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What do you need me to fix?
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Hand to hand combat
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Shadow Welding: She has the power to control the shadows around her, have them be her eyes and ears or use them in battle. IT takes great focus and energy and she has been known to over do it in the field. One of her wel known moves is the PAck Call. She foams the shaodws aroudn her into wolf likfe creatures and they act on her will. She is still getting the hang of her power and they sometimes over whelm her.


This is the most problematic section (I will slide over the small mistakes that can be ignored) due to being highly underpowered for someone sent from JCU on a joint mission of this seriousness.

Hand to hand combat - You are not referring to what kind of hand to hand combat are you talking about? Box? Some Japanese martial art? Some specific type of hand to hand combat? It is not a big issue but such details give a feel of reality to characters.

Stealth - Now are you talking about just sneaking around or an actual technique using magic or energy?

Weapons - I guess that you mean Weapons Handling. Well there are over a few thousands of martial arts and techniques for using weapons, and some weapons even have a few hundreds just by themselves. Such details are not that important but at least list all the skills for wielding weapons that she has.

Shadow Wielding - Also known as Skotomancy (Shadow Maipulation) is a magically-based technique which can be used in many ways and can be inborn or learned. You should probably increase her level of control and allow here to transport nonliving things trough two connected shadows, create attacks with them or use them to protect herself from damage.

You should also probably add some Ki-manipulation skills like physical buffs, long range Ki-strikes... (Ki is a sub-type of magic which is associated with the physical and can be even learned by those which undergone hard physical training) and the abilities usually associated with Ninja - creating Bunshin (apparent bodies created by moving fast enough) and Kage-Bunshin (creating actual bodies using Ki).

You might also want to add some weapons to your equipment list or replace their names - use Shuriken instead of throwing stars - this is the accurate term for all smaller thrown weapons used by Ninja (including throwing knifes and stars). Kusarigama (Chained Sickle) a Sickle attached to a chain were popular Ninja weapon to. In the IDS most of weapons are made out of Ancient Metalum (a extremely powerful metal which is hard to replicate and usually mined because of that) infused with magic and energy to form Power Metalum and added with magical enchantments, or in the case of JCU, divine (granted by Kami) blessing. Ranged weapons, especially lighter ones, are also commonly used

As for the tools of the IDS Ninja there should be mentioned that smoke bombs are mostly replaced by though-activated smoke dispensers, as well as most other gas bombs that they once used. Instead of fire bombs advanced small homing missiles are used. EMP (technology-busting) bombs are also used. All poisons have been replaced by powerful destructive nanobots due to poison being useless against nanobots. Some magical potions are also used, if they are proven not to be defeated by nanobots. Finely grinned high-radiation powder of many kinds is also used. Passive detection equipment is also used to bolster the trained abilities of a Ninja to detect presences. I cloud go on, but the usual what Ninja's do is to adapt to the situation and take what is the most likely equipment they will need.

Trough not bad in IRS Ninja in IDS are primary spies, agents and assassin (just like they were in real life) trough some specialize in direct combat more then stealth.

Well feel free to go a little higher and more into detail with your character's ability and description if nothing else to make this more enjoyable and interesting to the both of us.
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Whoa, you really don't miss a beat do you. Alright I try my best
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Shinosaki Yakov, Male, 5062 Earth Years, 25 Chosen Appearance Age.
Human, Quarter-Russian, Quarter-Japanese, Half-Croatian
Major, Special Action and Reaction, Earth Defense Forces


And here is my CS. Now I wait for the finalization of your character and we can begin.
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I edited my cs last night, hopefully its enough
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Well ... it cloud use some work but what the heck ... if you want you can do it during the few next days, you know add some details, polish it up and so on; I will say when our characters are not to subject to change anymore when the time comes OK?

So I will probably make the first IC post sometime in the next 24 hours. We shall begin, with many time skips included, from the boarding of CL "Istria" with some time for our pair to interact now that on the smaller starship they are forced to share the same small number of closely located rooms for Marines (for planetary assault operations) as well as the same food, exercise, shooting and other larger facilities since a CL would rarely have more then two of each larger facilities due to the vessel's limited size.
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Alright sounds good.
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The IC is up. Oh and I hope that we both have fun! (Also don't forget to polish the CS!)
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CS is all ready to go I think. And I'll post as soon as I can;
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OK will be on for the next hour or so. I will still leave the characters open for editing if any of us gets the wish to add more details and "meat" to their character.
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Sounds good
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Due to many reason, the main being the general lack of will from my side to commit to the rebuild Guild after all my multiple player RPs died I will be decreasing my activity on the Guild. Sorry but I only have this and another in which I am participating and even that one is down to me, the GM and one friend. Even if I stay I will probably be to depressed by what the Guildfall did to this once rich community for roleplaying and thous not really all that hyped up for posting. If you still won't mind a post each 1-2 week then I cloud go on with this RP.
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I can do whatever you want me to do to help get your juices back.
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