature of these skills, original Personal Skills are expected, so I’ll be looking more for power and numbers)

— Armaments —
(Any additional gear, weapons, mounts, or vehicles that your Servant has access to. Those may or not have special properties but they generally aren’t Noble Phantasm level items)

— Noble Phantasms —
(Again, follow the recommendations above for Original Servants. Keep in mind that Non-Riders are generally limited to one or two Noble Phantasms, while Riders generally have between three to five Noble Phantasms. Any number exceeding this will require good explanation)
I'm kinda intrigued by this idea.

How would one of Neptunia's CPUs work in this context since what you have here is basically the same kind of setup as Gamindustry?
@Parallel Hearts So for a George review, he's fine. I just want to clarify that the + modifiers come into play when he's defending others, and are temporary boosts, rather than constant boosts. Otherwise, you're good. George is like a brick wall if we're going to be honest. Saint Wall.


I imagine so. +'s tend to be temporary bonuses and, in George's case, they should be active when he's protecting others or protecting something that needs to be protected.
@Parallel Hearts
Man I forgot that Georgios had so many Noble Phantasms. I don't see any problem with Georgios myself, but please wait for the opinions of @Reflection and @Red Alice.

Edit-
I just noticed you lowered Georgios's Magic Resistance, you can put it back at A rank if you want.


Ah, I see that was a typo. I'll have it back to the normal rank.

@Dezuel@King Cosmos

The Riders that don't have the ability to summon a mount are the exception rather than the rule, and usually require an explanation of why they are allowed to be Riders when they don't have mounts/vehicles of their own. You mount doesn't need to be special or even qualify as a Noble Phantasm. You usually get the ability to summon whatever is it that qualified you to the Rider Class when you are summoned as part of it.

You probably should take a look at those skills as well, both the Class and Personal ones, and your Master. I'll not comment too much on it, since I'm no GM, but did you at least read any material of the franchise (or at least the wiki) beforehand?

I'm not trying to attack you, please don't think I'm. It's just that there's so much wrong or misinformed choices there that it's hard to not ask such a question.
@Parallel Hearts
I think that Lancer Artoria would be fundamentally unsummonable even if it were from a Lostbelt due to the fact that she has never died. The Artoria of FSN is only summonable because of the contract she made with the world. Even if a similar contract was made with Lancer Artoria, she would not be summonable into this world, only her own world.


Very well then, if that's your opinion, I'll respect it even though I feel it's not very accurate to considering what's known about her.

At any rate, here's a second option:


@Parallel Hearts I'm going to talk to my Co-GMs about whether we want to deal with Lancer Artoria. Mostly because she exists pretty much as a Fate/Go gatcha creation, and arguably shouldn't even be summon-able in any regular (Or even special circumstances) grail war due to how she's more or less an immortal divine spirit. It can't even really be argued as a lostbelt situation. Since Lancer Artoria is just a thin guise of her Lion King variant from Go. (And that's not even bringing up all the other special stuff she can do as a lancer.)
I suggest looking into a less controversial character idea.


That's not correct. Regular Lancer Artoria is an even more viable possibility than most of the Lost Belt related material. You may be congealing her image too much with the Lion King who was an irregular entity that:



The summonable version, such as this one, isn't the same as the Lion King in any manner which is evident from both her in game description and dialogue. To begin with this one is a pretty compassionate and caring individual, that alone should be enough to not mix her up with the alternative version.

I can give up on her if you still don't want this Servant around, but the reasons you pointed are flawed. I guess that an explanation and appeal for you to check her description in the source material is the only thing I can do now.
Well, this seems interesting.

I already have a Servant idea gathered up. I'll see if I can come up with Master later.

In any case, here's what I could make until now:


I'll be taking a better look at this later.
@Parallel Hearts

I guess I can accept unlimited Holy/Demonic Swords. However, the swords will not be like super, super powerful okay?

As for the personality, I don't know Saber of Red. Why don't you finish up the character with the backstory and the personality so I can judge her properly.


Right, I'll finish her soon enough. However, I've done some more reading and saw that I don't need really to make that Sacred Gear all new. Creating Holy Swords and Demon Swords at the same time is one of Kiba's abilities, I'm just a bit too rusty on my DXD lore. I didn't even watch Born until now, so I only knew that he had Sword Birth to make Demon Swords, not a second one to create Holy Swords at the same time.

That said, I can say that I'll ditch that Sacred Gear idea and give each of the twins one of Kiba's Gears, this will make her balanced since it's canon power level, right?

I'll see if I can finish it today, or tomorrow.

Thanks again.
It looks like a nice idea.

If I don't get to join the other games I'm looking at the moment, I'll be glad to give this one a try.
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