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D lrlv gsa wsun krjwxkk tyo ksb.
Sxr dygv wenee pjwp yv,
Aen av lxv pckum d hroi pgz wlhm ky wvwiu.
Sksdt wldt uygz uipazxk wsiq.


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@TheMushroomLord
Much better, I typically don’t recommend putting all of your eggs into one basket but that’s dialed back enough for me.

@TheMushroomLord

Everything looks good other than her skills being far too powerful for someone with minimal memory of their previous life. If your character had a spell book with hundreds of pages, they’ll be brought back with some rudimentary knowledge of magic and sparse memory of what was on a few pages.

In the sheet layout it says “ In detail, what does this memory teach your character about themselves, and below in the bullets list what skills these are expressed as. Players will begin with one memory, and as they progress they will accumulate more.”

You’ll gain more memories and knowledge as time goes on.
@Archangel89

A little too much creative freedom taken on this go around. Undead Alchemist is definitely on brand for the setting and feasible, but the contents of the character sheet are strict for a reason.

Your character is being summoned with minimal to no memory from their previous life, so the focus is based on the rudimentary skills they would have innately even if they don’t know how to tie their shoes.

Not denying it outright, but I’d ask for a revision where you follow the layout I’ve made.
Have a big kitty. Hope you have a big yarn ready.

Will makes this pretty later, have errands and work and moar writing to do stillllll.



A literal tiger joins the party, move them over when you’re done adulting.
The idea I had was for a single initial bug, that ‘assimilates’ other bugs it comes in contact with, with the limitation that once assimilated the bugs need to stay in range of the swarm or fall comatose. I’m somewhat partial to the idea of something as universally unnerving as a swarm of bugs figuring out magic because it wants friends.

That said, if I am limited to a single bug, as much as I love cockroaches, I think I’d have to go with a spider instead. That fits the best in my mind.


We will still love you, even if you’re a worm.
Or in this circumstance, a spider.
Hypothetically, a swarm of bugs that uses illusions to pretend to be human?


The issue with that is “one physical being” is being reincarnated.

I’d be cool with you coming back as a cockroach and having a super high Charisma score to make friends though!
@Vertigo

Giant cat is perfectly fine.
@TheMushroomLord

Other than not being a Lovecraftian Outer Entity, I’m not going to be that strict. The ballpark is anything with arms, legs, and a mouth, with the caveat of the more monstrous you are the less likely you’ll have positive interactions with the world.

There are a few monstrous races in Rogus that aren’t inherently evil; there’s a tribe of people that are highly developed insects that have been around long enough that they’re able trade and exist alongside the other races.

My advice would be, you can be as ugly as you like but just make sure you are able to walk around humans without being chased with torches and pitchforks.

Can't help but want to write fundamentally inhuman perspectives whenever I get the chance and since you said any race or species was potentially on the table I felt compelled to go for the weirder end of the spectrum. Hopefully, this isn’t too out there. Tell me if I need to change something or start over.


On an unrelated note, I cannot for the life of me figure out one of your cyphers and I swear to god I’m going to solve that thing if it’s the last thing I do.


As much as I love hungering mouth holes that transcend mortal comprehension, he’s a little too close to what would be profiled as the primary enemies throughout the story. So this will be the first, and apologetic no.

I’m cool with monsters! But it would need to be grounded to a degree that you’re able to interact with NPCS.

As for the cyphers, I have no idea what you’re talking about ༼ಠ ل ಠ༽
@bugmeat

Matrix OC is good to go, throw them into the bin.
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