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huh, seems distractions were causing some brain farts again...

I'll just proof read things next time, and honestly I'm really working to get the emoticon habit to break, but It 'never' shows up in more serious posts, especially never IC... That was supposed to say 'serving the purpose', though that's not really entirely 'non-sense' just an annoying slip.

I actually deliberately made him look like that 'because' it made him look like a jack-ass, the implication was it was some other idiot's idea to try and make him intimidating, and running into that on the street would still freak a dude out. The quotation of 'lucky genetics' was not meant to be serious, but an allusion to the later mention in his background of genetic tampering for the sake of being a better enforcer, he was already tough, they just did something to add a little more. It's not like he's gonna go around face-punching mechs, that'd be fucking stupid.

It's whatever though, I can just dump the genetic tinkering that all of those problems are tied to. Also, I didn't say he was 'from' Russia, I was referencing that as an archetype.

Okay, so then, nerf about 90% of the support potential by removing the only thing that can move around to the other side of something that he's repairing [he can't even 'see' the other side of something even if the normal arms could reach around that far], as well as the only thing that can actually hand out the ammo from his storage pack [you don't think those arms are flexible enough to grab his 'back' do you?], and remove the 'rail-gun' part of the railgun [rail-guns generally have to charge in order to shoot afterall, I wasn't talking one shot kill punch-through, we're talking several seconds of charge to be able to get a single standard shot to actually 'make it' to long-range distance, not to mention the compact gun with no integrated power-source can't even power it's rail-gun function without the tendrils that were setup to hook into it.]

I 'already' included a bit about the Over-charging for the force-blast causing them to be unable to charge more energy for a while, which inherently includes being unable to charge the energy portion of the shields.

I hate to say this, but the sheet is honestly a complete mess. While I'm not a grammar nazi by any measure (in fact, English isn't even my native language), this crossed the limit of what I can deem as acceptable writing. It is full of typos, bad grammar, improper use of capitalization and even has parts that are unintelligible such as this:

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I can't help but feel that you took some parts of it more seriously than they were meant to be taken, but like I said, I'll go through and proof-read shit.

On a side note, I hate mary/marty/gary's too.

I also had no intention of him being like 'hulk dude' or any such shit, though it's funny the implication that a character having healthy muscular genetics would qualify them as being perfect [the requirement of being anything close to a 'mary sue'.] which is a remarkably over-used assumption I see on the internet, people pretending to be superior because they have some muscle on em.

I actually had a good idea in my head for the general proportions, but I honestly got fucking SICK of stumbling across porn, on Deviantart no less, while trying to find a good example, so I gave the fuck up. But I'll just scrap the text portion and use the picture that's already there then.
Hopefully I didn't over-do it. I'm always paranoid that in the zealous pursuit of an exciting Idea I got, I go too far >3> but that's what these interest check phase are 'for'. Catching that early and fixing it.

Hopefully not though. It's designed to be slow super-heavy tank support, it only has one thing dedicated to 'offense' and the rest is primarily for defense or supporting allies, even if can kindof be used to bash a dude's face in or melt it if they get too close.

Pilot Sheet
  • Name: Diggajam Musti
  • Appearance: [I'd been hoping to get a picture for this... but you can only search the internet for this variety for so long before getting tired of finding everything you 'don't' want appearing... People need to upgrade their search features! So the image is just his preffered out-fit, minus the silly hat]


    Digga is a monster of a man, easily fitting the profile of a hulking Russian and showing off those 'lucky genetics' by being taller than most other people and built like a tank, and he's probably not even done growing yet. He manages to look pretty imposing with that size, coupled with almost comically red hair and 'shiny' gold colored irises.
  • Age: 16
  • Personality: Despite his size and ability to look ready to crush a man's skull whenever he's not smiling, he is actually the very definition of a Gentle Giant. He 'likes' to smile, and he 'likes' to help others and be friendly, but he also likes to keep them very safe, and when provoked also fits the profile of 'Don't fuck with the Quiet ones'. Once he got over his past, he seemed to settle into the behavior of a Fiercely protective older brother... tooo, just about anyone who wasn't an enemy really.
  • Motive to live: Life changes, he's always defended his home-turf... now, it's just changed so that the turf, and it's inhabitants, that he's protecting is much larger.
  • Background:
  • Notable Deaths: Probably more than he lets on, but the gang he thought of as Family died... Perhaps more importantly, he imagines that his old life died with them.
  • Other things:

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Framewerk Sheet
  • Framewerk Code Name: Big Fix
  • Appearance:
  • Signature Weapon System:
  • Secondary Weapon System:
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  • Special Ability: Uuunnnknooowwwnnn

@Shoryu
Nothing wrong with a cute pony girl, but they also won't fit in the RP, genetic manipulation involved or not.

@redbaron1234
No, they don't have to. In fact, my character's mecha is only vaguely humanoid.


I agree, or dude XD! funny as it might have been to see one here.

And, Haaa, Go tau... I suck playing Tau in the games, except the Shaz'O, dat flying curb-stomp. I prefer the imperial guard myself because BERN BLERDE!

Also, Gettin busy now. I got interupted amidst my working on the CS yesterday and the interuption never quite let go XD

Sorry, but I'll have to refuse this idea. I find half-horses to be...unsavory.


good heavens! I saw this comment, and because of my experience with the internet, my imagination immediately assumed someone brought up ponies... THANKS INTERNET!
@LHG100
If you have trouble coming up with a name, I can suggest one.
Could you elaborate on his appearance instead of using terms like "Resting-Asshole-Face"? I would appreciate that. Multiple secondary equipment is fine, but the barrier generator is too much.

@Shoryu
There are no limits to the technology Framewerks have available to them. They are experimental units fitted with the latest weapons and systems, whether they are reverse-engineered from the Cruxi or developed independently. Just note the realism factor to this; planet-destroying weaponry are off-limits, for example.


Coolness, I shall have mine designed up within an hour or 2 =3 Here comes the heavy! :D
@Quextamon Don't worry about that. Souls games are inspiration, but story is unrelated to them completely.

@Shoryu Hunters are regular humans with no supernatural enhancements, although there will be 2 classes with access to supernatural abilities. There will be no good-guy vampires in the RP, nor dhampirs/half-vampires. Indeed, vampires are somewhat like the guys from Legacy of Kain series. They are all bosses, you'll mostly be fighting their thralls which can be all kinds of freakish monsters.


Ah, I'm in then :D though i'll be curious to hear about those 2 classes!

And yeah, you won't get any attempts at half-vampire/half-werewolf, demon summoning school girl offspring of superman from me! ... The scary thing is, I've seen that before -_-
Ohhh, I adore those games, Dark souls is mah shit XD

So yeah, I'm interested, just one silly question. Aside from the obvious 'dudes done up with lots of training and cool medieval style toys', Is there more to them? Like, Witcher/grey warden style, where they compensate for their vulnerabilities against monsters by undergoing magical or biological rituals to help them stand a better chance? Are there the cliche 'Vampires that 'saw the light' and decide to help hunt other vampires'? Or other supernatural individuals that aren't vampires, hidden or not, given that the setting puts Vamps out there? It's not like vampires are the only thing we'll end up fighting right? >3> unless of course those vampires are kindof like in things such as the legacy of Kain series, where they develop different specialties or even mutations depending on all kinds of different factors...

okay, so a silly 'chain' of questions.
@Shoryu
The Earth Bender role, yes. If you are applying for that role then I prefer it if you PM me.


Hmmm, well then! I'm thinking about the weapon master, but I might change my mind on that depending on this question.

The setup of, say, technology, is it essentially like, 'full on medieval with the avatar flair'? Or is it setup akin to the 'era of Aang', just assumed to be waaay back? I'm asking mostly to define in my head the general level of tools/gadgets and the like a non-bender would have available to work with in the era of the RP that would allow them to not be entirely out-classed by benders. [obviously Korra Era steam-punk stuff would be Rediculous to see XD]
WELL! That's a lotta bumps XD it looks interesting, but I figured i'd see if you consider it to already have enough people XD
I'll join in and use PONY STUFF!...

No, no i won't actually, I'm just fuckin with ya.

But I 'am' interested, if perchance there aren't already too many people setup now that I've noticed the RP :D
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