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If this had been your regular old anime, the heroes might have used this encounter in some way that it would have strengthened their skills and made them more aware of their shortcomings. The weekend would have been used to make friends, render their bonds as a team stronger. Maybe they did that, in their own way, or on their last day off - but mostly, it seemed, a wave of negativism submerged the group; regrets, guilt, anger and frustration were the name of the game.

Monday's weather seemed to agree with our heroes, as the sky was filled with grey clouds and rain poured down on the city. Despite everything, they were of course expected to show up for their classes once the week began. Unless of course if their injuries were too severe and didn't permit it. The first half of their day was filled with regular academic classes. Even heroes had to learn and pass those, of course. Those teachers were your regular, everyday teachers who focused on the class subject and did their best to avoid mentioning hero work too much. So, the morning would be filled with English, History and Economy and the such.

Time soon came around for the lunch break, and as everyone would be gathering their things the English teacher spoke up

"Ah Yes! Everyone, this afternoon's first part of Hero Training class with Mr. Hayes is cancelled due to an important meeting. He has instructed me to tell you all to take this free time for extra study. Do not take it lightly, Mr. Hayes is known for his surprise tests after all."


Generally speaking, when they had Hero Training in the afternoon it was split in two parts; Physical then Academic - which meant that the physical part was the one cancelled. Depending on the student, this was either a good or bad new. What was more, it was also true that Mr. Hayes was not known to cancel his classes ever. Which meant this meeting was of some importance.




"How much?" said Mr. Hayes. He was sitting at a long table in the Principal's office along with four other teachers and, instead of Enterprise, the man who had come to their help at the Factory on Saturday. It seemed they were in a conference call with someone over the phone. "Too much." the voice answered.

"With that they stole, they could muster a small army. Or worst."

Silence fell on the table while the information was seeking in. All the gear they stole did not only mean they amassed that much wealth, but it also meant that it most likely would end up on the streets thanks to the black market. In the hands of common thugs. "Troubling news, but nothing that we can do about it - What about their identity and motives? Any news on that part?"

Arthur, as was his, was a tall man and handsome man; short, well kept black hair and a focused and serious look. He almost always wore a vest ontop of his clothing with his arms under it, not in the sleeves. He missed his left arm and always has his cane with the other arm. Arthur was born without an arm only for him and his family to discover way later in his life that this was to be his Quirk. Arthur was also known as Fate's Hand, his hero's name, otherwise known as the 2nd Pro Hero in the country, after Enterprise. He was chosen to replace her as Principal, a position which he accepted.

"We're looking into it, it's only a question of time. What about Enterprise?"


Mr Hayes would be the one to answer; "Well, for now she's...

...as good as dead." answered Noxious back at her interlocutor.

(No more Rainy Mood)



She was standing, in the room where she and her Villain's League had first met. The room, along with most of the hideout, had been developed and upgraded. From the exterior it still looked like a ruin, but the inside now had rooms for those who might need a place to lay low or stay at. The 'conference' room was now Noxious' quarters. Gone were the crates, power generators and wires. In it stead the floor had been equalized and, in the corner, a personal training area. This was where Noxious was standing, punching and kicking away at a punching bag between her answers. She was in her combat outfit.

The person she spoke to was on screen, although their identity was masked by a dark veil of shadow. Classic. Only a few persons knew that All For One was the one leading the League of Villains. Most thought him dead - this was not All for One. Just like Noxious led this branch of the League, her direct superior led the branch of the League in North America.

"If I had reached her, she would already be dead. I scraped her cheek with one finger. The poison will take hold, but it will take time since the dose was minimal. I do not know how long it will take, just that the result is assured." she said, taking a break and walking away towards the screen, while stretching her arms.

"Leave nothing to chance. You are a professional - act professional. I want to be certain of Enterprise demise - the last vestige of All Might's ideals - before we proceed with the plan. Still, you know what to do. I will trust you with the next steps, do not disappoint us, Miss Araraki."

The purple haired villain did not display the acknowledgement of her superior's order. No nod, no words - just a stare at the screen until it closed and left her alone in a room where, once more, her comrades were supposed to join her shortly. The next part of the plan was bound to be even more exciting.
@Genon I don't like how you wrote this Quirk. It's too versatile, not focused enough and not well balanced in my opinion. Gaining speed and pwoer from storing sound sounds just like an excuse to have another hero with super strength and speed, which are two things that are supposed to be a lot more rare in MHA than other super heroes stories. I just feels like literally everyone wants that, and it's a bit annoying to be honest.

A quirk that blocks sound around himself and store it to use it back in sounds shockwaves sounded do-able, but I'm not ready to accept the accumulation part that makes him stronger for no good reason.
@Tenma Tendo I suggest joining the Discord to discuss it more easily, if you have Discord ! It helps tons.

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@Tenma Tendo This Quirk is fine as it is, I think. She can't put too many big objects in herself (This is going to become awkward fast) and just storing things isn't useful enough that I'd think it's OP without a limit. Beside the amount of things she stores is limited by the size of her own body and available place for tattoo, as well as being vulnerable to lose them if she'S wounded. I think this Quirk already feels like a Quirk enough as it is.

I'm ready to accept this character as it is, just wait for BlackCat's Approval. :)

@Ryonara From what I see, I think you can post the CS, but make sure BlackCat said it's fine, too, first.
@Genon I'll check that tomorrow. It's getting late here, I'm heading to bed. :P

@Tenma Tendo The second one seems easier to make a Quirk out of. It actually sounds like a good MHA Quirk alright ! I'd like to see a CS of such a concept !
@Tenma Tendo Yup. Still accepting as it is. I'd like to hear those Quirks. :P


With the sound of a door closing behind him, Oliver was now left in an empty Hospital corridor; alone with himself and his thoughts. What happened during the trip was not foreseeable, but he was left wondering of things could have been different. This was the third time he tried to speak to Sofia's parents, but as she wrote in the letter Hayes knew not the existence of - everything had been decided and set in stone. With a sigh he took off, turning a corner only to run into one particular person.

Mr. Sparks - and alone? Strange indeed as he seemed to be quite popular with his class mates. The thought of what happened came back ina flash, in the teacher's mind. Such an event would be hard to process for such young heroes in training, that much he knew. Parts of the fight had been vicious, people were hurt. To see his student limp forward like this... well, it was a metaphor in itself. Hayes did have a mind to go forward to speak to him. To tell Renard that he did good, as well as the others, to hold off as they did. In the face of real danger and hardship, they used everything they could to protect one another. He couldn't be more proud to have witnessed this - but he did not step forward.

A closer look down the hall, towards where Renard was heading, revealed more of Hayes' students. With a nod and the semblance of a smile, Hayes turned the other way. For the better or worse, they were a team now. He would address them in class.






Later on that Saturday, as the sun was setting on San Francisco, a hooded person was making their way down a busy street near the docks of the city. People were running about, heading for whatever destinations they were bound to reach. The hooded figure's way brought her to a street heading in a poor part of the neighborhood and each steps she took, each corner she turned, seemed like it brought her in increasingly disfavored parts of the city until she entered a large building. The heavy metal doors closed behind her as she stepped in, echoing in the emptiness of this seemingly abandoned storage area. There was a few containers scattered about, left to dust and rust. Past those vestiges, towards the back, was a much larger iron container with a single window straight on top of it, a ray of sunlight aiming down on it; it had no visible openings, and no text written on it. It's large gate was shut tight, but a smaller door allowed entrance on it's side - this was where Noxious headed.

It took her close to a good minute to unlock the secured door and step it, closing it back behind her before she finally removed her hood. The inside of the container was nothing like the abandoned outside. It contained a concealed living area; small, but comfortable. The ceiling was a large window, allowing the sunlight in during the day. Everything was tidy to a fault. In the corner was a library full of books, some scattered on the small table close by. There was also a small one-place sofa near the table, in the opposing corner was a small kitchen beside which was the door from which Noxious just entered. To her right, a sleeping area complete with a bed, and a much younger boy laid on it, reading a book. The boy had left his book and sat up when he heard the woman get in.

"I did not expect you before next week?"

Without saying a word, Noxious stepped in the room and dropped a backpack she had been carrying on the small table, pushing the books aside, causing one or two to fall on the ground. From the bag she got some food out along with new books of varied topics; from fantasy to modern politics.

"I was nearby." she said, her purple, jaded eyes aiming down at the boy who was now picking up the books she caused to fall. Calmly, he put them back in the library, then took a look at the new books.

He sat at the Sofa, taking a look at the new books. He seemed to be no more than 15 years old, give or take. The boy had short, pale blonde hair and seemed very thin and weak. Part of it may have been due to bad nutrition, but everything also pointed to him having some sort of condition. "Have you changed the world yet?" He as if it was the most nonchalant thing ever. Noxious chuckled under her mask and she began putting away the food in the kitchen.

"On the day it happens, you'll go free."

"Like you freed our parents?"

If that comment was supposed to faze Noxious in any way, it failed. She finished refilling the kitchen, then headed back to the door, opening it and looking back at the boy before adding; "You know the answer to that." and the massive iron door closed shut on the little boy's existence.
@Ryonara Forgot to answer you ! Sorry !

Could work. Then he could train his muscles, basically, to allow himself to work on his Quirk more. Something like that? If you edit it in, notify me that I can confirm and you can put it in the CS tab.

@LuckyBlackCat
Post, Post.
@Aerandir Beautiful. I can accept this as it is. Post in the CS Tab and feel free to join the Discord !
It has to be him.

Quirks are not super powers, and from what I saw so far people tend to see them too much as this... Quirks are essentially all mutations of the body. The Quirks have to find their origin from within someone, and more often than not using a Quirk will tire you just as much as using any other parts of your body, like legs or arms. So this is the direction you have to take.

My villain is Poisonous, but she has to maintain that poison in a way not yet disclosed. Some others are hurt when they use their Quirks or hurt themselves or get tired. So this is the way you have to take to develop a real MHA Quirk ! Hehe.

Way I see it, maybe he uses his energy when he uses the Quirk, so he has to eat more than others. Or Drink, or something like that.
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