Hey Demon, thanks for the submission. There are a few grammatical errors with it. In my opinion, sarxasm is one of the weaker emotions, your character won't have much dynamics until he breaks and shows true feeling.
For your writing sample, it's not quite what I was looking for. Having everything in one big block doesn't read as easy as spaced paragraphs. Haha, I'm like a bickering critic, sorry. Unfortunately I don't think this RP is the best match for you. I'll let you know if we have something ready later, but right now I can't accept your CS.
Hi Xiga, lovely CS. You've created an interesting charrie. Gold isn't quite natural, but I don't mind. Your personality made me chuckle. XD I'll add it to the list soon.
For your writing sample, it's not quite what I was looking for. Having everything in one big block doesn't read as easy as spaced paragraphs. Haha, I'm like a bickering critic, sorry. Unfortunately I don't think this RP is the best match for you. I'll let you know if we have something ready later, but right now I can't accept your CS.
Xiga said
Name: [[n/a]]
Gender: Female
Age: Young adult
--Notable features: Her golden eyes, that seem to almost pierce through another person when looked at. Her hair is worn as dreadlocks and her style is.. very earthly and she likes face paintings and decorating her dreads with feathers and cloth.
Personality: Stubborn, gruff, not at all lady like. She comes off as threatening and kind of mean, however she's really just a softy once a person gets to know her. She is loyal to those she trusts but most often sly and sneaky in her ways.
Hi Xiga, lovely CS. You've created an interesting charrie. Gold isn't quite natural, but I don't mind. Your personality made me chuckle. XD I'll add it to the list soon.
