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Alright, thank you for your patience!

@Vita, that goes to you as well! :P I shoulda worked faster earlier instead of later
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Well, here it goes.

Name: Masaru Wu
Age: 15
Appearance: Let me read
Personality: Although Masaru was raised to be strong and brave, he instead took after his mother. Running off and immersing himself into books of any matter. Ranging from fantasy adventure to non-fictional physics books. He tends to block out the world in front of him. When he is engaged by others he keeps a friendly tone with them, but tends to want to shrink away back to his books. Masaru is a shy and caring boy. Only speaking when his sense of justice comes out, the one thing he inherited from his father.
Clubs: Literature Club
Brief Backstory: Masaru Wu is the second offspring of Qiáng Wu, the master of a Kung Fu Sword School. Being the eldest male, Masaru was expected to take over the school when the time came. Qiáng trained him everyday, but Masaru would run off at every opportunity. Disappointed in his son Qiáng forced him to contract a deity. After this event, Masaru moved to Japan to live with his mother, who is a secretary for a huge company.
Contract(s): Xuan Wu (God)

Contracted Beings:
Name: Xuan Wu
Type: God
Personality: Arrogant and fool hardy. Xuan Wu is a true warrior who takes action before asking questions. He lives the warrior path of training, and more training. He will never cower from any confrontation, and will fight until his last breath.
Powers: Contracting Xuan Wu gives Masaru enhanced strength, being able to lift up heavy objects and run thrice the speed of regular humans. His senses are enhanced, giving Masaru quick reflexes.
Fusion: When they both fuse, Masaru gains mastery of the sword, and elemental magic to fuse the blade with elemental magic. Giving the sword the property of fire, water, air, or earth.
Summon: In Order to summon Xuan Wu, Masaru must switch realms. The realm of the gods tax Masaru very heavily, and can only switch for a couple minutes. When Xuan Wu appears he is clad in copper armor, standing at 7 feet. A long black beard hides his face. His hair flows down past his shoulders. He wields a sword in his right hand, never letting it go. He is accompanied by a red snake and a black tortoise. Who are able to turn into either a sword or a shield for Xuan Wu to wield. When he is summoned into the realm of humans, Xuan Wu is able to manipulate the elements of fire, water, air, and earth by using different types of martial arts. Depending how synced Xuan Wu is with Masaru and what elements are present, he is able to manipulate the smallest drop of water to waves of water, spark of fire to sundering flames, grain of sand to ground shifts, a light breeze to a raging squall.
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Keeping the name, but most everythin else is gonna get a bit of a workaround :3

Humans:
Name: Avo Cassandra
Age: 18
Appearance: Our suave idiot
Personality: Avo is quite outgoing, and is always keeping his eyes peeled for people who look interesting. Avo himself, although talkative and is adventurous, doesn't have much going for how fun he is to be around. His social awkwardness is only hidden by his ability to make conversation and act casual around most of the people he meets. Now, thats not to say he gets along with everyone, but if he tries he can act like a friend to just about anyone who isn't blatantly trying to shove him away. However, he is a bit of a conspiracy-theorist, and tends to take a lot of things with a few grains of salt. He may act genuinely kind to most people, but he doesn't believe that most people want to be genuinely kind to him.
Clubs: Is trying to educate himself in the business club.
Brief Backstory: He IS the fire nation

Contracted Beings:
Name: Nuadha
Type: The (Undead) First King of Tuatha Dé Danann
Personality: Nuadha believes himself to be inferior to other gods, due to the loss of his physical arm, and is not very prideful. He is often bored and uses Avo as an outlet to entertain himself, and has no qualms against committing petty crimes or small acts of justice depending on which would be more 'suitable' at the time . Nuadha has an intense curiosity for other gods that have been contracted, and bothers Avos constantly about that and asks to know more about those who are like him. Whenever a mythical weapon is involved in something, however, Nuadha becomes extremely competitive and wishes to show off his own treasure.
Powers: Boost in physical prowess, able to lift hundreds of pounds. Plus, the ability to create and manipulate silver.
Fusion: 「 New and Improved 」 Avo takes on an appearance close to Nuadha. His physical strength is increased to the point where he can lift multiple tons, and he gains access to the Sword of Light . Which is also a conduit for silver, and the silver that is used through it gains a slightly yellow-ish hue, its destructive potency is boosted.
Summon: 【 The Real Hero 】. Avo loses the sword and it is returned to Nuadha, who can also use his silver arm as a conduit as well. Is able to take on other combat orientated gods in hand-to-hand combat.

This ok? Anythin needs to be fixed again, just send me the signal! Also pardon a few of the brackets i was tryin to add a little 'spice' :P
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@Erasmus: I think you need to elaborate on what control of the elements means.

@Tyrant: Hmm... power-wise and everything I don't see any issues. And he does appear to be a god in spite of references to him being a human king(which wouldn't be allowed), but then that comes up a lot in Irish Mythology it seems, eh-heh. So, accepted.

Edit: Actually, just how strong does he become for each level beyond basic powers?
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@Vita, too be honest I didn't really think that part out. Idk how strong he would be allowed to be, all I know is that Nuadha himself is a combative godking thing so he would probably be pretty strong, or at least, as strong as an average war-god? Idk about the fusion though. Do you have any suggestions i could take?
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Hmm, well. I don't know of any specific suggestions, but I think I'd try and keep it within the realms of, um... well, fusion would be powerful enough to, say, flip some large vehicles pretty easily. Full-on summon would probably be pretty dangerous strength-wise.

As I've established with Artemis, gods are strong. Since she's weak in terms of strength and can still pull a bow back hard enough to send the arrow she fires through a wall. So I'd suggest maybe strong enough to take on other gods in hand-to-hand(which probably would be a thing for most combat-leaning gods in this setting in one way or another, even if it's a hit-and-run kind of style).

Though keep in mind that other summons can fight gods(except the most powerful which probably won't be accepted unless the signup is very good).
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Alright, ill edit my cs a little and make sure to keep this in mind. Thanks for the help!
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No problem, I'm here to help, eh-heh.

Anyway, he looks good now. Accepted.
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I was thinking Avatar pretty much. Just the martial arts with the elements. None of the "I'm GOD" stuff.
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Hmm. elaborate a bit in your bio and you'll be fine, I think.
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Okay, I elaborated on his back story.
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I meant his powers. ^^;
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Oh, my bad. Haha
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There we go, all edited
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If you can just put the extent of his elemental powers into the bio it's done.
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There, I edited my CS.
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Tachi, can I get your review of my CS?
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Human:
Name: Alex Saervin
Age: 17
Appearance: Often has a book with him.
Personality: Academic, Polite, Intelligent, highly knowledgeable with a need to correct people that say anything incorrect. He is a kind soul that occasionally comes off as a bit of uptight and snooty.
Clubs: Book Club, Math Team, Masterminds (Quiz club), Chess Club, Library Volunteer
Brief Backstory: Has always been a high grade student, enjoying books in almost all of his free time, but he remains quite social and is more than happy to hang out with his fellow students. Also has grown quite proficient at using books as weapons to get dragons to shut up over the years.
Contract(s): Ao Rui

Contracted Being:
Name: Ao Rui
Type: Chinese Dragon
Personality: Ao loves being the center of attention, particularly the sort of wanting others to fall for him. Likely due to the influence of a previous Casanova contractor, he tends to go after the attentions of females. Being narcissistic, he revels in the chance to show off, and loves to be complemented. Despite being a feral creature, he keeps himself quite clean as to not put people off. He is a rather gentle soul, and grows quite attached to people who take some time to stroke his ego enough to gain his favor. Also, a little ego stroking often leads to him not shutting his big mouth about things, and thus a very bad dragon to trust with secrets. He gets easily bored when sitting still, and can often get rather mischievous to entertain himself.



Summon:
Partial summon: Smaller version of full summon.
Full summon: Durgon
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I'm interested, I'll have a CS up sometime in the near future.
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Finally done.
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