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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by ModernMedicinal
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I think i will also edit some of my stats to reflect my rank, wasn't quite as sure what would be appropriate yet, but to be number 3 i may need to measure up a bit more with the rest of you. If thats okay, I'm just going to edit my original post. If theres any dispute just let me know Strawberry.
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If you're still standing by your rank of 3 then those new stats are fine by me Mod...Dash still is rank three, no?

Also I want to clarify to everyone, that as our character proceed through the roleplay, if you feel that they've made significant development in a skill and want to change then just give me a heads up before you do so I can okay it.
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I have a few NPCs I want to include on a personal story arc.

Noodle's NPCs [+]
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by ModernMedicinal
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Yes Strawberry, staying rank three was my intention in changing my stats a bit. Thanks :)
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@Yandere
NPC's added!

@Mod
I edited Dash on the front page to accurately show his new stats :)

@Everyone who's CS's need to be completed
I know a lot of people have just started back college and I don't want to rush anyone, but I would really like the rp to start up so I would really appreciate if you guys could get your histories up by the weekend >.<

@Everyone in General
This should go without saying, but, while I will rp the series NPCs, NPC's created by you guys are your legal (literally legal) property and should be rp'ed by no one other than you, unless you say otherwise. I just want to make this crystal clear, as an rp I am/was participating in on another website just had a huge stumble due to plagiarism and I felt it's important to underline this given the fact that we are using NPCs.
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I'll have it up by the weekend, no worries. I got overwhelmed at work last night and never got a chance to do any writing! Tonight seems slow so I should be square by the morning.

EDIT: All done! Let me know if any revisions need made.
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Ugh~ let's get stared already~!
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by FoxFireOfDawn
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I DID IT. FINALLY. *collpases onto a bed*....that took a lot of thinking to do ;_;
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@Fox
Accepted! But I'm curious. Is her short term the actual disorder, or she's just a little quirky?

@Dawn
....I really don't want to sound rude about this Dawn and I hope I don't, but their are revisions to be made. There are far too many contradictions to your character. You're going to have tone something down, because he is wayyyy out of the ballpark. I mean, he took out two soldiers with with a disabled arm, and you've hailed him as the possible best of the best with a disability...what I'm try to say is for his age and the fact that he has a significant disability he's just too much of a package. I need you to nerf something down or edit it some, or else I won't be able to accept him.

@Everyone
I want to wait for Bird, but if she hasn't posted by Friday, I'll get a post out.

@Bird
Don't worry though, we won't leave you behind ^.^
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The short-term memory is the actual disorder. Hope that cured your curiousness ^_^
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by The Dawn Sage
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Oh, my mistake. I thought we were intentionally playing the bad-ass characters. I can tone him down.

Edit: Done, easy fix. I can give him use of both arms but I wanted to try and have to work around a character that was injured. I don't think that really contributes to him being stronger, quite the opposite? I suppose I'll leave that up to you.
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I think one arm contributes to him being a stronger person, but would contribute better if we the rpers could see it happening. For instance the way you've written his CS (from an outside perspective) makes him sound like he developed the skills instantaneously. He takes out two men with one arm and has been rumored to have never been hit in training. Doesn't sound like the struggle a disabled character would go through to make himself better at all. Even when you add his faults it still sounds like his life was a piece of cake. The simplest solution IMO would be to edit those parts so we can feel the struggle of the character begin right from the CS. I think he thereafter could go on to work his way up to rank four.

EDIT: Ive just read what I think is your edited post which pretty much conforms exactly with what I am saying. I hope it hasnt tampered with your plans for him too much. Accepted!
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No biggie. It was a super easy edit, I had cut the sentences perfectly to just erase a few sections and change a couple words. Took maybe 5 minutes. ^^
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@Dawn
Ah that's good >.<

@Everyone
I should start the roleplay today. I think Bird has enough time to add her character history and easily join us up. But I don't want to prolong it starting any longer.
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Yay! Looking forward to it. 8D
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Strawberry425
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Sorry guys, I wasn't feeling so great yesterday. I should have a post up by around 8 EST time today.
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Strawberry425 said
Sorry guys, I wasn't feeling so great yesterday. I should have a post up by around 8 EST time today.


It's okay. :3 And I'll be waiting patiently~
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Okay, everyone, gotta apologize again. This post may seem a little abrupt, but I wanted to start everything up today. Hopefully it doesn't sound too bad.
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Sorry bout that, guys. It's kinda brief and boring, but I finished up my CS.
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Accepted! Though im on my phone presently so i wont be able to add him to the front page till tomorrow.
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