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Current "An apology is a promise to do things differently next time, and to keep the promise." - Ging Freecss
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“If you want to find the secrets of the universe, think in terms of energy, frequency and vibration.” ― Nikola Tesla
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“I think and think for months and years. Ninety-nine times, the conclusion is false. The hundredth time I am right.” – Albert Einstein
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“Yesterday I was clever, so I wanted to change the world. Today I am wise, so I am changing myself.” ― Rumi
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“Stand in the ashes of a trillion dead souls, and asks the ghosts if honor matters. The silence is your answer.” ― Javik
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Just be sure to elaborate on that for the neodu. I could see Marie being tested on it but she was brought up into the government part of the colonies with little technical skills actually put to use. Testing is fine but she wouldn't have modded it herself. She actually isn't a skilled pilot.

P.S. The discord link is back up if you want to join us, easier to contact me on there.


Alright I made the corrections and cleared up any allusions to Marie actually working on the Neodu. The pendant is now a replica containing GN-particles. And his callsign has been added.

Gomenasai for being extra lol.
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You'll still have a chance of finding a gn drive in the searches or from the 'market' so don't worry about missing out on them (lore wise more were made after the series). Like I said I think a look alike with gn particles inside like a condenser would still be a neat idea, it could glow and all while being a lead to his innovator status. Only other thing to say on the character is you always have the option of adding a callsign, I don't know if you deleted it accidentally or on purpose but it adds a bit of character imo. Your choice for a callsign.

Only other hitch up is the neudo, no issues removing armor or parts, it's still adapted from amobile worker design and its speed only isn't enough to kill unless it was an accident to the pilot, snapping the neck or something.


Yeah, once you said I could still keep the particles I was onboard 100% with the lookalike idea. I was planning on adding a callsign, just gotta think of one that captures Sirius and is practical at the same time lol

As for the Neodu, that’s what I imagined happening. A few cocky pilots mismanaging the suit in practice. Not to allude that it’s super fast or anything. But mostly to give it’s a bit of depth and flavor. Also I wasn’t sure if you caught it or not, I’m hoping it’s not a problem, but I was intending for Marie to be the young Coordinator that modded the suit

@Phoenix347 Ohh, didn't think about that. We can take the lookalike angle, it being a genuine drive doesn't really affect Sirius' character at all. Wasn't my intention to have an advantage over others.

Anything else? I was kinda afraid I wouldn't catch ya on again. I tend to sleep in the afternoon and get up really early in the mornings.
Welcome! Apologies to the late response but welcome to you both! If you have any questions feel free to ask away as anything confusing you may confuse others including myself. I've fix up the link so you can join us on discord. As for suits lemme roll em, although the system has been quirky and adjusting it constantly.

@WXer
MWF-JG73 Civilian Astray JG Custom
MS-06R-3S High Mobility Type Zaku
MS-05Q Zaku I
@Renny
ENG-001 Estardoth
Neodu
RMS-006G Jenice Kai

Profile looks good so far, just to clarify a few things;
1. Are you intending for the gndrive pendent to be an actual gndrive or more of a toy lookalike with lights and such?
2. Communication in the colonies won't be too elaborate as everyone essentially can access panels for intracolony contact while outside is finniky but usable. Just info for the setting, empire doesn't have much else but radio with bases being equipped with encryption tech for more advanced, albeit military communications.
3. More curious than any issue, will the handler be a character you plan to make or just someone for the character to reference and interact with?

You don't need a mobile weapon profile on submission but I advise you start one as we will be customizing the suits through out the rp, like dding weapons or replacing limbs.


1. Its an actual, miniature GN-Drive. A huge part of why he's an Innovator too; down the line I plan on making it usable as an actual GN-Drive for a mobile suit if the cards fall into place.
2. Ohhh and gotcha, I'll keep that in mind. That actually makes things alot more interesting and sensible.
3. I kinda suck when it comes to multiple-characters lol though she will be a big-part of his interactions and such (hopefully wherever he goes, she goes).

As for my Mobile Suit, I choose the Neodu. I'll add that CS into the hider.
Not sure if I need a mobile suit sheet yet, so I give you Sirius for review. Hopefully he isn't too main-characterish or a mystery, even still I'm always ready for critiques and suggestions.

EDIT: Sorry about the double post.



@Phoenix347 I would also like a roll of that dice lol.
@Phoenix347 Looks fun, couple that with your overall drive and the atmosphere of the RP so far, makes this inviting. I'll be working on something today and if I don't get something up tonight, look forward to him/her in the coming days.

I feel a spark of excitement in my chest about this.

Yoyogi Park, Shibuya ward
"I do--much time. My--eople need help! You m--ave them!"


A warmth blew through him and he, for a instant, knew he was insane. His usual stoic expression, flinched. His lips shivered with the image of Haru's fleeting smile, the smile that uttered defeat and wished desperately for help. Fading as it was, the memory brought an unwanted familiarity to the cool night. It was warmer that horrible night, he realized. A snarl tightened his lips and the grip on his phone, even as Iori's shaky words of returning to the car drew closer to him.

I can't do that now, what if I'm the only one who can help this person.

Out of character for him and fully expected from her, from anyone really, Iori refused to chase after the sprinting boy. He rushed headfirst, gilted eyes wide-open, towards the humming, unnatural light in the park.

"Shit! Young Master come back!" she yelled.

Coming out into the open, stopping a reasonable distance but far closer than sane, Yasashiku shouted. "Where are you? I hear you, I'm here to help!"
So maybe we all don't have to be in the park but I'm just playing it safe in case the park is pivotal. I want to be in the mix lmao.

Yoyogi Park, Shibuya ward
"Pull the car over, Iori."


Convincing Iori to leave was impossible, instead he had demanded that the mature woman walk atleast a few paces behind him. Her duty to ensure his safety would be in reach, while his desire for privacy was also fulfilled. He'd told her he was playing Digimon: Tamers' World but in all actuality his curiosity and instincts had driven him to, what he assumed, was insanity. A voice in his head, neither Haru's or his own, distorted yet alluring... pleading myabe? he wasn't sure but he would never allow another person's potential plea for help to go unanswered.

As he strolled along through the park entrance, tall lights shone softly overhead, Iori's shoes stepping in perfect tune with his own, Yasashiku paused. Iori paused in the same moment. The gold of his phone paled in comparison to the bright light of the homescreen. "I'm going crazy..." he muttered. "I'm out here cause I thought I heard a voice. In my head. I'm not even sure if it came from here."

"But it feels like I should be here." he thought, the minute noise of nature an odd accent to his slight-mania.

After a short pause she stepped forward. "Young master, perhaps we should head home now," Iori suggested matter-of-factly.

Yasashiku sighed in acceptance and defeat. "Maybe... give me five more minutes."
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