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@officaz

Well, there's some questions. What IS our officer perspective on him. Because in this we just have a very formal psych report, we don't know his liabilities or personality by the view of our seargent. Why is being sent to ZELTA crew when the party could rope anyone with impunity to do this?

The officer doing this is most likely recommending him with full knowledge as to lethality-and length- of the job

Let me qoute @Starlance recommendation.

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Recommendations Officers Personality Observations:

Former co-workers describe Ms. Tangeman as practical, work-oriented and straightforward with no social life. Her mother described her as stubborn. Subject has a tendency to voice her mind whether it’s appropriate or not. Combined with her stubborn nature, this has led to disciplinary action in the past, but may be used to the Party’s advantage, as the subject will not back down when challenged, allowing overseers to manipulate her into doing something she herself thought impossible.

I’m recommending the subject for an engineering role due to her vast experience with ship maintenance, but her troubling attitude makes her unfit for further stay at her current post. It should be noted the suspect and her mother never got along and she has no other family.

- Dr. Richard Franklin, Party appointed psychologist, Silaris shipyards.

From this we short piece we know that:

Key parts of her personality. She was probably tolerated and treated with a soft contempt by her managers. Reason why she's being pushed out of her current position

(from the general demeanor of this whole thing they seem to of got sick of her so they shoveled her off to ZELTA crew but they don't expressly say it)

It's a good way to build your character indirectly and their sort of relationship with the universe. Kind of gives you lore via implication.

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@officaz

Conceptually he's fine, brother but there are some things I'd like to see revised before I accept it.

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1: You lost the code to the sheet. This is stuff that was in it like [hider] [color=antique white][/color] ectr. Please include this as it makes it look nicer. Or at least the hider since it makes browsing multiple sheets down the line easier.

2: I'd like a picture in the ID area. The picture can be of any style or medium.

3: There are some typos.

4: Traits are sort not phrased and explained in the way I showed in my example character-Michal Warrant- You can add a little to traits like Starlance's character did if you keep it very, very brief.

5: I'd maybe like a little more personality to the recommendations. Remember that in the context of the sheet we're getting a sort of officer perspective on him and as to why they're being put forward to ZELTA crew. The person doing this is most likely very aware that anyone going on this crew is going to die or be lost in space for a very long time and as such is being shifted about as expendable. Unless said officer is very niave/optimistic about the world he is

Officer in this case can be anyone from a parole officer, military, psychologist, human resources or security ectr.

I'd suggest you take a quick look at starlances or my example character before you make any changes

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@officaz

What do you mean, brother?

You got 25 points to spend if that's what you mean. Each option cost in the role pack is below it. If you're unsure you can say you'll have a "Box of crap" that cost all your points and I'll give you a bunch of random stuff myself.

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@datadogie

shit, discords groups aren't really my preference, comrade. So I didn't really plan to make one.

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Added the zelta crew flavor list to the Original Post. I've added the exact responsbilities under them this time, so everyone get's a bit of a clearer idea of exactly what each role will do.

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Shit, its starting to look like we might in the end have to start with less than a skeleton crew. It sucks because I felt that the base roles would add alot, but maybe we can start with a smaller ship and smaller crew. Hopefully when ZELTA crew 02 shuffle in more people will be interested when roles rotate/open up again.

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@Cleverbird

shit, kindred, it's all chiller than a yeti house with the windows broken. If you get time and the desire you're,motherfucking, welcome back. We'll be periodically getting new crew slots when the crew dies later.

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@Voltus_Ventus

The A.I has a direct comms link from the authority so we kind of got something like that.

Definately, the party is meant to be faceless so I'm glad I put that image through.

The OS ironically is really low in the party power scale. That's why he's on the ship, he more akin to some petty expendable manager that's been shuffled into a bad position. They knew he's got a low chance of coming back alive, but the party got to have someone there to keep an eye on the crew.

Plus most importantly...if someone in the party WAS blamed, instead of the director who put zelta crew together the OverSeer gets the blame. It helps they're normally dead so they can't defend themselve either. I mean, he WAS the over seer. "He was directly managing them, who elses fault could it be that zelta crew died/turned traitor/ mutated into space nymph psycho cyborgs"

Happens rarely, most of the time it's the captain but it's an extra buffer.

Powerful people exploiting less power people who exploit even less powerful people.

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@Voltus_Ventus

When you guys vote for a ship it comes with some preset stuff, then the captain choose one accesory and one utility-this adds one more of each- So, if you do pick it don't pick the items yet. I might generate a list.

Accesories are all optional stuff and go all over the place-from 3D printing recycling vending machines so you can get coffe and shit to radiation showers-

Utilities are more direct stuff. Like heat sheilding, larger armory, a prison, ship guns.

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@Voltus_Ventus

shit, I'd reckon it depends on what you're hungering for, comrade.

The OS has a lot more freedom but he's essentially an antagonist and as such he's a very strong RP role, you'll be dealing with intrique, relationships and generally being sometimes the cause of shit via your foibles and flaws-or your own privately sent events- but you'll have less chance to deal with certain events like ship catching on fire or going into combat with the military on a pirate ship.

As captain your package and role gives you at least some involvement with every sort of event, since you are directly responsbile for telling the crew what to do and will dicate where to go on the space chart(most of the time). So you won't be relied upon to RP as heavily, but when you pick a star on the map and the ship sexually assualted by a sentient war ship having an identity crisis you'll be to blame.