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MegaraFoxfire said
Hand to hand combat
Stelth
Weapons
Shadow Welding: She has the power to control the shadows around her, have them be her eyes and ears or use them in battle. IT takes great focus and energy and she has been known to over do it in the field. One of her wel known moves is the PAck Call. She foams the shaodws aroudn her into wolf likfe creatures and they act on her will. She is still getting the hang of her power and they sometimes over whelm her.
This is the most problematic section (I will slide over the small mistakes that can be ignored) due to being highly underpowered for someone sent from JCU on a joint mission of this seriousness.
Hand to hand combat - You are not referring to what kind of hand to hand combat are you talking about? Box? Some Japanese martial art? Some specific type of hand to hand combat? It is not a big issue but such details give a feel of reality to characters.
Stealth - Now are you talking about just sneaking around or an actual technique using magic or energy?
Weapons - I guess that you mean Weapons Handling. Well there are over a few thousands of martial arts and techniques for using weapons, and some weapons even have a few hundreds just by themselves. Such details are not that important but at least list all the skills for wielding weapons that she has.
Shadow Wielding - Also known as Skotomancy (Shadow Maipulation) is a magically-based technique which can be used in many ways and can be inborn or learned. You should probably increase her level of control and allow here to transport nonliving things trough two connected shadows, create attacks with them or use them to protect herself from damage.
You should also probably add some Ki-manipulation skills like physical buffs, long range Ki-strikes... (Ki is a sub-type of magic which is associated with the physical and can be even learned by those which undergone hard physical training) and the abilities usually associated with Ninja - creating Bunshin (apparent bodies created by moving fast enough) and Kage-Bunshin (creating actual bodies using Ki).
You might also want to add some weapons to your equipment list or replace their names - use Shuriken instead of throwing stars - this is the accurate term for all smaller thrown weapons used by Ninja (including throwing knifes and stars). Kusarigama (Chained Sickle) a Sickle attached to a chain were popular Ninja weapon to. In the IDS most of weapons are made out of Ancient Metalum (a extremely powerful metal which is hard to replicate and usually mined because of that) infused with magic and energy to form Power Metalum and added with magical enchantments, or in the case of JCU, divine (granted by Kami) blessing. Ranged weapons, especially lighter ones, are also commonly used
As for the tools of the IDS Ninja there should be mentioned that smoke bombs are mostly replaced by though-activated smoke dispensers, as well as most other gas bombs that they once used. Instead of fire bombs advanced small homing missiles are used. EMP (technology-busting) bombs are also used. All poisons have been replaced by powerful destructive nanobots due to poison being useless against nanobots. Some magical potions are also used, if they are proven not to be defeated by nanobots. Finely grinned high-radiation powder of many kinds is also used. Passive detection equipment is also used to bolster the trained abilities of a Ninja to detect presences. I cloud go on, but the usual what Ninja's do is to adapt to the situation and take what is the most likely equipment they will need.
Trough not bad in IRS Ninja in IDS are primary spies, agents and assassin (just like they were in real life) trough some specialize in direct combat more then stealth.
Well feel free to go a little higher and more into detail with your character's ability and description if nothing else to make this more enjoyable and interesting to the both of us.
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Whoa, you really don't miss a beat do you. Alright I try my best
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Shinosaki Yakov, Male, 5062 Earth Years, 25 Chosen Appearance Age.
Human, Quarter-Russian, Quarter-Japanese, Half-Croatian
Major, Special Action and Reaction, Earth Defense Forces
And here is my CS. Now I wait for the finalization of your character and we can begin.
Human, Quarter-Russian, Quarter-Japanese, Half-Croatian
Major, Special Action and Reaction, Earth Defense Forces
Shinosaki Yakov was born to Ivan Shinosaki, his Russian-Japanese father, and Jela Mirobran, his Croatian mother, in the Russian Urban Area of Vladivostok. He lived a pretty normal childhood trough the many ships of the Northern Pacific Fleet Group were at the center of his free time and as he grew up his fascination with military ended in him enrolling in the local military High School and then to go on to Luna Military Academy on Moon. There on his second year of stay he made a sudden turn, in what were his dreams, when he meat SAR (Special Action and Reaction) leader at that time, Commander Lowen. Moved by the charisma and wanting to tell the same stories about daring action of Commander Lowen he quickly signed into the Special Action and Reaction training program and graduated as one of the six best in class. In the next centuries he and his unit were called into action from time to time and due to his natural talents as well as selfless will to sacrifice himself to complete the mission or save fellow unit members he quickly rose trough the ranks, usually around four missions had been enough for him to earn, with every right, a higher rank. Even after becoming an unit commander his leadership skills, good navigation trough the waters of EDF hierarchy and other assorted abilities allowed him to continue rising all the way to the rank of Major. Now he was temporarily taken out of his unit and added as one of the team leaders in the operation.
Yakow is a open person which, due to the nature of his job, is serious in many cases, but will accept humor and other non-seriousness from fellow soldiers without problems as long as it doesn't affect the mission. He is hard to read but when in a relaxed environment and with not threats around he lowers his guard enough for some of his inter thoughts and emotions to show on his face. Otherwise her is a pretty normal person with love for rock music, VR (virtual reality) and nanodeck (holodecks which use nanobots) shooters and a hobby of collecting paper books (books if not digital in the IDS are printed on plastpaper, a heavily paper-like plastic
Skills
Close quarters combat - EDF+SAR combined arts of close quarters combat (own body+short blades) commonly known as Special Close Combat Technique.
Marksmanship - pretty much every gun that can be carried in the middle to high range of skill. Focused on small arms.
Tactical unit management, special operations focus - just like the name says this is the skill for commanding units in special operations.
Passive stealth - passive stealth methods like sneaking, climbing over walls or silent kill methods.
Toll proficiency, special operations, military - the skills needed to operated tools used by special operations and military.
Engineering, vehicle mechanics, hover & tracked - the engineering knowledge and skills related to vehicles suspended by hover or tracks. Some knowledge can be applied to similar suspension systems.
Hacking - basic knowledge of IDS grade hacking and usage of hacking tools. Includes the skill to understand and use magical tools to destroy magic looks.
Basic IDS military strategy - basic understanding of military strategy of the IDS.
Basic First Aid - the procedures and understanding of basic means of first aid, bandages, instant healing solutions, radiation cleansing and so on.
Piloting, smaller crafts - skill to pilot smaller crafts, in Yakov's case especially atmospheric ones.
Skills
Close quarters combat - EDF+SAR combined arts of close quarters combat (own body+short blades) commonly known as Special Close Combat Technique.
Marksmanship - pretty much every gun that can be carried in the middle to high range of skill. Focused on small arms.
Tactical unit management, special operations focus - just like the name says this is the skill for commanding units in special operations.
Passive stealth - passive stealth methods like sneaking, climbing over walls or silent kill methods.
Toll proficiency, special operations, military - the skills needed to operated tools used by special operations and military.
Engineering, vehicle mechanics, hover & tracked - the engineering knowledge and skills related to vehicles suspended by hover or tracks. Some knowledge can be applied to similar suspension systems.
Hacking - basic knowledge of IDS grade hacking and usage of hacking tools. Includes the skill to understand and use magical tools to destroy magic looks.
Basic IDS military strategy - basic understanding of military strategy of the IDS.
Basic First Aid - the procedures and understanding of basic means of first aid, bandages, instant healing solutions, radiation cleansing and so on.
Piloting, smaller crafts - skill to pilot smaller crafts, in Yakov's case especially atmospheric ones.
Weapons:
Mark X Colt Model 103.0 Energy Pistol + Mark X Colt Model 103.1 Anit-Energy Pistol
This two guns are the most standard of all IDS technological weapons and utilize ab Antimatter Solid Form 1 (also know as Super-Dense Antimatter/SDAM which is a non-natural man-made form) micro-reactor to produce devastating blasts of energy or anti-energy (anti-energy annihilates with ordinary energy producing a powerful blast of magic). Through ineffective against anything that has even a miniature amount of magic or MagiTech shield/armor the pistols are still a nice last ditch weapons for self-defense, or a useful tool to clear forest/jungle areas of vegetation and angry natives.
FN PDW 10
The FN's PDW 10 is a powerful gun in a small package and is especially effective against all kinds of light armored targets. Feed by a 30 or 50 bullet magazine the PDW 10 can fire contact explosive or penetration explosive rounds, filled with advanced MagiTech explosives which can even defeat medium armor, in less then a second (full burst setting of the gun). Unfortunately anyone with an Ancient or Power Metalum armor will be completely unaffected by the PDW 10 without at least a dozen people shooting at them with the PDW 10. For a fast reload the gun is also equipped with a robotized loading system for up to two magazines (those two can be attached to the sides of the gun) and semi-robotized (the user needs to bring the magazine close to the gun) for more then two.
H&K Solution 241 MagiTech Assault Rifle
The Solution 241 is a powerful MagiTech Rifle which fires Ammunition 1.83 Alloy (1.83 is the % of Ancient Metalum in the alloy) medium-caliber rounds at speed of 1/10000 c (roughly 30,000 m/s, 3 km/s or 88 times the speed of sound) up to 8 km in distance with attached scopes. It has 36 bullets standard or 60 bullets with an extended magazine. It can defeat most light vehicle armor and almost any personal armor with ease. It also supports homing bullets of the same caliber.
Infantry AT Missile Type 2 UC SPARROW Launcher System
This small and portable three re-loadable missile system is the marble of UC missile and miniaturization technology. Roughly the size of a now-a-days shotgun this systems fires UC SPARROW (a UC build-system which uses advanced guidance, avoidance, countermeasures, artificial intelligence, propulsion, target analysis and acquisition, sensor, armor penetration & drilling, baiting and numerous other systems to guide missiles to where they hurt the most) missiles on the locked target in a fire and forget manner and is able to knock down all but the hardest and best designed enemies inside of a single reload. This is also one of the rare weapons that pretty much is used by every special operations unit of almost all IDS countries.
Armor:
KP (Kralj Protection/from Croatia, Kralj means King but it is also a surname) Medium FBS (Full Body Suit) Model 5002
As it did for centuries most of EDF's soldiers turn to KP for protective suits, and currently the elite special ops used Light, Medium and Heavy FBSs of the Model 5002. This newest model has been improved by additional shielding, a new improved Power Metalium (the quality of the process of infusing magic into Ancient Metalum to create Power Metalum has been improved) boosted by a new powerful enchantment and with the old missile shoulder pod replaced with an automatic MagiTech defensive beam emitter against missiles, bullets and infantry. Just like previous model a backpack was retained with minor adjustments to the dispensing mechanism for quick and in-battle access to needed items. The communication and computer equipment in the armor was also improved with new improved anti-hacking protocols and the ability to carry the newest space station grade AIs. Equipped with localized gravity manipulation equipment for increasing jump height or to gain foothold in an gravity free environment. Powered by a miniaturized Antimatter Crystal-Fueled Energy-AntiEnergy Annihilation Magic Converter Generator. One crystal provides maximal power output for 6 months, 2 days and roughly 4 hours, reserve 10 crystals. Completely capable of sustaining life in vacuum and in temperatures up to 2 million K.
Toshiba & Edison Stealth Solutions (TESS) Model 329 Active Stealth Generator]
An small attachable MagiTech device which is used to generate a multilayer stealth field over itself and the armor that it is attached to. Can use internal batteries (last roughly 24 hours) or an external power source. For use only on human or smaller sized objects otherwise power drain greatly increases.
Tools:
A variety of tools is contained within the FBS's backpack:
Welding torches, reserve ammo, tents, field bunks, remote sensors, nanodrones, first aid kits, MIR (Military Issued Rations), cooking equipment and so on, climbing equipment, pretty much everything needed for setting up a remote camp together with the basis EDF equipment like the mentioned climbing equipment. (This is usual in the EDF - team leaders carry camp equipment while others carry more firepower, computer, surveillance and other mission needed-equipment).
Mark X Colt Model 103.0 Energy Pistol + Mark X Colt Model 103.1 Anit-Energy Pistol
This two guns are the most standard of all IDS technological weapons and utilize ab Antimatter Solid Form 1 (also know as Super-Dense Antimatter/SDAM which is a non-natural man-made form) micro-reactor to produce devastating blasts of energy or anti-energy (anti-energy annihilates with ordinary energy producing a powerful blast of magic). Through ineffective against anything that has even a miniature amount of magic or MagiTech shield/armor the pistols are still a nice last ditch weapons for self-defense, or a useful tool to clear forest/jungle areas of vegetation and angry natives.
FN PDW 10
The FN's PDW 10 is a powerful gun in a small package and is especially effective against all kinds of light armored targets. Feed by a 30 or 50 bullet magazine the PDW 10 can fire contact explosive or penetration explosive rounds, filled with advanced MagiTech explosives which can even defeat medium armor, in less then a second (full burst setting of the gun). Unfortunately anyone with an Ancient or Power Metalum armor will be completely unaffected by the PDW 10 without at least a dozen people shooting at them with the PDW 10. For a fast reload the gun is also equipped with a robotized loading system for up to two magazines (those two can be attached to the sides of the gun) and semi-robotized (the user needs to bring the magazine close to the gun) for more then two.
H&K Solution 241 MagiTech Assault Rifle
The Solution 241 is a powerful MagiTech Rifle which fires Ammunition 1.83 Alloy (1.83 is the % of Ancient Metalum in the alloy) medium-caliber rounds at speed of 1/10000 c (roughly 30,000 m/s, 3 km/s or 88 times the speed of sound) up to 8 km in distance with attached scopes. It has 36 bullets standard or 60 bullets with an extended magazine. It can defeat most light vehicle armor and almost any personal armor with ease. It also supports homing bullets of the same caliber.
Infantry AT Missile Type 2 UC SPARROW Launcher System
This small and portable three re-loadable missile system is the marble of UC missile and miniaturization technology. Roughly the size of a now-a-days shotgun this systems fires UC SPARROW (a UC build-system which uses advanced guidance, avoidance, countermeasures, artificial intelligence, propulsion, target analysis and acquisition, sensor, armor penetration & drilling, baiting and numerous other systems to guide missiles to where they hurt the most) missiles on the locked target in a fire and forget manner and is able to knock down all but the hardest and best designed enemies inside of a single reload. This is also one of the rare weapons that pretty much is used by every special operations unit of almost all IDS countries.
Armor:
KP (Kralj Protection/from Croatia, Kralj means King but it is also a surname) Medium FBS (Full Body Suit) Model 5002
As it did for centuries most of EDF's soldiers turn to KP for protective suits, and currently the elite special ops used Light, Medium and Heavy FBSs of the Model 5002. This newest model has been improved by additional shielding, a new improved Power Metalium (the quality of the process of infusing magic into Ancient Metalum to create Power Metalum has been improved) boosted by a new powerful enchantment and with the old missile shoulder pod replaced with an automatic MagiTech defensive beam emitter against missiles, bullets and infantry. Just like previous model a backpack was retained with minor adjustments to the dispensing mechanism for quick and in-battle access to needed items. The communication and computer equipment in the armor was also improved with new improved anti-hacking protocols and the ability to carry the newest space station grade AIs. Equipped with localized gravity manipulation equipment for increasing jump height or to gain foothold in an gravity free environment. Powered by a miniaturized Antimatter Crystal-Fueled Energy-AntiEnergy Annihilation Magic Converter Generator. One crystal provides maximal power output for 6 months, 2 days and roughly 4 hours, reserve 10 crystals. Completely capable of sustaining life in vacuum and in temperatures up to 2 million K.
Toshiba & Edison Stealth Solutions (TESS) Model 329 Active Stealth Generator]
An small attachable MagiTech device which is used to generate a multilayer stealth field over itself and the armor that it is attached to. Can use internal batteries (last roughly 24 hours) or an external power source. For use only on human or smaller sized objects otherwise power drain greatly increases.
Tools:
A variety of tools is contained within the FBS's backpack:
Welding torches, reserve ammo, tents, field bunks, remote sensors, nanodrones, first aid kits, MIR (Military Issued Rations), cooking equipment and so on, climbing equipment, pretty much everything needed for setting up a remote camp together with the basis EDF equipment like the mentioned climbing equipment. (This is usual in the EDF - team leaders carry camp equipment while others carry more firepower, computer, surveillance and other mission needed-equipment).
And here is my CS. Now I wait for the finalization of your character and we can begin.
MegaraFoxfire The Shadow of Heros
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I edited my cs last night, hopefully its enough
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Well ... it cloud use some work but what the heck ... if you want you can do it during the few next days, you know add some details, polish it up and so on; I will say when our characters are not to subject to change anymore when the time comes OK?
So I will probably make the first IC post sometime in the next 24 hours. We shall begin, with many time skips included, from the boarding of CL "Istria" with some time for our pair to interact now that on the smaller starship they are forced to share the same small number of closely located rooms for Marines (for planetary assault operations) as well as the same food, exercise, shooting and other larger facilities since a CL would rarely have more then two of each larger facilities due to the vessel's limited size.
So I will probably make the first IC post sometime in the next 24 hours. We shall begin, with many time skips included, from the boarding of CL "Istria" with some time for our pair to interact now that on the smaller starship they are forced to share the same small number of closely located rooms for Marines (for planetary assault operations) as well as the same food, exercise, shooting and other larger facilities since a CL would rarely have more then two of each larger facilities due to the vessel's limited size.
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Alright sounds good.
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The IC is up. Oh and I hope that we both have fun! (Also don't forget to polish the CS!)
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CS is all ready to go I think. And I'll post as soon as I can;
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OK will be on for the next hour or so. I will still leave the characters open for editing if any of us gets the wish to add more details and "meat" to their character.
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Sounds good
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Due to many reason, the main being the general lack of will from my side to commit to the rebuild Guild after all my multiple player RPs died I will be decreasing my activity on the Guild. Sorry but I only have this and another in which I am participating and even that one is down to me, the GM and one friend. Even if I stay I will probably be to depressed by what the Guildfall did to this once rich community for roleplaying and thous not really all that hyped up for posting. If you still won't mind a post each 1-2 week then I cloud go on with this RP.
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I can do whatever you want me to do to help get your juices back.
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