Just checking in, How are things going?
Fine. Just waiting on the next posts.
Just checking in, How are things going?
<Snipped quote by Fetzen>
<Snipped quote by Roman>
If you'd like to work with me to rebuild him, PM me. If you'd like to pitch a new character that we can work on from the ground up, PM me. If you want to tell me to shove it up my ass, tell me to shove it up my ass. I understand you're frustrated, but please don't be passive aggressive.
<Snipped quote by Liseran Thistle>
'Y'all' is a very regional slang term in reality and langauges across different realms doesn't develop in the same way. I would avoid modern slang and as much real-life regional lingo as possible. You may have a southern Louisiana accent, but Lowe is not from Southern Louisiana, nor does such a region exist in Vassidia.
On a seperate note, if we're having large portions of back-and-forth dialogue in the IC, a Collab is preferable, to make the scene more organic and to lessen 'clutter', which isn't the right word. Essentially, there's no need to have 3 posts from 2 people with a paragraph and a half of dialogue in each of them and that's it, rather than 1 post worked out between 2 people that contain the dialogue in its entirety.
minister florentus makes sure to keep the abuse hidden under raps, because if people knew he wouldn't be able to keep Lowe. the only reason he wants to keep Lowe around is to train him to take his spot as the churches librarian. he hates his job, because it's low ranking in the church, and he would like to be higher up like Minister Plike is.
@Tangletail The mask is why the wolf got to be beautiful and not the woman.
@TangletailOh that? Kassy's just really bad with people. She's never met someone weirder than she is - even at the Academy they're all the same level of nerd.
<Snipped quote by Tangletail>
yeah that could be a little messy if Lowe's sisters are being torn apart like a dog's ragdoll.
You're good for Kassy. Aside from a massive crush on her Master, she doesn't have any loved ones.
<Snipped quote by Tangletail>
yeah that could be a little messy if Lowe's sisters are being torn apart like a dog's ragdoll.