Solace

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YOUR CHARACTER SHEET WAS HERE

I wasn't sure if we had to introduce how we were related to the current conflict/war. In any case I was figuring a Lord (probably one of the players) would have information about Daisy and would promise Daisy her land if she helped their cause. Idk. Just a thought.

@Innsert

I like your character, she has a very intriguing biography. Classic brotherly jealousy :^)

Though, the only conflicting aspect is the last bit of her biography, which ties into your question. I'm not entirely sure how she would necessarily fit in with the force trying to stop the rebellion.

Perhaps the province that her family, Rhegall, is amongst the separatist collection of southern provinces, and through the guise of trying to stop the rebellion, she could just be going to try and reclaim it?

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Species (if Laguz): Cat, her cat form is primarily light blond, but with a blue streak going down the back of her head and back, all the way to the tip of her tail.

@Oblivion666

Same as Twilight said before; with the inclusion of all species for Laguz, the "Leopard" species would be more fitting for the combative feline species, since a Caf in this sense would be like, the average housecat. It's just a matter of titling, really, no big problem here.

Personality:
To her fellow Laguz she can be seen being most nice and respectful to them. Being kind too all her Laguz brethren

To Beorcs now, she can become slightly aggressive. Having a hatred of them ever since she was a child(Or kitten if I want to use puns) Going such lengths as to rather dying than to be saved by one, even if she is being rescued by nothing more than an innocent child.

There has only been one Beorc that she DID trust and liked, but with him gone

Her hearing is pretty great, sometimes great enough that it even annoys her sometimes

Although their are ways to figure this out so its slightly useless, her sense of direction is top notch.

@Oblivion666

For every underline in the quote, I'll reply separately.

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I think it's the way that this is worded, but I am under the impression that, if rewritten, it is saying that Neela has such a dislike for Beorc that even if her life was endangered, she'd rather die than bludgeon her pride, even if it's a child saving her.

like*

I think it should be "pretty good" instead of pretty great.

there* and it's*

It's orimarily just the wording. I think her personality, as a Laguz, is standard and good enough; she'll definitely like one of my first two characters who shares almost the exact sentiments as she does.

Though, I do have a question: why is she aiming to volunteer for the Beorc's call to stop the rebellion who started their revolt because the Emperor declined allegations of endorsing the enslavement of Laguz in Cliace? Is she going to be against us, and something happens where she ends up joining us?

*biography here*

@Oblivion666

I'm actually kind of confused. So the person who acted as her guardian for however long just up and left after Neela defended herself? A number of Beorc may be racist towards the Laguz, but if he willingly looked after her, I don't think he was one of these Beorc, nor do I think he would just leave. He also seemed to have just left without making the observation that the man was armed, either.

I mean, I can accept your character, it's just that the biography was fairly.. strange. Like, things just happened spontaneously, almost as if it were solely for the sake of just happening so there would be a biography. I don't know, it's just not my cup of tea. It's nothing that would make me not accept it, though.

What is holding me back from doing so is the question from before: what is her involvement in Part I? The biography should lead up to the plot, but with how her personality is, it seems like she would be against us first.

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@solace "Travelling" is also correct and used quite a bit outside of the US.

@Jester Acharis

I personally prefer a single l, since it's the way I was always taught to write while growing up. I do know you can use two l's, it's just my OCD.

It seems I may have some more free time in this class, so I'll try to go through the next one.

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Time to begin the overview of character sheets.

I get down to the little details when it comes to it, like the spelling of words; this is because of my intense OCD / perfectionism. I request these changes to be made before I accept your character(s), or if I have any questions / issues, we discuss them before posting in the Characters tab.

I'll also, uh, comment on stuff that I like a lot.

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~Equipment~
Staff, Vulnerary x3

@TwilightDragon

Should be "Heal Staff" if that's what she has. Or "Mend Staff", and so forth.

~Appearance~
Her legs are long and toned from travelling on horseback

@TwilightDragon

traveling*

~Personality~
It is not uncommon to think that a Troubodour such as Aelia Theroux would have a sunny and upbeat personality, but she does not fit the common healer stereotype. She is brash and bitter and is not afraid of stating what's on her mind, no matter if people are likely to punch her in the face. When it comes to healing, her hands do not have the "tender touch" of other medics; she is rather rough with her patients and will often tell the ones who are making a fuss to be quiet.

Despite being a sour woman most of the time, Aelia is known to stress and fret over the people who she cares about. Unfortunately, the stress only makes her become aggressive, rash, and even more blunt than she was before. She is known to charge headlong into battle to rescue a fallen comrade without a moment of thought during these times of extreme anxiety.

Surprisingly, there are instances of some people approaching Aelia to seek advice. Due to being painfully truthful and not holding back in telling someone they're being "idiotic" or "stupid", she is known to be a good consultant.

@TwilightDragon

troubadour*

The issue that I have with this portion pertaining to her status as a healer, the magic associated with healing is considered holy and would technically require a kindred spirit to operate in order to be effective.

It's similar to how, in order to master the fell arts of dark magic, the chances of the individual not succumbing to the fell arts itself would be near impossible, if the principle of light magic/healing requiring some form of purity would be applied.

~Biography~
Ever since Aelia was a small girl, she was the prized possession of her father. Being a member of House Theroux, a minor Cliacian noble family known for its practioning in magic, her parents made sure that she was treated well by others. It was her father that taught her how to heal using staves while her mother showed her how to ride horses. She would become one of the many Troubadours that House Theroux raised as per tradition.

Her father left the household to fight in a war when she was only six years old.

*snip*

Unable to deal with living in the city any longer, Aelia left and moved north when she was twenty.

@TwilightDragon

practice*

The issue with your biography is that there has been no major war/conflict for a very, very long time, as mentioned in the first post. There have only been small disputes over land, which are just that; small disputes, that of which are not armed conflicts and end in brevity. Though this is a small detail, it seems to conflict with the entirety of your biography, so I'll leave it at that.

The biography should also detail up until the synopsis of the plot for Part I, where people are volunteering along with the army to stop the rebellion, and et citera.

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I actually only have time to do this one character sheet, but I'll see if I have time next block. If not, I'll be home in a few hours to continue working, but I guess you can say this is an example of how I analyze character sheets. :^)

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Is there room?

@Demous

Yup.

I'll check out character sheets later 'cause school.

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So I know, we are allowed multiple characters right? And Im assuming laguz that aren't in Chalice wont be playing a main part yet?

@Oblivion666

I mean, characters can come from anywhere. We're just beginning in Cliace.

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Where did everybody go? :o

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Hrmmm, one more question- are the classes as gender specific as they are in the Games? No Female Barbs/Fighters/Pirates? No male Pegasus Knights?

@Innsert

Pegasus Knights are the only gender-specific class from the list (restricted to female), other than Bard/Dancer and Priest/Cleric. Ill allow characters like female Fighters and Pirates, though they may not be as prevalent as males in those classes would be.

The other thing would be Troubadours also being male and female, though their promotion routes are gender based: Valkyrie for Females, and Mage Knight for Males.

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It began with a spark.

Intent, carried by motivation. Ideals, ignited by passion. The continent of Pyrgos was not always divided into the two dominions of today.



Once a land unified under common principles, mankind became unkind. The blood of brothers soaked the very confines of the world as society waged war with itself, threatening the complete destruction of progress. With their conventional weapons, Beorc hunted one another ruthlessly as the Dragon Tribes of the Laguz attempted to quell the violence, whose efforts only accelerated the genocide tenfold.



But this disaster would not go unnoticed.

The Great Purge came faster than the spark itself; the gods, known as the Creators, were unforgiving of the atrocities that mankind, once their beloved invention, had committed. Their judgement was swift and severe, as all punishment would be from then on. Almost all life on Pyrgos was swept away by their power, except for the purest of hearts. The entirety of the Dragon Tribe was exiled into the rifts of limbo, their fury never to be witnessed again.

For those who were spared, they went their separate ways and drew their borders, establishing the three original nations of Cliace, Vuscar, and Rakaan. With the goal of preventing such a blasphemy, the founder and first emperor of Cliace, Ffænir, declared the lands accompanying his empire as an independent separation. In agreement, King Horus of Vuscar constructed the Great Divide of Pyrgos, officially creating the Western and Eastern Separations of Verus and Priscus. The Laguz of Rakaan, wanting no part in the decision to segregate the land, maintained their neutrality.



In due time, civilization crawled from the pits of those dark days, and rose from the ashes. Mankind had learned its lesson; progress made way for the birth of several nations, and for many millenia, the Creators' will was upheld as a sacred testament.



Though, the intent and ideals of a single man stand divided between the preservation of these ancient vows, threatening the resurgence of Pyrgos' past transgressions.

It begins with a spark.

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Post them here first, please. I'll then check them out and after approving them, you can post them into the Characters tab.

Right now, our characters will be grouped up (members of the regular army or volunteers which can be ordinary people with some experience or mercenaries, be flexible) to be sent to stop the rebellion in southern Cliace.

As of now, the Eastern Separation has no involvement, and Emperor Deacon is trying to contain the conflict within Cliacian borders so it doesn't spill over to Kadrein.

I also posted a bit of Pyrgos' history as the first post in the IC. :)