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Yeah, I'm not gonna bother with my Pawn. I'll stick with my Knight.
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Oho.

Things have gotten a bit interesting, heh.

Hope these guys don't mind a little bondage
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I began doing a character, but I'd like to ask if her abilities are ok until now, before doing more work on this concept:

Telos Karma is a oficial Sacred Gear that never appeared in the series up to this day, so I thought about being creative with it. The idea of the duality of Karma came easily. But I still left room for her to grow, like Issei. In fact, depending on the IC circumstances, she could even begin as still unaware of everything and be converted into a Devil on her first interactions with the group, likely after being saved from death.

I'll say it here already, since this is DXD we are talking about, that Balance Breaker is going to be less about OP power and more about twincest.

If the idea is not good, or too powerful, I can rework her. Just say the word.
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is going to be less about OP power and more about twincest.


did someone say Twincest?

You.

I like you.
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@Parallel Hearts This is pretty similar to the idea I was working on before I gave up

Mine was a Half-Reaper Pawn with a Shy/Ruthless Split Personality. Maybe I should finish it off so we can have some double-split shenanigans...
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@Parallel Hearts This is pretty similar to the idea I was working on before I gave up

Mine was a Half-Reaper Pawn with a Shy/Ruthless Split Personality. Maybe I should finish it off so we can have some double-split shenanigans...


Oh, interesting. I didn't even imagine that someone was having a similar idea. I'm pretty much waiting for some words from the GM until I can safely finish my charater, but now that I notice they didn't even reply to the first time I asked if I could join or not, much less give any feedback on what I have done up to now.

I'm wondering if I should have waited a reply to my first question instead of jumping in to do the character?
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@Parallel Hearts

I'll poke him for you and make sure he at least comments. No worries.
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@Parallel Hearts

I'll poke him for you and make sure he at least comments. No worries.


Thanks for the help.
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@Parallel Hearts

I may not respond because I'm too busy but don't worry, I see your posts because I'm always watching.

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Anyway, I'm still judging your character. Right now, I think your Sacred Gear is OP so... you know.

Secondly, just how psychopathic or uncaring is she when that personality surfaces? The character's personality may not be to Delilah's liking, removing any reason for her to put her in the peerage.
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@Parallel Hearts

I may not respond because I'm too busy but don't worry, I see your posts because I'm always watching.

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Anyway, I'm still judging your character. Right now, I think your Sacred Gear is OP so... you know.

Secondly, just how psychopathic or uncaring is she when that personality surfaces? The character's personality may not be to Delilah's liking, removing any reason for her to put her in the peerage.


Well, I can make it function like the other two Sacred Gears in the description. But, before I do that, let me point that, what limits the power is that, she can only use half of them at once. Until she learns her Balance Breaker, which I suppose no one will have from the get go, at least that's not my intention to have it, since it's a character development plot to have she find out why she's like that.

As for her cruel personality. It's nothing drastic, just an ill-humored side of hers. Even though she's going to be a demon, she's not going to be a monster, if that's what you are worrying about. Hmm... think of Saber of Red from Fate/Apocrypha, in terms of personality.
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Dunno if that last post was a too controlling. Will post for Sato tomorrow.
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@Parallel Hearts

I guess I can accept unlimited Holy/Demonic Swords. However, the swords will not be like super, super powerful okay?

As for the personality, I don't know Saber of Red. Why don't you finish up the character with the backstory and the personality so I can judge her properly.
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I guess I can accept unlimited Holy/Demonic Swords. However, the swords will not be like super, super powerful okay?

As for the personality, I don't know Saber of Red. Why don't you finish up the character with the backstory and the personality so I can judge her properly.


Right, I'll finish her soon enough. However, I've done some more reading and saw that I don't need really to make that Sacred Gear all new. Creating Holy Swords and Demon Swords at the same time is one of Kiba's abilities, I'm just a bit too rusty on my DXD lore. I didn't even watch Born until now, so I only knew that he had Sword Birth to make Demon Swords, not a second one to create Holy Swords at the same time.

That said, I can say that I'll ditch that Sacred Gear idea and give each of the twins one of Kiba's Gears, this will make her balanced since it's canon power level, right?

I'll see if I can finish it today, or tomorrow.

Thanks again.
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Right, right, have a post~

Spider would like to finish this unpleasant business quickly~
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Hey guys, I'm supposed to update today but due to constraints, I must delay it until this Friday.

Sorry for the inconvenience.
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I was about half-asleep when I posted the update so I didn't have the energy to post this. But anyway...

Since I found some time, I wrote up an update to make up the delay. However, my schedule is still iffy so for now, we'll update on Saturday and the next one will be on Tuesday.
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@PaulHaynek I put a reply for Kael on my last post. Just in case you miss it.
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Right-o!

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Anyway, sorry guys for the lack of update yesterday. I had to entertain the birthday guests but I will have a post up soon.
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