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Totem animals are basically slang for "I like to be called and totally identify as a fox, but don't call me a furry!".
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Glucose deficiency, myostatin inefficiency. ...bit of vomit. I feel weird in this new circumstances. 😷.

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The Arena, Before dusk in Alvion


The mid day sun beat down on the sandy plateau that was the Arena, shadows danced among the many pillars but the center remained clear. Crowds had gathered in earnest throngs, some barely seating to contain their excitement.

A thin, tall man with a white curly wig stood in the center. No longer willing to flirt in the pressence of a watchful gaze. He curtsied to the crowd, tapping his cane on the floor to get their attention.

"Gracious folk of Alvion, ladies and gentlemen from the Otherlands! Today!"

"TODAY! Is our decadely celebration of the day we drove back the fiends. The day! We established humanity's hold on these lands a hundred years ago, the day our elven, halfling and mankind's ancestors built fair Alvion! In rememberence of the sacrifice they made, in here we shall fight as they did! AND IF EVER THERE BE ANOTHER SCOURGE~~~-"

He took off his hat, placing it solemnly against his chest.

"We will have our champions!! -ON MY RIGHT, from right here in Alvion, Cicero of House Bladewalker!"

The crowd roared in cheers, some jeers, likely from fans of other contenders.

"ON MY LEFT! Travelled from the swamps of Navoreth, Rhakkar!"

It was at this point the two were to walk on the stage of battle and flourish their skills as they address the crowd, Rhakkar screamed at the top of his lungs an unholy sound then glared at Cicero, drawing axes in both hands. The spectators stood, a few cheered - he was a favourite of many a halfdemon.

Fom the highest stand overwatching the scene, a figure emerged, stood tall in regal red and white velvet. A gold laurel rested on his temple, glinting in the noon. His face though young, bore a solemn expression well beyond his years. He raised his hand, the crowds clapped for their monarch. Therian the III specifically requested his arrival to do away with as little announcement as possible, but alas he must still address his subjects in one way or another.

"For the glory of Alvion!"

He hollered simply, a smile barely restrained on his lips. Then sat back down as calmly as possible. This was the championship match he was about to watch...

"Gentlemen. ...For the glory of Alvion."

The announcer took two steps back, cutting a palm between them then turned on his heels.

The stage belonged to them now...




@Spiffy

Usually contestants would bear some formality with each other, a few exchanged words, prosed taunts to prod at the ego, even a nod would suffice. But Cicero knew that his foe had not a single bone of honour among men and it proved true rhakkar simply waited for the Bladewalker to bow - that was when he liked to suprise them. But Cicero did not bow.

He spit, looking at the crowds for a long while before a smug smile spread on his lips. Without further ado, he charged Cicero, flinging axe after axe at the knight. He had more than he had last time and it seemed someone had provided him with better quality weaponary than the last they met, these were steel axes forged by civillized men now. They flew faster, weighed less and had sharper edges.

The knight was at a disadvantage for he bore no ranged weaponary, he could stand his ground and raise his shield - weathering the barrage until the barbarian came close where he could return the advance. Or he could back to the outer edges, let the setting sun and shadows blur his form to make the axes more likely to miss their mark, loaning him some time to think of a better strategy.



@Cyrania

It was as Gwyneira was watching from the stands, hugging the satchel that held her ...friend's... items with rested hands. That she looked up and noticed that there was no woman with red hair by Therian's side, reminding her of her unfulfiled task, minor as it seemed. But the monarch looked uneasy, his eyes though filled with excitement at the bloodshed, had been dulled by the occasional squint then fingers rubbing his temple.

She could go further up in the spectator's seats to pay more attention to the ruler of Alvion as he whispered to his guards. If anything, out of curiousity. Yet if she did so, she would be giving up a front row seat - the crowd up there would clearly make it more difficult to view the match. Staying would let her watch the duel more closely.



Beautiful post! Truly.

”I have something much better than luck..I have a friend.”


Hahah! This is so cheesy that he should star in an MLP episode and yet, something I totally expect him to say somehow.

Friends made, foes gained. This is the very spirit of the arena in both your posts. I'm going to use all that for plot.

I really like how Gwyneira is quite shocked at her first viewing of an arena tournament too, learning about her own magical abilities abd their limits - showing exactly why wizards need to go through a journeymanship. Excellent!

...But, alas --- I'll post tomorrow or in two days, it is late here and I have much to write. @Cyrania@Spiffy

Really like the writing and characters so far. 👍!
I have to tell you that you'll have to wait for awhile before we decide if he's alright.
This is not an arena roleplay though. Do not feel like fighting will be all you do. It will not.
Well, I can see some things in the character you might want to address.

1) The part about "All equipment is stolen and changes randomly" do note that equipment matters, it doesn't change randomly and it will not change randomly. If this is what you have, it stays that way until you give us a reason why it's going to be lost or gained through the story. That's to be fair, as I've seen some arena-made characters that also have 'random equipment' that often pull literally anything they need out of nowhere. I'm not implying this is what you intend, still I must avoid this possibility.

2) The part about "left hook can knock anything in the world if applied properly", may want to be changed to something more detailed and give some reason why. Fair warning, there will be creatures, beings and characters that hooking cannot knock over - many of them. Reasonably.

3) "Jack of all trades", you've got to get rid of this. Explicitly saying that he's good with anything is basically saying he's good with everything, which is just not going to work as it is simply not viable and will be unfair to the other roleplayers if I allow it. It seems that he already has quite a few skills of his own in addition to that. Alternatively. List the things he is good and bad at.

4) The part about all his explosives. He is carrying 4, flintlocks, 1 blunderbuss, 1 mini crossbow, 1 axe, 1 cutlass, a number of throwing knives, a number of dynamites, a number of bombs and I pressume, enough ammunition to load them all at least once? Is that correct? We did say explosives are not exactly common in this day and age amongst other caveats. Tell us where he got all those and why he is carrying them on person? Also, how is he carrying all those around?




I know it might seem like he having alot ALOT of explosives and stuff should be entirely acceptable in the pressence of wizards who can summon fire and everything, however, magic use is strenuos - extremely so and I am keeping track of how much it has been used and trust me when I say, our local wizard is no walking bomb.

Basically, to be fair to all archetypes of characters, magic takes as much, if not more, effort than doing something by hand and more direct approaches. Which is why not everyone is a wizard and wizards cannot solve everything, heck they can't solve ALOT of things. A player may not want to explicitly show it in their posts, but I am watching and will let them know their reserves explicitly.

On the other hand, potions/explosives/items often take very little effort to use comparitively and can be spammed as long as they are in reach and have not run out - and are just as effective in their results. Limited only by their availability. Which is why I enquire about how your character has all that?

Combat is only a part of the game, a possibility amongst many. Do not worry about trying to be better than others at it right at the getgo, non-combat attributes are just as important. Example, cicero, a relatively non-op character, spouts of valor and honor with every opportunity he gets (so far), I intepret it as a niche of charisma that draws certain characters to him while repelling others and because of it. Had he chose to fight them as well when he met rakath, there will be less guards on him in civillized lands. He also managed to open up an opportunity on a vendor.

I gave him these opportunities because of his choices, roleplaying and background. Trust me when I say, all characters are equal when they start off. Characters too good in something will compensate in other areas, characters who have flaws or lacks will have more opportunities than characters who do not.

@Sol Grim
The fight and interactions is well written, nice job you two!

Like I said before, how you interacted will make some choices for you. I'll message you both some things before I get on with my post.

I just messaged you boons but I'll have to wait a bit till I can message you the rest.

@Spiffy @Cyrania
Message us a very brief outline if your concept (Like in gywneira's case, elven prodigy trying to attain her journeyman title and learn more about magic or cicero, honor oathed knight trying to live life to his and his fathr's ideals of valor. Like that), a seafarer sounds like it would add to the variety of the cast. But be warned, the seas are just as perilous as these lands if not more!

Better yet, if your character has a profile ready, post it here for us to see.
@Sol Grim

I've been working thinking how I can make this into something good, into an actual chooseuownadventure thing that goes beyond "Tournament done! Go home, get rich/nothing!". It's been going well, I have re-read all our posts over a few times and an idea is taking shape.

I have a route map ready so when you two are after the parts we've planned, things will really be up to the choices you both (and any other player who might join) make.

But I have a buffer in case things go beyond what I really expected, that is to simply make things up as I go.

College huh? Mmm sounds like a busy time, gotta find just the right place to stay or the next few years will be less than amusing. I stayed above a well known crack(?) smoking spot during my college years, how many times I had to jam the gates(and their vehicles) so those little kids go somewhere else to get high. XD. ...drunk/high ppl are always a nuisance. @Spiffy
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The Arena's Halls, Alvion






It is at this time, the toll of the bell signalling noon rang throughout Hightown and through the halls of the coliseum. The time for the matches drew close...


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