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LillyDove said
we could team teach them. Good Jounin Bad Jounin style.


I'd love to do that (kakashi style)
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Sweet, this will be some serious Fun. Mine is a Genjutsu specialist. Lol
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Prince
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Excessively strong Chuunin are called Special Jounin. lol
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Prince said
Excessively strong Chuunin are called Special Jounin. lol


Shhh, lol! We're going to team teach one squad, we got this.

Also, I edited the PM I sent to you last.
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Name: Okani Kazomi
Age & Gender: 24, Female
Alliance: Konoha
Rank: Jounin
Clan: Kazomi
Kekkei Genkai: None
Traits: The Kazomi clan is known for how fierce and relentless attack style, preferring to ware their opponent down with small attacks before dealing the final blow. Most of their clan have green or red eyes with redish color hair or black hair, fair skin.

Appearance: Okani's hair grew out from just being to shoulders now to her mid back where she normally keeps it pulled back in a pony tail and doesn't really wear it down that often. Although her picture doesn't show her Rose hair tie nor her Rose tight necklace. With her fair skin and pale amber colored eyes make her look quite different than most students at the academy. She likes to wear loose clothes that don't restrict her movement, usually cargo pants and a tank top of sorts.


History: Okani is the daughter of poor farmer who had no interest going into any war, he raised his six children along with his wife in Konoha even through the hard times, encouraging them to be the best and to never give up their dreams. She watched as her brothers took his words to heart and became ninja, they struggled to survive in the hard times with all the death, but they were really head strong and kept going. Okani herself was very much in the middle, afraid of being the next to die and not wanting to be a disappointment to anyone.

Her brothers taught her everything they knew, even though Ninjutsu was being eradicated but they were encouraging to her as she grew, her Ninjutsu was weak but as she stumbled upon Genjutsu, she found that her strength had been renewed. Although her brothers kept training her in ninjutsu or the very few techniques that they, they also set out to help her with Genjutsu. One day her oldest brothers set off to join the resistance and help others through the hard times, a month later only one of them came back with news of the other being dead. It sent her family into shock, her even more so as she ran away from home in the middle of a Storm.

Her mother eventually found her, in tears hiding under a tree and decided to stay with her until she was alright. Okani told her mother that it was all her fault, they would never have left if she didn't take to Genjutsu and her mother promptly told her that in order to honor his sacrifice that she would need to become a Genjutsu master in Konoha. However her confidence had been dashed and she wasn't sure that she could do that, but her mother insisted.

Em rolling in the Academy and trying hard to measure up, failing some of the times as she wasn't a born fighter, being one who preferred to keep to the side lines. She graduated when she was 10 being the top Genjutsu user in her class, figuring out that if she needed to keep in the side lines than her own Jutsu's were needed, she set to work on developing them.

In the next coming years, she perfected her three Rose Jutsu's and went into the finals of the Chuunin exam, despite her hard work, she became a Chuunin the next year and it took her five years to become a Genjutsu master at Joinin Level.

Personality: Okani who used to be the outsider more often than not was a quiet if not reserved girl, she didn't like the idea of fighting or shedding blood. But she was head strong as well in certain situations, being skeptic about everything and often getting caught in the small details of which she would forget about the bigger picture. In her mind, everything happens for a reason and everything cannot be out of order, she has to have order. Preferring things nice and neat with a valid reason to the way it is, also with a slight tendency to get discouraged.

Okani is one who understands others more than she understands herself, so she easily encourages people to try their best while wishing she could take her own advice. Most people who know her see her as a quiet girl and she is easily accepted that way but inside she has a burning passion to make her family proud, even if it kills her.

Combat Style: Much like others in her clan, Okani prefers to go head to head with her enemy with her ninjutsu, wearing her opponent down with her Genjutsu while concealed in smoke. Her Genjutsu takes serious amount of chakra to maintain so staying behind the scenes so to speak is essential to keeping it up.
Nature Release: Primarily Wind Release

Jutsu:





Misc: Those who become her students better be ready for her aggressive training and constant challenges. Although she is known for kindness to those who others doubt and is fiercely loyal to her comrades, putting her life on the line to protect her team. She will be one to encourage those who need it and lecture those who whine.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Marrow
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Argh, this is hard, i could really use some help
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by LillyDove
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With what?
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Marrow
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With making my CS's, especially these parts:

Kekkei Genkai: does byakugan count as kekkei genkai?
Combat Style: just taijutsu, ninjutsu or genjutsu?
Nature Release: Strenghts and weaknesses?
Jutsu List: S-A-B-C-D-E-F rank, and how many are there, also, can we make up our own?
Weaponry: other can kunai, shuriken and exploding tags or swords?
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by LillyDove
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Yes, the Hyuuga clan has the Byakugan, so your character would have to be a member of the Hyuuga clan.

Combat style is more like how do they fight, do they run straight at their opponent? Long range attacker or short range attacker?

Nature releases are Fire, Water, Wind, Earth and Lifhtning. Some of them are strictly used with special clans. Fire is weak to water, Lightening is weak to Earth, Earth is week to Water. I'm not sure about Wind.

S-Rank is like top knotch but takes a lot of chakra. A-Rank is not as good as S-rank but takes less chakra and B-Rank is pretty good and takes less chakra than both S and A rank. Pretty much Jounin and Chuunin have these ranks for Jutsu.

Anything below those ranks like C, D, E and F ranks are pretty much week and anyone can do, Genin Level Jutsu.

Prince has a form to make your own Jutsu, he said at most six Jutsu unless you have special permission.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Marrow
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standard jutsu is :
Bunshin no jutsu (clone)
and transformation right?
all academy students can do that.

kage bunshin no jutsu is A-rank if im not mistaken...

but is Byakugan a Kekkei Genkai jutsu or just a bloodline special?

*opening the wikia and starts writing*

oh right, say that ill make the son of Kakashi, will he be called Hatake or Kakashi?
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Byakugan is a kekkei genkei.

He can have whatever ninja sounding name with Hatake as a last name.
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I'm going to make a Inuzuka Genin, any objections?
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LillyDove, make some links for those canon jutsu. I legit do not want to have to look them up every time I want to make a reference.

To anyone else, I'm not terribly concerned about the time you take inc reating a CS; quality is fantastic. But to those with approved characters, this RP is greelit. Get at it!
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Other than needing the links, she is good to go?

I dislike links because they dislike me :P
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LillyDove, I'm going to have to review your entire History later. No, she is not presently approved. I've had a long day at college, and your CS jumps around so randomly in places that I literally cannot comprehend it.

Secondly, I'm not letting you have the Blade of Winds justu as well as Air Cutter. That's OP as Hell to give a genjutsu specialist close-range combat abilities of such magnitude, and one of them was literally designed for canon swords.
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Umm alright. I followed your format for the CS and I will remove the Blade of Winds. Hope your day gets better.

Her history can be confusing, to sum it all up: She was born in Amegakure, moved to Konoha then moved back to Amegakure, her oldest brother was the Ame-kage, they moved back to Konoha after Hidden Rain fell.
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Alright, I made a post. I don't know if it's up to your standards, Prince. So let me know.
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Still accepting?
If so, I think I'll post up a character.
I'd like to be teams with someone though and would love to work the bios with each other, if possible?
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LillyDove said Her history can be confusing, to sum it all up: She was born in Amegakure, moved to Konoha then moved back to Amegakure, her oldest brother was the Ame-kage, they moved back to Konoha after Hidden Rain fell.


No one is going to be directly related to people of the past like the Amekage. You may want to revamp that history to make it just a wee bit more plausible.

Yes. We're still accepting.
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You can't have Wind Cutter, either. You don't have the weapon requirements to use it and it doesn't even exist in this continuum. I feel like I'm being a dick, but it seems as if you put no forethought into this.
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