@bbyangeliike: I'm sorry to hear that.
I feel that I should reiterate this, since without meaning to be rude, I can't help but feel some people missed this in the OP. While I'm fine with serious scenes or plots, the RP's intended to be light-hearted and comedic (as Vita said, think more character and slapstick based than over-the-top ridiculousness) for the most part.
@Descartes: To be honest, this isn't the right sort of thing for the "hundreds of babies, only a few survive" trait of some fish to be applied to mermaids (not that they have the predators required for it anyway). Also, not that it really matters, but these are sapient humanoids, even if that particular bit's a fish trait, child protective services would probably step in before hundreds of children die from their parents being unable to raise them.
@IncredibleBee: While there's nothing "wrong" with this character, I don't know how well he'll fit with the intended tone of the RP.
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Looks good to me. Accepted.
@Liriia, Vita, Rune_Alchemist & Diggerton: Accepted!
@bbyangellike: I might wait and see how your second character looks before saying anything about Ayako, since (if I'm reading this correctly) there's some interaction between them.
@Gareth: I've got some stuff I need to sort out today, but I'll try to get the IC up when that's done. For now, here's the OOC.
Sorry if I missed anyone.
@bbyangellike: I might wait and see how your second character looks before saying anything about Ayako, since (if I'm reading this correctly) there's some interaction between them.
@Gareth: I've got some stuff I need to sort out today, but I'll try to get the IC up when that's done. For now, here's the OOC.
Sorry if I missed anyone.
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I'll probably add some more information about certain things here if I remember to, so yeah...In the meantime, have an OOC, I guess.
Accepted Characters:
Bryan Gallager
Hazel Hosner
Akira Miyama
Kuro
Mihama Yukiko
Yuzuki
Kai
???
Fubuki Eiki
Akari
I'll probably add some more information about certain things here if I remember to, so yeah...In the meantime, have an OOC, I guess.
Accepted Characters:
Bryan Gallager
Hazel Hosner
Akira Miyama
Kuro
Mihama Yukiko
Yuzuki
Kai
???
Fubuki Eiki
Akari
@VitaVitaAR: Accepted. Also, seconding the stuff re: Liriia's profile. ^^;
@Zombehs: Alright, thanks.
@Zombehs: Alright, thanks.
@Zombehs: Having thought about it a bit, I was wondering if Kuro's abilities could maybe be toned down a little. I'm fine with him being stronger/faster/tougher than a human, maybe even to the extent where he's capable of clearing some smaller monster dens on his own, but for the most part, it should take a group to clear one out.
@Dharc: He looks good for the most part, there are a couple of things I found a little odd though. Firstly, the name. I'm guessing he's not from Himoto, but...even still, I find it a little strange that his name's a kind of fairy, especially given that they probably exist in the setting. The second thing is the appearance. I'm not going to say you need to change it or anything, I just think I should point out that he's going to look pretty out of place walking around like that.
@Rune_Alchemist: Looking at your character's backstory, a couple of things stand out to me as potential issues. Firstly, it wouldn't exactly matter if the elder had missed a few when he cleared that den out, since the monsters keep coming back regardless. By the same token, her personal goal's...kind of impossible. And secondly, while some dens might be able to be handled by one decently experienced hunter, for the most part, it should take a group to clear one out.
@Diggerton: Ability-wise the changes look fine, although I feel I should mention that if the Kusanagi's meant to be the same one from the Imperial regalia, then it's not actually a katana.
@Dharc: He looks good for the most part, there are a couple of things I found a little odd though. Firstly, the name. I'm guessing he's not from Himoto, but...even still, I find it a little strange that his name's a kind of fairy, especially given that they probably exist in the setting. The second thing is the appearance. I'm not going to say you need to change it or anything, I just think I should point out that he's going to look pretty out of place walking around like that.
@Rune_Alchemist: Looking at your character's backstory, a couple of things stand out to me as potential issues. Firstly, it wouldn't exactly matter if the elder had missed a few when he cleared that den out, since the monsters keep coming back regardless. By the same token, her personal goal's...kind of impossible. And secondly, while some dens might be able to be handled by one decently experienced hunter, for the most part, it should take a group to clear one out.
@Diggerton: Ability-wise the changes look fine, although I feel I should mention that if the Kusanagi's meant to be the same one from the Imperial regalia, then it's not actually a katana.
Kuro and Yukiko are accepted!
@Diggerton: Accepted.
Name: Akira Miyama
Race: Human
Age: 8, physically at least.
Appearance: I'd strongly recommend against touching the bunny.
Personality: Akira is generally a good deal more polite and mature than one might expect from someone of her apparent age. She is also far more knowledgeable, both about magic and the world in general, than a child should be, though she tries to avoid letting too much of this show to most people as it just gives more fuel to the nutjobs saying she's secretly some super-powerful mage that disappeared a few years ago. Akira has something of a weakness for sweets and plushies, acting far more like someone might expect a child to when they're involved. This makes ice cream or a new teddy bear effective ways of convincing her to do something.
Skills/Abilities: Akira is a powerful mage, capable of casting spells which should be far beyond an 8 year-old's ability. She is capable of creating tsunamis, explosions that could level a city block or the "Rays of Judgment", several thin columns of light from the sky which gradually expand, burning anything they touch. Of course, while she can use these, her body doesn't handle the strain very well and she will pass out soon after. Not to mention the fact that very few threats call for that kind of firepower. Generally, she sticks to more basic spells such as fireballs, spears of ice, a weak self-healing spell (the only one she knows, as healing was never her forte) and magical barriers.
Aside from her magic, Akira is about as strong and tough as one would expect an eight year-old to be.
Equipment: She's never seen without a stuffed animal of some kind.
Brief Backstory: Some time ago, there was a powerful mage with enough power to clear out dens full of powerful monsters with a single spell, without even entering them. However, two years ago, this mage vanished during a job. A short time after this, Akira turned up in Shinkawa and rented a small apartment with someone claiming to be her older sibling. No one thought much of this until it became clear that the child knew far more about magic than someone her age should.
Soon after, rumours began circulating that the disappeared mage and Akira were the same person. The exact logic behind this varied from person to person; a hunter jealous of the mage's success cursed her, she fell into the mythical fountain of youth, a strange monster did it, she was actually a small child piloting a mecha that looked like an adult all along or any number of other outlandish theories. Akira finds some of the rumours amusing enough that she's unlikely to ever actually clarify if there's any truth behind them. If she's asked, she'll generally just look at the person with a confused expression on her face until they drop it.
Name: Akira Miyama
Race: Human
Age: 8, physically at least.
Appearance: I'd strongly recommend against touching the bunny.
Personality: Akira is generally a good deal more polite and mature than one might expect from someone of her apparent age. She is also far more knowledgeable, both about magic and the world in general, than a child should be, though she tries to avoid letting too much of this show to most people as it just gives more fuel to the nutjobs saying she's secretly some super-powerful mage that disappeared a few years ago. Akira has something of a weakness for sweets and plushies, acting far more like someone might expect a child to when they're involved. This makes ice cream or a new teddy bear effective ways of convincing her to do something.
Skills/Abilities: Akira is a powerful mage, capable of casting spells which should be far beyond an 8 year-old's ability. She is capable of creating tsunamis, explosions that could level a city block or the "Rays of Judgment", several thin columns of light from the sky which gradually expand, burning anything they touch. Of course, while she can use these, her body doesn't handle the strain very well and she will pass out soon after. Not to mention the fact that very few threats call for that kind of firepower. Generally, she sticks to more basic spells such as fireballs, spears of ice, a weak self-healing spell (the only one she knows, as healing was never her forte) and magical barriers.
Aside from her magic, Akira is about as strong and tough as one would expect an eight year-old to be.
Equipment: She's never seen without a stuffed animal of some kind.
Brief Backstory: Some time ago, there was a powerful mage with enough power to clear out dens full of powerful monsters with a single spell, without even entering them. However, two years ago, this mage vanished during a job. A short time after this, Akira turned up in Shinkawa and rented a small apartment with someone claiming to be her older sibling. No one thought much of this until it became clear that the child knew far more about magic than someone her age should.
Soon after, rumours began circulating that the disappeared mage and Akira were the same person. The exact logic behind this varied from person to person; a hunter jealous of the mage's success cursed her, she fell into the mythical fountain of youth, a strange monster did it, she was actually a small child piloting a mecha that looked like an adult all along or any number of other outlandish theories. Akira finds some of the rumours amusing enough that she's unlikely to ever actually clarify if there's any truth behind them. If she's asked, she'll generally just look at the person with a confused expression on her face until they drop it.
Thanks for that. With that done, he's accepted.
I'm looking forward to seeing what people come up with.
@Diggerton: Basically, yeah. I know I didn't mention a specific time, but I'd say it's roughly 2014 in the setting.
@Gareth: He looks good for the most part, although there are a couple of things that seem a little odd. Specifically the hunting (unless that's just meant to be for fun, I suppose) and horse drawn wagon, since supermarkets and cars exist in the setting, making those seem a little...antiquated.
@Diggerton: Basically, yeah. I know I didn't mention a specific time, but I'd say it's roughly 2014 in the setting.
@Gareth: He looks good for the most part, although there are a couple of things that seem a little odd. Specifically the hunting (unless that's just meant to be for fun, I suppose) and horse drawn wagon, since supermarkets and cars exist in the setting, making those seem a little...antiquated.
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