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Persona: Through the Looking Glass

Whether Goat is in or not, either way...

Time's Up.

The Sign-ups are now Closed and by the time all of you probably reads this, the IC will be up and the RP shall begin.

Anybody who is still interested in joining, will now be on stand-by, and won't be in the RP until a spot is in need of a replacement.

@Jake: Normally, like I told Silvir, I can't accept incomplete Profiles, however, since yours is close to completion, and it may take some time anyways before we get to awakening everyone's personas, (The White Rabbit can only take out so many Pocketwatches and weapons at a time... So some of you might not actually be fighting until later on.) you still have some time to complete it. Ergo, because of this, your twins are in. With that said. ...Let the games begin!

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Goat God said
Name: Insane Enasni
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Arcana: The Foolish Killer
Power: Creating illusions
Weapons: Tea Cup
Personality: TBR
Theme song: Sexy Back

...Where do I begin?

I'll start off by saying that this is probably partially my fault. I don't usually rush people for this very reason, but I had to this time because of how late you came in and the deadline I made for this.

With that said, however, Based on first impressions, I can tell you came here for to join for the Wonderland aspects of this RP. ...Unfortunately, only the environments and characters are of Wonderland. It's not the same story, and aspects in which it runs is of Persona, not Wonderland, and I can tell you're not exactly familiar with that series. That's alright as it is an underrated series, but all the same...

So you have two choices. ...You can either stay, and let me teach you the aspect of Persona. ...Or you can go. If you choose to stay, then allow me to criticize what exactly is wrong with your CS. If you choose to go, then skip everything below this.

1. The Appearance. I already told you that there's already a Mad Hatter. You can't have another like him, not even looking like him. Everyone on that list on the first page is unavailable, as they're characters use by other people. However, any wonderland characters that AREN'T of this list (Save for the King of Spades.) ARE available for use.

2. The Arcana: The Foolish Killer is not an Arcana, at all. If it is, it's of a different deck then the one we're using. Thank you, Omnial for giving him that list. And remember, Goat, The Fool, The Jester, The Hunger/Lust, and The World/Universe, are ALL forbidden and unavailable. Every other arcana feel free to use.

3. Illusions, But to what extent? How far can it go, how good is the quality, what are the drawbacks. A power like that needs to be detailed, otherwise it's a worry that it could be god-modded.

4. In Need of a Persona. You need a Persona that befits the character, it HAS to be a mythological entity that already exists, and can't be of your own creation. It does also have to fit with the Arcana you choose.

That's about all I have an actual problem with.

Wait, one more thing, There has to be some bit of effort and detail into the profile as a whole. This is the Casual Section, There has to be SOME effort put into this stuff at least. ...Not really something I have a problem with, per se, but something I feel should be addressed since, again, this is a Casual level RP.

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Ok then. I don't see anything particularly bad either so...

Ken is in.

Also Sen, Just so you know, Bres' image is Broken.

Oh, and P.S.S. ...Thanks to P2, it's arguable if whether or not P1's events existed in this timeline anyways. So because of that, I will ignore it.

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Goat God said
am I allowed to be a shadow? I feel like being something related to the mad hatter.

Yes you can be a Shadow, But you can't be any of the ones already on the list, and I don't think Omni (My Partner, Petulant) will allow you to be closely related to the Mad Hatter.

Besides, according to Omni, the Mad Hatter won't exactly be a central character, for most of the time after his introduction and first fight, he'll spend time being injured for most of the story.

But yes, you CAN make a Shadow, and one with a Persona at that. (It's just as mandatory for these shadows as it is for the humans.)

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Ok then. I don't like rushing but you best hurry, I'll be starting up the IC and closing down the sign-ups later tonight.

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Goat God said
Claiming a spot for MAD HATTER

None of the Shadows are Claimable, they're characters to other people. Specifically My partner and myself. Sorry.

Speaking of which: @Cronic: Pretty good, but you still need to give him a Persona.

@ Silvir: For now that'll do. You're in.

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TheRpgGamer said
Jest is it okay if two person have the same arcana?I don't know much about Persona only the anime but I know Shin Megami Tensei games like the SMT from SNES,Devil Survivor 1 and 2.

Normally, at least in the later two games, it would always be one-person-per-Arcana. The reason for it in the latter half at least was because of the Social Link system. Now, however, there is no Calendar system and no Social Link system. So there's no reason to keep that restriction.

In other words: Yes, it is alright. I already placed that fact in the rules.

@Sen: Omni and I have decided. You have one of the best CSes by far, but if we accepted Libera, it wouldn't exactly be fair to everyone else. Puts us in a state of flux...

So, we're counting on your drawing to be as good as the one you showed for the actual guy's image. If it's an excellent drawing, you're in, if not, you have to change your persona to an actual Entity of Mythology or legend.

@mopsock: Good work, He's in.

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Excellent, She's in Mina.

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@Sen: Bravo. A persona fan indeed. You even went the extra mile. I'm actually quite impressed.

The Problem, however, is indeed the fact that Libera is made-up. And we already one person try that already. It's kind of a rule, I think, that they have to be Historical/Mythological figures.

...However, since you made such an effort. I'll talk with my partner on this and see what he thinks we should do.

@RPG Gamer: Eh, I'll buy it. XD

@mopsock: I'm waiting for about two or three more people, who has promised to get things done tomorrow anyways. That said, We are getting quite large in both character roster and players. ...So I'm changing plans and making the deadline tomorrow. Then I'm closing down the sign-ups and beginning the IC.

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Hmm...Ok, that seems good enough.

Kouichi is in.

Also, One question out of curiosity: ...What's a clearly Japanese Teen doing in London, England?