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    1. Spirit 7 yrs ago

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6 yrs ago
Current I want to like, make a new rp group. But I don't have any super amazing creative ideas for one.
7 yrs ago
Why do I insist on asking idiotic questions? It's just going to make me feel more like an idiot.
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7 yrs ago
No more procrastinating! It's time to get up and fight some boredom!.... You know... Like... In a minute...
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7 yrs ago
Gonna get me some tacos.
7 yrs ago
Feeling pretty lonely today. Not many people want to talk it seems.. Work wasn't all to great either. I need a new job.
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Bio









Well that poem was a fun place holder but I guess I should put in a real bio.

Well to start off, I'm a 22 year old male and writing is a huge hobby of mine in general. I've been rp'ing close to about 8 years now with various outlets but since it's hard to find partners after a while I decided to join up on a forum. I hate rp'ing in fandoms that allow for non-original content so you won't find me going into any Naruto or Star Wars rp's that take place in the era of the show or attempting to just live out the in show scenes. I hate posting less than I can describe when it comes to my rp's, and love to develop expansive in depth worlds. All this lead to me trying to organize open world rp scenarios, but time's a' wastin' and I want to get my writing fix.

I don't really have any genres I won't rp if I find them interesting, but I definitely prefer Sci-fi and Fantasy settings. Really I'm not sure what else to put here, I'm having trouble finding rp's to get involved in and I'm waiting to see if mine will go anywhere before I give up pitching ideas. I prefer characters that talk over using brute strength, and this usually lands me the role as the Rogue in games such as D&D or literally every rpg ever. I don't mind playing female characters at all and I have several I love to play, but not many males that I don't just make as I go. I am very willing to go 18+, feel free to approach me with pitches.


I know I'm forgetting something... I'll come back to this.




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Just to be straight, the Achlys is not unique to Alexander. In principle, everyone could corrupt mana and turn it into Achlys. However, Alexander does it by instinct. Meaning he constantly does it subconsciously. Its kind of the opposite of Aether.


@Legion02

So I hate to say but I do want to talk a few things over with you before I approve it, first just to get out of the way: No Death Magic. Just any magic that says "And it dies" is just too overpowered for any kind of arena combat. Second, he doesn't really strike me as all that evil. He sounds like his family is evil, but he sounds kind and gentle. So even if he were to be helping his father that would still make him good with just a lawful patriotic duty to his family, I had my concerns when you said he was abhorrent of racism as a human especially. Don't get me wrong, racism is very very bad, but the fact of the matter is it's going to be there in a fantasy setting with so many different races to pick from, and while it may not take the form of humans hating other humans over skin tone, it will take the form over hating dwarves because they have a history of conflicting interests. The reason I go into this, it's a generically good trait to be an accepting person. So if you want him to be evil, I recommend giving him a more cynical and selfish attitude. Think "I'll help them later because they can be of use to me" or "My assistance comes at a cost." Alignment is a general blanket term, but if you call him truely lawful evil then a lot of people are going to be confused when you start going into the rp.

On the other hand, you using a corrupted form of Aether is entirely fine, it goes into some secret lore im sure you will like as someone playing a necromancer. You actually hit a bit of a hidden thing that I was dancing around when describing the dark elves, a source of magic that can corrupt it's user. That being said I'm going to make you a very vague offer that I promise is much more interesting than it sounds, would you like your character to have some cryptic voices in his head?

OH I ALMOST FORGOT. Necromancy is considered an affront to nature and is evil because of it, if you manage to find a dead body and resurrect it at the school, you will get yelled at by a teacher and potentially get detention. So. Actions and Consequences.

Can you look at mine to see if there are anything needed to be changed? Thanks.
@Spirit


Ok so here everything works, you're neutral evil was the correct call as it means she is very cynical just by nature and lines up with her history. The only thing I dare to tell you to change is that you should probably just use the term Biomancy which is the magic to slowly or abruptly change living tissue and influence evolutionary changes. It would just be easier than having to explain it all the time y'know?

With that said, it checks out. Approved.

So...three evil CSes to two good CSes?


We're sure to get more coming in eventually, but if it makes you feel any better when you use the term evil in DnD it's not necessarily like they're all going to screw you over, like I said in Scarecrow's case, their character is more cynical this does mean that overall they will be prone to evil tendencies like a disregard to what the general populace considers to be decency and doing things like digging up corpses in an attempt to bring them back to life Frankenstein style. In
Shit I double posted when I meant to edit...

I wish there was a delete post button now I have to make a random comment here..

Uh...

I enjoy animus.

Nothing to see here. Move along. Mover along.




Staff -




Students-




Otters -





This is a list of my characters, this will be updated as I go and one day organized into students and teachers. Some details are missing, this is intentional and meant to be discovered as the rp goes along.




Hey Who's Alive in this rp? Well I'll tell you~
The Gm, me, Spirit as: Literally everyone that is affiliated with staff of the school or npcs. As well as books. All the books. I am the books.

Rune_Alchemist as: That very tsundere Elf Girl over there, aka

Scarecrow as:

Legion02 as:

Hagroden as:

Multi_Media_Man as:

A ReusableSword as:

MadManMoon as:

Lucius Cypher as:

Ellie of the Chicago aquarium as:


With Guest star
Ryan Gosling as:
@Rune_Alchemist@Conscripts@Letter Bee

I'm fine with it I just don't want you to be confused when I reference it later in the rp. Now that I have a few eager players I'll be writing up the first IC and moving people around vaguely to get through the whole orientation speech in one go.

This may take me some time to work out but once I've thoroughly established the setting and whatnot you'll all be free to act and react as you wish. Do remember that just because I say something in the rp, doesn't mean your character has to accept it as law. Especially you rune, since your character is a bit bratty on the inside feel free to try and get your way when your character wouldn't necessarily get what she wants, debate teacher's decisions, make fun of people, you know whatever you wanna do I only point it out so you won't feel the need to hold back on your character's persona. I'm going to purposefully make decisions everyone's characters may have issues with at some point or another. So All in all, everyone just react the way they deem to be fun and don't worry about stirring up drama. I'm going to now start the long and tedious process of writing up a general staff list and a few student personas for me to use for whenever you guys need an in to interact with someone. Please be patient playing an entire school will be a challenge for me I admit between roughly 10 characters and plenty of players that will require my attention as GM as well as having to juggle the decision to throw in challenges for you all. I hope you all look forward to this as much as I do!

And just a general statement since we are still welcoming newcomers, whenever a new student enters it will be treated as if they had joined the school at the same time but just happened not to meet you yet. Like that one kid that always sits in the back of the classroom and doesn't talk to anyone so he kinda just blends into the school environment like me in real life.

With that said, keep your eyes peeled, have fun, let the magic flow,

Until next time Mages!~
@Spirit

Alright, I think I've spent faaaar too long on this. I feel like I could explain the magic better, or at least give a somewhat comprehensive list of magic she is capable of using but I'll get to that later if you want it. Do tell if there's anything else you want/need. I need a break for a bit.



@Rune_Alchemist

Alright, so let me get this out right of the bat. Well done, very well done. You're patience in writing out your CS paid off in spades, I found myself reflecting on how well her history flowed her from the average paragon of light as all high elves are expected to be to a new personality of a more dark and twisted attitude. Her talents in multiple arts is well justified since they are less volatile without creative application, and especially the Aether magic caught my eye. It reminds me of what I based my raw magical energy on, my namesake Ugin The Spirit Dragon from Magic the Gathering who wields magic in it's purest form. This topic of magic in purest form will come up quite often in lectures, and so your character will scale quite well as the rp goes on. Her dual personality adds a bit of drama and she'll fill the role of the class #$%^& that every school rp needs desperately to stir up some good old fashion drama. She'll be an excellent antagonist, and an even better overall character if you open yourself up to change as the story progresses.

In short, I like her a lot. You used the information I gave you very well and portrayed her culture accurately. This character is approved as is, though just a small note: Magic in it's purest form is blue, restoration magic without shape is gold. Just a heads up so you don't get confused when the teachers shape Aether in the rp. lol

Very well done. You get a sticker.
@Conscripts

Alright with that, approved.
@Conscripts

Yeah it's np, I love characters they're so intriguing! So you're request to have 3 total shots at getting off a hit works fine with me since I was trying to say you have three but the third would hospitalize you. So we'll just bump that to 3 shots, 4th would hospitalize you. Try not to kill anyone with those explosions, and remember that just cause you can make explosions doesn't make you blast proof!


Alright so I read this over and honestly I'm pretty enthusiastic about this character, it's an interesting story by far. You're right though I have a few concerns about this power, since by it's very nature is incredibly exploitable. The fact that you had to say "when oxygen isn't available" when being forced into the use of air magic makes me feel a bit scared that you will never be at a true disadvantage when in a fight. This is a form of powerful particle magic if I had to bring up a preexisting example for what I'm picturing it's like a cross of dust release from naruto and roy mustang's explosion alchemy from full metal alchemist. All and all I will have to hard nerf this form of magic, only on the grounds that causing explosions at will in any capacity is just strong as all hell. So I'm gonna hit you with some nerfs and buffs real fast to preserve the scale of raw power, but give others a chance to beat you if they're creative enough to do so if that's ok.

So first the easiest and most understandable nerf, this consumes a LOT of magical energy and I mean A LOT of magical energy. I base this on the grounds of my second change I will offer you. But when I say a lot I mean you get 2 shots before I say you're so physically exhausted you can't move, and if you fire a third you will die unless treated by an expert in healing immediately. Of course that being said, you can increase this limitation through the use of items and training, or by simply applying it in new ways such as not fully unleashing the potential energy.

Second, actually kind of a buff to be honest, this magic is not rooted in oxygen specifically but rather the building blocks of all matter in the form of the scientific term potential energy. You are already using this but you isolate oxygen specifically which I find to be a bit unnecessary since every atom in the known universe has this latent energy inside of it and actually fits your description of an immense power source since Einstein, I believe, covered this topic in his theory of relativity when talking about potential energy. Basically, we only harness so much energy from an object when we use it as fuel, and if we had the ability to access the full potential energy it had we would literally be able to power new york city for an hour with a single log. Potential energy is STUPID powerful, and so making this change would keep your power in tact as designed but give you the benefit of never running out of fuel for it.

Third, I'm also giving you slight skill in fire magic. Just flat out, if you can make crap explode then I find it rediculous to suggest you can't vibrate the atoms a bit less spontaneously and just light things on fire. Granted it'll be low level fire magic buuuuuut yeah. Fire magic.

And finally, I'm just gonna say you can't use healing magic for balls, enchanting and mind magic is hard to grasp for your character. This gives him some weaknesses that he can't brute strength his way out of and makes it so he can't flat out heal himself and give him the stamina to just spam.

Is this all acceptable revisions to you, @Conscripts?

P.S. Forest of Heria, And you can name your own country I have no lore for a place like that in particular, but will designate it to be on the far east coast of the continent just for geographical purposes. Your Enemy country can be the Frismira the Nordic equivalent country of ice in the north, a jealous king from there would be a great parallel to their typically peaceful ways and also highly revered in their skills of combat. That's just a suggestion though. Up to you if you want to include a line to them.

@HokumPocus

Yep, I said I approve it lol Just be sure to wait for my first In Character post before you begin so you the world of Dreamscape can welcome you. That will be our starting point. I'm also trying to give @Zaphias a chance to get over whatever ails 'm and post his own so we can have as many as we can when I start you all in.
Oh be sure to report for your quiz. It's kinda important.
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